CET-4作文讲解1(包括要求趋势评分样板顺序高分词汇句型)副本

CET-4作文讲解写作总论1.写作命题剖析大纲要求：写作部分要求考生用英语进行短文写作，思想表达准确、意义连贯、无重大语法错误。写作总论写作部分考核的技能是：A.思想表达1）.表达中心思想2）.表达重要或特定信息3）.表达观点、态度等B.篇章组织4）.围绕所给的题目叙述、议论或描述，突出重点5）.连贯地组句成段，组段成篇写作总论C.语言运用6）.运用恰当的词汇7）.运用正确的语法8）.运用合适的句子结构9）.使用正确的标点符号10）.运用衔接手段表达句间关系(如对比、原因、结果、程度、目的等)D.写作格式11）.运用正确的符合英语表达习惯的写作格式写作总论大学英语四级考试写作部分要求考生达到《教学要求》中的一般要求，即“能完成一般性写作任务，能描述个人经历、观感、情感和发生的事件等，能写常见的应用文，能就一般性的话题或提纲在半小时内写出至少120词的短文，内容基本完整，用词恰当，语意连贯。能掌握基本的写作技能。”写作总论2.四级写作评分原则和标准评分原则：1.CET是检查考生是否达到大学英语教学大纲规定的四六级教学要求，对作文的评判应以此要求为准则。2.CET作文题采用总体评分(GlobalScoring)方法。阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分(RewardScores),而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。3.从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。4.避免趋中倾向。该给高分的给高分，包括满分;该给低分的给低分，包括0分。一名阅卷人员在所评阅的全部作文卷中不应只给中间的几种分数。写作总论评分标准：本题满分为15分.共分五等：2-4分、5-7分、8-10分、11-13分及14-15分。2-4分条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或在部分句子均有错误，且多数严重错误。5-7分基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。8-10分基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当，多其中有一些是严重错误。11-13分切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。14-15分切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性好。基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错误写作总论注：1.白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想，则给0分。2.如题目中给出主题句，起始句，结束句，均不得计入所写字数3.只写一段者：0~4分；只写两段者：0~9分（指规定三段的作文）]WomenintheModernWorldWomenareplayinganincreasinglyimportantpartinsocietytoday.Intoday,manywomenhaveawork.Theyworkedaswellasmenplayinganimportantpartinfactories.Therearemanywomeningoveneralso.Theyleadotherpeoplecomtral,andmakeoutplans.Therearemanywomenscientistalso.Theyeventnewthingstoimproveourlife.Withthechangesintheirsocialrole,women’spositioninthefamilyhasbeenimprovedaswell.Inancient,women’spositioninfamilyispity.Theyhadtolooksaftertheirchildren,dideveryhowhusbandorderedhertodo.Butnowitischanged.Theyareequaltoherhusband.Theyhavetherightofspeakingofidea,discussionthingswithherhusband,dowhatshewantstodo.Inspiteofthesechanges,theliberationofwomanhasnotbeencompletelyrealized.Wealsoshouldrealize,women’slikertyarelimited.Forexample,manyfactorieswantmenbecomeitsworkersbutthechanceofwomenislessthanmen.Everyoneshoulddotheirbesttochangethiscondition.I’msure,theliberationofwomenwouldbeincreased.评分样卷(1)5分基本切题，表达不够清楚，连贯性差，有较多严重错误。Womenareplayinganincreasingimportantpartinsocietytoday.Moreandmorewomengotoworktoearnmoneyinsteadofkeepingthehouseorlookingafterthechildren.Womenhaveenteredmanyfieldsofsocietyincludingscientificfield.Asweknow,manywomensportsteamshavewontheworld’schampionsuchasChineseWomen’sVolleyballTeam.Withthechangesintheirsocialrole,woman’spositioninthefamilyhasbeenimprovedaswell.Husbandsarenotthemastersofwivesinmanyplaces.Husbandsandwifeareequalnow.Theyjointogethertoovercomedifficultiesandsharehappiness.Inspiteofthesechanges,theliberationofwomenhasnotbeencompletelyrealized.Alsoinsomeplaces,womenareconsideredbeing“things”belongtomen.Theyhavelittlechancetofindjobs.Theydon’tgetequalpayforequaljob.Thisisaproblemmustbesolvednotonlybysocietybutalsobywomenthemselves.WomenintheModernWorld评分样卷(2)11分切题，思想表达清楚，连贯。有个别句子结构错误及少量其他语言方面的错误Womenareplayinganincreasinglyimportantpartinsocietytoday.Manywomentodayareplayinganimportantpartatworksthatwasthoughtonlycouldbedonebythemenbefore.Forexample,somewomenarenotsecretaryintheoffice,instead,theybecomemanagerofacompany.Withthechangesintheirsocialrole,woman’spositioninthefamilyhasbeenimprovedaswell.Intheworldtoday,moreandmorewomenhavetheirownjobs.Theygettheirownsalary,andbecomemoreindependentfromtheirhusband.Withtheeconomicsituationimproved,theirfamilypositionisimproving.Inspiteofthesechanges,theliberationofwomanhasnotbeencompletelyrealized.Manyhusbandsonlywanthiswifetostayathome,anddosomeworksordosomeshopping.Theyonlywanttheirwifetobeahousewife,butnotamanagerofacompany.WomenintheModernWorld评分样卷(3)8分基本切题，思想表达尚清楚，基本连贯，有个别严重的语言错误及用词不当，但可以理解。Womenareplayinganincreasinglyimportantpartinsocietytoday.Inmanycountries,moreandmorewomenareactingasworkers,farmers,scientistsandevenleaders.Wecansaythatalmostalljobswhichmencandoaredoneperfectlybywomen.Womenarenolongerlookeddownuponbysociety.Withthechangesintheirsocialrole,women’spositioninthefamilyhasbeenimprovedaswell.Husbandandwifearenowequalinthefamily.Theycopewithproblemsofdailylifetogether,andsharehappinesswitheachother.Also,youcanhardlyfindoutthatintoday’sfamilies,womenarebeingbusywithdinners,whereasmenarecomfortablysittinginarmchairs,readingnewspapers.Inspiteofthesechanges,theliberationofwomanhasnotbeencompletelyrealized.Wealsoshouldrealizethatwomen’slibertyislimited.Forexample,manyfactorieswantmenastheiremployeesandthechanceofwomenisslimerthanmen.Everyoneshoulddotheirbesttochangethiscondition.I’msuretheliberationofwomenwouldbereached.WomenintheModernWorld评分样卷(4)14分切题，文章通顺，语言规范。句法有一定变化，用词适当。有个别小错，但不影响理解。写作总论3.四级写作命题规律与预测1）新：对传统的三段论式作文提出挑战，新的题型层出不穷。特别是2003年以来，先后考过交通事故目击证词、导游词等首次出现的题目，所以仅仅依靠背诵套句变得越来越行不通。需要同学们重视提高自己的真正写作水平，以不变应万变。2）综合能力考核：纯粹的记叙、说明或议论文的考核被同时考核三种能力的综合性题目所代替，如2003年9月份的考题，就要求考生在第一段叙述你的classmate生病或受伤的过程，第二段要求说明一下各方面对他的关心，第三段要求你对这个事件展开讨论。这要求我们要全面发展自己的写作能力，不可偏废。3）实用：实用文体的写作出现得越来越多，书信作文屡次出现，2004年6月还考了一篇导游词。这体现了四级作文对学生实际运用英语能力的关注，也是四级作文备考训练的重点之一。写作总论3.1最近几年四级考试作文题目2006.6VolunteersNeeded(应用文)2006.6.OnStudents’SelectingLecturers（论说文）2006.12.SpringFestivalGalaonTV(论说文)2007.6.Welcometoourclub（应用文）2007.12.WhatElectivestoChoose（论说文）2008.6.RecreationalAc