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（一）DearElli,I’maseniorstudent.IlikemakefriendswithpeoplebutIdomybesttogetonwelleveryone.ButinlastweekIfoundthatoneofmyfriendswroteinherEnglishdiarythatshedislikedmeandthathedidn’twanttobemyfriendanymore.NowshehasstartedtomakefunofmebecauseofI’mfat.I’mkindtoher,butwhycan’tshebefriendofmine?Otherproblemisaboutmyweight.ShouldIdolessexerciseorusepills?Anddoyouknowanyotherway?Pleasegivemesomeadvices.Yours,Mary（二）DearSir,IamnowacollegestudentatPekingUniversity.I’mquiteinterestedinthepositionofferingbyyourwebsiteforpart-timeEnglishreporters.IthinkI’mfitthejob.Asastudent,I’vereadalotandhavemanyknowledgeindifferentfield.I’mfondofEnglishanddowellinbothspeakingandwriting.Besides,I’measilytogetalongwithandIenjoyworkingtogetherwithanother.Aboveall,Ionceworkasareporterformycollegebroadcaststation.SoI’msureIcandothejobwellifIwillgetthechanceworkforawebsite.I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.（三）Haveyoueverheardfromthesaying:AllworkandnoplaymakeJackadullboy?Whatthismeansisthatifyoustudyallthetimesyouwillbecomeaboringperson.Youmustgooutandhavingfunwithyourfriends,otherwiseyouwilllosehim.Noonewantstobefriendswiththepersonwhothatonlyworksandstudies.Perhapsyouhaveaconfidenceproblem.Pleasetryrememberthattheworkyoudoisforyourselfratherthanforanyoneelse.Youdonothavetocompeteyourclassmates.Noonecanbehappierinstudyingsevendayandsevennightsaweek.（四）DearTracy，AlthoughI'm16yearsold，butmyfatherstilltreatsmeasacarelesschildren.Hedoesn’tvaluemyopinions.Heisverystrictwithmeandoftenpunishesmeaboutleavingthingslyingaroundinthehousewhilehedidthisalltime.Ithinkhefailstosetanexamplemetofollow.Butheoftensays：“DoingasIsay，notasIdo.”Evenworse，hepointsoutmypastmistakestoguests，makingmefeelhurting.Ilovemyfather,butIcan’tbearwhathedoes.Ihavebeentriedmanytimestotalkwithhebutheneverlistens.Please,helpme.（五）EverymorningStevewenttoworkbytrain.Ashehasalongtrip,healwaysbuysnewspaper.Ithelpsmakethetimepassingmorequickly.OneTuesdaymorning,heturnedoverthesportspage.Hewantedtoseethereportaboutanimportantfootballmatchthenightbefore.Thereportwassointerestingthatheforgottogetoffathisstation.Hedidnotknowitunlesshesawthesea.Hegotonatthenextstation,andhadtowaitalongtimeforatraintogoback.Itwasnodoubtthathearrivedlateattheoffice.HisbosswasangrywhenSievetoldtohimwhyhewaslate.“Workisveryimportantthanfootball!”,heshouted.（六）Whenmyfatherboughtmeacomputerasabirthdaygiftformeinlastyear,Ifeltveryexcited.Asweallknow,computersaregettingmoreandmoreusefullynow.Muchinformationcanbestoredinthem.Wecanalsolearnthathaslatelyhappenedintheworldontheinternet.Inpast,peoplehadtodolotsofworkwhichwasverydangerous.Now,but,computerscandoitinstead.Whenanexamiscoming,Ioftendidsomeexercisesonmycomputer.Thenitwillcorrectitandtellmetherightanswers.Inthiswayitisveryconvenientformetopreparetheexamthanbefore.Thecomputerhasbecomemyrealfriend.（七）In10thAprilthisyear,asLiMingwasleavinghishomeinthemorning,hegotintothelifttogetherawoman.Whentheliftgottothefourfloor,itstoppedandamiddle-agedmanenter.Oncethemangotin,hesnatchedthewoman’shandbag.HepulledbothLiMingandthewomanoutofthelift.LiMingrandownstairs.Whenhereachedforthegroundfloor,hesawthemanwalkedout.Hetoldthecaretakeratonceandtheybothfollowedthieftoarestaurantnearbywhichtheymettwopolicemen.LiMingtoldthemallaboutthecaseandthethiefhasfinallycaught.（八）OnedaylastweekIwentawalkinthecountry.Inthemorningtheweatherwaswellandthesunwasshining;theskywasblueandtherewerenocould.Soonacoolwindstartedblownandblackcloudswerecoveredthesunandthenitstartedtorain.Therewerenohousesinsight,butIgotverywet.Afterahourorso,Imanagedtocatchabuswhichtookmehome.ButwhenIarrivedIhasshiveringandIknewIhadcaughtabadcold.Imusthavetakenmycoat.Ihadnothingtodobuttostayathomeandwaitforadoctor.（九）Ivisitedmyauntinthecountrysidenearthecityinlastweek.Iwassurprisedtoseethatgreatchangeshadbeentakenplaceinthecountryside.Takemyaunt’sfamilyforexample.Wesupplyprecioustreesandflowerstothestoresinthecityandhaveovertenworkersworkingforthemselves.Theirfamily’sincomereachedasmuch100,000yuanlastyear.Noronlydidtheyhaveahouse,acarandcomputers,theycanalsoaffordatripabroadeveryyear.Whenaskingwhatelsetheyneededmost,theysaidthattheywantedtolearnafewEnglishsothattheycoulddobusinesswithforeignersdirectly.Totheirdelighted,mycousincanusethathehaslearnedfromuniversitytohelpthemwithoverseastrade.（十）Thankyouforyoure-mail!Youaskedmeaboutmyfriendsandhowweliketodo.Well,IguessIdowhatmostpeopletodo.Ilikereadingbooks,watchingfilmsandlistentomusic.Myfavouritesportisvolley-ball.Mostofmyfriendplayvolleyballtogetherwithme.Mybestfriendistwoyearselderthanme.Shegoestoadifferentschool,butwealwaysgettogetherafterschooltotalkandhavefuns.Wesometimesdohomeworktogether.Whataboutyourself?Tellmesomethingaboutyourself,yourfriendsandwhatyouliketodo.IhadalsoliketoknowsomethingaboutChina.WehavereadChinainschoolandIamveryinterestinginlearningmoreaboutit.Pleasee-mailmesoon!Lisa（十一）HereisaphotowhichI’vekeptformanyyears.Look,thechildinitisme.DoyouthinkitthatIwasverylovely?Yes.Yousee,Iwasmakingface.Therewasahatonmyheadwhiletherewerenoshoesonmyfoot.Iaskedmym