初三英语总复习英语写作指导

Englishwriting吉林市第五中学王和彬大作文—复习策略选题人物故事自己，家人，朋友，老师…学习提高学习的科目，遇到的困难和麻烦…健康生活疾病和卫生，食品健康…计划愿望暑假计划，学习计划…大作文—复习策略选题快乐成长个人爱好，兴趣…假日旅行计划要做的事情，旅游。情感表达对父母对老师感恩之情。大作文—复习策略选题环境保护志愿者活动，自然资源的保护…安全问题疾病和卫生，食品健康等问题。观点态度提建议、劝告、号召…大作文•课标中的写作评价案例：1、Myfavoriteseason开放性试题。考查学生的构思、信息组织和语言表达能力2、邀请某人去家里聚会，写一张便条，介绍路线、聚会内容等。半开放性试题。给出了提示，有要点，也有自由发挥的空间写作步骤1.审清主题：文章的中心、文体是什么。2.选择材料：材料为主题服务，量要充足。3.列好提纲：把材料整理得井然有序，计划好文章的整体结构。如：开头、结尾；分几段，用哪些材料等等。4.初写文章：语法正确、用词得当，语言地道5.检查修改：反复修改润色。6.准确抄写。关键—如何列好提纲•利弊型作文—Microblog的利与弊•Para1:（综述）withthedevelopmentofinternet…moreandmorepopular…•Para2:（利）First,convenient,anywhere,anytime;Second,share…with…;Last,expressviewsfree,money-free…•Para3:（弊）However,onecoinhastwofaces.Ontheonehand,awasteoftime—affectstudy;Ontheotherhand,notsafe—stolen,hurtfeelings•Para4:（个人）Asastudent,makegooduseofit.关键—如何列好提纲•表达出很多人不同看法或观点：1.Moststudentsthink…2.While…20%ofthemchooseto….3.Another15believe…4.Therearealsosome…sayingthat…5.Asastudent,Iagreeto…关键—如何列好提纲•解决问题型1.Recently,the…problemhasbeenmoreandmoreserious.…shoulddosomethingtosolveit.2.Firstly,…Secondly,…Finally,…3.Iamsureifeveryonecan…,the…willbecomebetterandbetter.常用连词•表示并列：either…or;neither…nor;both…and;notonly…butalso;•表示递进的：besides;what’smore•表示原因的：because(of)…;thanksto…•表示结果的：so;asaresult;so…that…;•表示目的的：sothat…;inorderthat/to…;•表示对比的：while;ontheonehand+ontheotherhand;Eachcoinhastwosides.;prefer…to…;wouldratherdo…thando…;常用连词•表示转折的：however;but;•表示举例的：forexample;forinstance;suchas…;like…;thatistosay…•表示总结的：inaword;last;•表示利弊的：begood/badforsb.;beharmfultosb.;doharmtosb.;…havegreat/muchinfluenceonsb.;sth.;affect;haveaneffectonsb.;•表示喜爱的：love/like/enjoy…;beinterestedin…;showgreatinterestin…;loseoneselfin…;putone’sheartinto…;begoodat;bepoorat;beweakin;常用连词•表达个人想法的：Ithink/believe…;(as)forme;inmyopinion/view;asastudent;fromthebottomofmyheart•其他：ingeneral;tobeshort;tobehonest;totellthetruth;asweknow;makeupone’smindtodo;inaway;inaword检查修改•用词方面是否正确•句子写的是否恰当•篇章方面是否严谨•细节方面是否准确举例•某报刊就Housework为题征文，请你投稿。•谈谈你经常帮父母做的家务，都有什么体会，并在今年的暑假里打算为家里做什么。•提示词：family,lotsofhousework,learntodo,help,parents,feelproudof举例审清主题•人称：第一人称•时态：一般现在时，一般将来时（个别使用一般过去时也可。）•主题：做家务•文体：记叙文举例选择单词材料•名词：chore,laundry,trash,livingroom,lifestyle,snack,party…•动词：try,keep,make,sweep,fold…•副词：sometimes,hardlyever,once…举例列好提纲•分段：文章分为三段1.开头，提出housework，强调青少年应该帮家长做家务。提出主题。2.正文，我是怎样做的以及我的体会。围绕主题展开文章。3.结尾，说明做家务是对父母表达爱；说明今年暑假的打算。升华主题。举例初写文章Everyfamilyhasalotofhousework.Inmyopinion,teenagersaresupposedtodosomehousework.举例初写文章Ioftenhelpmyparentsdosomehousework,suchassweepingtheflooranddothelaundry.Idohouseworkathomeeveryday.AndImakemyownbedafterIgetupat6everymorning.Ilikedoinghouseworkbecauseitcanmakemeliveonmyown.Spendingtenminutessweepingthefloorwhichistooeasyformecanmakemyparentsveryhappy.Ihopemyparentscanrelaxandbehappyathome.举例初写文章Summervacationiscoming,Iwanttolearnhowtocook.Iwanttocookforthem.Ithinktheywillfeelproudofme.人物故事类的一些句子感受•Shewearsglassesandoftengetsdressedindifferentstylesofclothes.•I’malwaysreadytohelpotherswhenthey’reintrouble.•She’ssokindandfriendlythatshemakesfriendswitheachofherstudents.•校团委准备在教师节举行征文活动，请根据提示，回想自己在学习生活中遇到的最喜欢的一位老师，以“MyFavoriteTeacher”为题，用英语写一篇100词左右的短文。•内容包括：1.对老师的相貌描写；•2.喜欢老师的原因：讲课好、与学生交朋友…•MyFavoriteTeacher•Everyonehashisorherfavoriteteacheratschool,andsodoI.Myfavoriteteacher,MissLu,isa30-year-oldyoungladyofmediumheight,withbigeyesandlongstraighthair.Shewearsglassesandoftengetsdressedindifferentstylesofclothes.Andabigsmilecanalwaysbefoundonherroundface.•Maybeyou’llwonderwhysheisconsideredasmyfavoriteteacher.Well,asourEnglishteacher,shedoesagoodjobinherclasses.Icaneasilyunderstandeverythingshetellsus.Anotherexampleisthatshe’ssokindandfriendlythatshemakesfriendswitheachofherstudents.Weliketoshareeverythingaboutourpleasureorproblemsinourschoollifewithher.•Allinall,IloveMissLusomuch.WheneverIthinkofher,astrongfeelingofjoycanalwaysfillmyheart!预祝大家考试成功！