如何润色英语作文

如何润色英语作文作文的核心任务：在15秒内取悦阅卷老师优秀作文应具备的六个基本特征：1、层次不乱2、句式多变3、亮点若干4、巧妙串联5、蠢错不犯6、整洁卷面作文上光第一招：肃清愚蠢语言错误13种常见的语言错误（1）主谓不一致FatherandIamgoingtovisither.Myuncleoftengotothecinemahimself.(2)时态、语态混用Themovieissogoodthatweallenjoyeditverymuch.Theoldmanknockeddownbythecarandinjuredbadly.(3)句子成分残缺Butthecarwhichpaintedreddidn’tstop.Theyoungmanrunninginthestreetfast.(4)习惯搭配乱用IverylikethenovelThenwesetoffdigging,plantingandwatering.(5)汉式英语Thecarisyellowcolor.Nextmonthhaveasportsmeeting.(6)名词单、复数不分HewillgiveusatalkonAmericanfilm.Heisoneofthebestplayerinourschool.(7)赘词现象严重Atlast,thelostboyreturnedback.Ononeday,hewenttothecinema.(8)用词不当Hedoesn’twanttosaysomethingaboutthismatter.Ihopeyoutohelpthegirlwithherhomework.(9)拼写和词形变化错误Thecarhittedtheoldmananddrivedaway.Onhiswaytoschool,hesewalittlegirl.(10)前后人称不一致Swimmingandfootballarehisfavoritesports,andhelikesitallhislife.Thelittlegirlusuallygoestoschoolat7inthemorning,buttodayhewaslateforschool.(11)分词作状语、逻辑主语不一致Havingheardthenews,herheartbeatfasterandfaster.Preparingdinner,thedoorbellrang.(12)动词原形作主语Walkisgoodforyouhealth.Drinkwinesisharmful.(13)一个简单句出现两个谓语Therewasnobus,wehadtowalkhome.Therearealotofstudentslikethismovie.LastsummerIgotoAmericaandstudiedatalanguageschool.Ihadmanywonderfulexperience,butIalsohadasadone.Oneday,theschoolheldparty,whereIinvitedtotalkaboutTianjin.AfterthattheyaskedmealotofthingsaboutChina.ButIcouldn’texplainthemwithEnglishclearly.Ifeltsadly.Ilearntalessonfromthisexperience.IhavealreadystudiedEnglishforeightyears,Ican’tuseitverygood.ImustworkhardtoimprovemyspokenEnglishsothatIwillnotbeabletocommunicatefreelywithforeigners.IhopeIcanbeabridgebetweenChinaandotherscountriesinthefuture.∧∧∧TheStoryaboutGrowthismyfavoriteAmericanTVplaybecauseitisveryinterested.Theplay76.tellshumorousstoriesthathappenintheGreen’s77.family.Withsuchstoriesitmakepeoplethink78.aboutlife,butthereforeattractstheaudience.Itis79.alsoawindowwhichwecanlearnaboutAmerican80.society.Andthereweremanymeaningfulthingsthat81.areworththinkof,suchastherelationshipbetween82.parentsandchildreninalotofAmericanfamily.It83.isquitedifferentfromthoseinChina.Theplayis84.verypopular.We’dbetternottomissthechance85.toenjoyit.s∧作文上光第二招：让句式多变起来1.长短句的变化Ifyouworkhard,you’llmakegreatprogress.Workhardandyou’llmakegreatprogress.Thathehadwonthegamedelightedhisparents.Hiswinningthegamedelightedhisparents.Afterhehaddonehishomework,hebegantoplaycomputergames.Havingdonehishomework,hebegantoplay…BecauseIdidn’tknowwhattodonext,Iwanttoaskyouforadvice.Notknowingwhattodonext,…ThoughhehaslivedinCanadaforthreeyears,hestillcannotspeakEnglishwell.HavinglivedinCanadaforthreeyears,he…2.主动式被动式的交替使用Peoplebelievethatitwillbepossibleformantoliveonanotherplanetinthefuture.Itisbelievedthatitwon’tbeimpossibleformanto…3.肯定式与否定式的交替使用Ishallgothereifitdoesn’train.Ishallgothereunlessitrains.Iwilltrymybestnottoletthemdown.Iwilltrymybesttoliveuptotheirexpectations.Hedidn’tpasstheexam.Hefailedtheexam.4.插入行成分的灵活位置利用However,theyrefusedit.Theyrefusedit,though.They,however,didn’tacceptit.5.正常语序与倒装语序的交替使用Wecanachieveourgoalinthisway.Onlyinthiswaycanweachieveourgoal.Ididn’trealizethefactuntilIgotback.NotuntilIgotbackdidIrealizethefact.作文上光第三招：适当使用复杂句主从复合句虚拟语气倒装句强调句非谓语动词结构并列句作文上光第四招：巧妙使用连接成分1.表示时间顺序的：atthesametime,afterward,allofasudden,atlast,finallythen.2.表示空间顺序的：above,around,beyond,ontheleft,oppositeto,inthedistance,nextto3.表示分析：asaresult,atlast,finally,furthermore,therefore,moreover,forinstance,Onthecontrary,inaddition,insummary,inanutshell,ontheotherhand,inthiscase.4.表示比较的：Besides,inthesameway,infactequally,similarly,inadditionto5.表示对比的：Differentfrom,onthecontrary,inspiteof,some…others,nevertheless.Notonly…butalso,theformer….thelatter,ontheonehand…ontheotherhand.6.表示选择的：either…or,neither…nor,ratherthan,insteadof,not…but.7.表示因果的：therefore,asaresultof,nowthat,aslongas,since,sothat,dueto/owingto,thanksto,onaccountof.8.表示总结的：tosumup,onthewhole,inall,briefly,inconclusion,insummary,inshort/brief,inaword,toconclude.---听说你中彩票了。---恰恰相反，我被罚了。幸亏你的及时帮助，我才顺利地通过了驾驶考试。一方面，我们需要工业，而另一方面，我又痛恨它带来的污染。总而言之，我们的国家还不富裕。这件衣服样子太老了，另外，颜色也不适合我。作文上光第五招：有选择地背诵经典句型一、开头句型1.Asfaras…isconcerned,2.Itgoeswithoutsayingthat…3.Itcanbesaidwithcertaintythat…4.Astheproverbgoes….5.It’slikelythat….6.I’mverygladtoreceiveyourletter.7.IhatetosayitthatIcan’tmakeitto….8.Whataninspiringpictureitis!二、衔接句型1.Asisoftenthecase,…2.Buttheproblemisnotsosimple.…3.Butitisapitythat….4.Inspiteofthefactthat….,they….5.However,….6.Inaddition,….7.Similarly,….8.Ashasbeenmentionedabove,…9.Onthecontrary,….10.Ontheotherhand,….三、举例句型：1.Let’stake…asanexample.2.Hereisonemoreexample.3.Thisoffersatypicalexampleof….4.Justthinkof….四、结尾句型1.Iwillconcludebysaying…2.Therefore,webelievethat…3.Witheverythingtakenintoconsideration,we4.Itmaybesafelysaidthat….5.Inshort,….6.Tosumup,…7.Inmyopinion,….8.Allinall,….9.Briefly,….五、常用谚语：Speechissilver,silenceisgold.Easiersaidthandone.Everymanhashisweakside.Honestyisthebestpolicy.Everycoinhastwosides.Oneman’smeatisanotherman’spoison.Loveme,lovemydog.Seeingisbelieving.Wellbeganishalfdone.When