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Increasingthepriceofpetrolisthebestwaytosolvegrowingtrafficandpopulationproblems(两个问题要提出两个解决方案).Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?Whatothermeasuresdoyouthinkmightbeeffective?(第一句写背景)Thereisnodoubtthattrafficandpollutionfromvehicleshavebecomehugeproblems,bothincitiesandmotorways(高速公路)everywhere.(第二句点明自己的观点)Solvingtheseproblemsislikelytoneedmorethanasimpleriseinthepriceofpetrol.(第二段第一句肯定题目方案的有用之处，提高油价直接可以抑制私家车的使用数量)Whileitisundeniablethatprivatecaruseisoneofthemaincausesoftheincreaseintrafficandpollution,higherfuelcostsarelikelytolimitthenumberofdriversforlong(长久).(第二句承上启下，以“这个政策”开头，同时提出这样做的不可行性，从而否定这一观点)Asthispolicywouldalsoaffectthecostofpublictransport,itwouldbeveryunpopularwitheveryonewhoneedstotravelontheroads.(第三句转折，引出下一段，点明有其他更可行的方法)Buttherearevariousothermeasures(措施)thatcouldbeimplemented(实施)thatwouldhaveahugeeffectontheseproblems.(第一句点明，先说解决污染的问题)Ithinktotackletheproblemofpollution,cleanerfuelsneedtobedeveloped.(第二句说明可行的原因，因为技术已经支持电动汽车的生产)Thetechnologyisalreadyavailabletoproduceelectriccars(that说明电动汽车的好处)thatwouldbebothquieterandcleanertouse.(既然好，就要广泛采用，那么应该采取什么具体措施呢)Persuadingmanufacturersandtravelerstoadoptthisnewtechnologywouldbeamoreeffectivestrategyforimprovingairquality,especiallyincities.(第一句说明仅仅这样不能解决堵车问题，从而引出第四段对堵车问题的解决方法)However,trafficcongestion(堵车)willnotbesolvedby(对上一段的总结)changingthetypeofprivatevehiclepeoplecanuse.(既然不能解决，怎么做？)Todothis,weneedtoimprovethechoiceofpublictransportservicesavailabletotravelers.(第三句，举例论证)Forexample,ifsufficientskytrainsandundergroundtrainsystemswerebuiltandeffectivelymaintainedinourmajorcities,(因果论证，改写)thentrafficontheroadswouldbedramaticallyreduced.(第四句继续举例)Long-distancetrainandcoachservicesshouldbemadeattractiveandaffordablealternativestodrivingyourowncarforlongjourneys.Inconclusion,Ithinkthatlong-termtrafficandpollutionreductionswoulddependoneducatingthe(公众怎么做)publictousepublictransportmore,andongovernments(政府怎么做)usingpublicmoneytoconstructandrunefficientsystems.Itisimportantforchildrentolearnthedifferencebetweenrightandwrongatanearlyage.Punishmentisnecessarytohelpthemlearnthisdistinction.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagreewiththisopinion?Whatsortofpunishmentshouldparentsandteachersbeallowedtousetoteachgoodbehaviortochildren?(第一句写背景)Oneimportantstageinachild’sgrowthiscertainlythedevelopmentofaconscience,whichislinkedtotheabilitytotellrightfromwrong.(第二句thisskill开头承上启下)Thisskillcomeswithtimeandgoodparenting,(第三句点明自己的观点)andmyfirmconvictionisthatpunishmentdoesnothavemuchofaroletoplayinthis.(第四句同样是点明观点，反对题目的观点)ThereforeIhavetodisagreealmostentirelywiththegivenstatement.(具体情况具体对待)Tosomeextentthequestiondependsontheageofthechild.(第二句展开支持句具体举例)Topunishaveryyoungchildisbothwrongandfoolish,(举例解释)asaninfantwillnotunderstandwhatishappeningorwhyheorsheisbeingpunished.(既然惩罚不合适，那么可以改用奖励制度)Oncetheageofreasonisreached(承上启下)however,achildcanberewardedforgoodbehavioranddiscouragedfrombad.(thiskind指代“奖励制度”，与惩罚比较)Thiskindbutfirmapproachwillachievemorethanharshpunishments,whichmightentail(牵涉)manynegativeconsequencesunintendedbytheparents.(那么老师和家长应该怎么做)Tohelpachildlearnthedifferencebetweenrightandwrong,teachersandparentsshouldfirstlyprovidegoodrolemodelingintheirownbehavior.Afterthat,ifsanctions(惩罚)areneeded,thepunishmentshouldnotbeofaphysicalnature,(每个观点都要解释原因)asthatmerelysendsthemessagethatitisacceptableforlargerpeopletohitsmallerones–anoutcomewhichmaywellresultinthechildstartingtobullyothers.Norshouldthepunishmentbeinanywaycruel.(提出第二个可行方案)Rather,teachersandparentscanuseavarietyofmethodstodiscipline(管教)theiryoungcharges,suchasdetention(监禁，放学后留校),withdrawalofprivilege,andtime-out.Makingthepunishmentfitthecrimeisausefulnotion(观念),(举例论证)whichwouldseechildrenbeingmadetopickuprubbishtheyhavedropped,cleanupgraffiti(涂鸦)theyhavedrawn,orapologisetosomeonetheyhavehurt.(总结)Inthesewaysresponsibilityisdevelopedinthechild,whichleadstomuchbetterfuturebehaviorthandoespunishment.