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1.描述图画。2.推导绘画者的意图(寓意)。3.做出评论。写作技巧2014年辽宁高考(2014·辽宁高考)假定你是学生会主席李华。学校将举办一次以“校园生活·创意无限”(InnovationsonCampus)为主题的创意作品展评活动。请你根据以下图示,以短文形式用英语写一份书面通知。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当发挥,以使行文连贯;3.开头及结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。参考词汇:校园campus创意作品innovation颁奖prizegivingNoticeAnexcitingevent“InnovationsonCampus”isaroundthecorner.Comeon,everybody!It’syourshowtime.StudentUnion审题1.本文为图画作文。2.写一份书面通知。3.人称以第二人称和第三人称为主。4.时态以一般将来时为主。拟点1.对创意作品展评活动进行介绍并呼吁大家踊跃参加。2.介绍展评的要求及注意事项。3.用广告式的语言告诉大家“走过路过千万不要错过”。Anexcitingevent“InnovationsonCampus”isaroundthecorner.Weexpecteveryoneofyoutobepartoftheevent.TheeventencouragescreativemindsandgivesfullplaytoyourDIYskills.Notethatyourinnovationsmustbeschoolthings.Alongwithyourwonderfulinnovation,youneedtohandinareport,explainshowdoestheideaoccurtoyouandwhatmaterialsyouuse.考生习作1AllthecollectionswillbeonshowfromJune16to18inthegym.Lookingforwardtotheprizegivingceremony?Sure!It’llbeheldfrom15:00to17:00onJune18.Sodon’tmissthechanceofbeingthewinner.Yourcontributionwillcertainlymaketheeventhugesuccess.Foranyquestions,callLiHuaat44876655.Comeon,everybody!It’syourshowtime.StudentUnion考生习作2阅卷现场(1)Weexpecteveryoneofyoutobepartoftheevent.(2)TheeventencouragescreativemindsandgivesfullplaytoyourDIYskills.第(1)句换被动Everyoneofyouisexpectedtobepartoftheevent(1)(2)两句再合并为限制性定语从句Everyone…eventWhichencourages…skill(1)+(2)EveryoneofyouisexpectedtobepartoftheeventwhichencouragescreativemindsandgivesfullplaytoyourDIYskills.Alongwithyourwonderfulinnovation,youneedtohandinareport,explainshowdoestheideaoccurtoyouandwhatmaterialsyouuse.阅卷现场改为非谓语一句双谓无连词是错误:explains改为explaininghowtheideaoccurstoyou宾语从句语序为陈述阅卷现场阅卷现场Yourcontributionwillcertainlymaketheeventhugesuccess.抽象名词具体化一件事aAnexcitingevent“InnovationsonCampus”isaroundthecorner.EveryoneofyouisexpectedtobepartoftheeventwhichencouragescreativemindsandgivesfullplaytoyourDIYskills.Notice佳作赏析1Notethatyourinnovationsmustbeschoolthings.Alongwithyourwonderfulinnovation,youneedtohandinareport,explaininghowtheideaoccurstoyouandwhatmaterialsyouuse.佳作赏析2AllthecollectionswillbeonshowfromJune16to18inthegym.Lookingforwardtotheprizegivingceremony?Sure!It’llbeheldfrom15:00to17:00onJune18.Sodon’tmissthechanceofbeingthewinner.Yourcontributionwillcertainlymaketheeventahugesuccess.Foranyquestions,callLiHuaat44876655.Comeon,everybody!It’syourshowtime.StudentUnion佳作赏析3
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