公开课_高三英语写作课件

英语书面表达EnglishCompositionWriting[写作内容]1.以约30词概括上文的主要内容。2.以约120词就“制定规划与达成目标”这一主题进行议论，内容包括：(1)海狸修水坝的故事给你的启示是什么？(2)请结合你的生活经历阐述“制定规划与达成目标”之间的关系。[写作要求]1.作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事．也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。[评分标准]概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯Beaversareverydiligentdam-builderswhocanbuildextremelygooddams.However,theysometimesdon’tknowwheretobuildthedamsorwhichdamsshouldbefixedonlybecausetheyhavenoconsciousnesstomakeaplan.Thebeavers’storyillustratestheimportanceofplanning.Withoutaplanthebestintentionsandeffortswillnotproduceresults.Weshouldn’tworkblindlybuthaveaclearideaofourpurpose,theactionsneededtoachieveit,andhowtheseshouldbeordered.Asajuniorstudent,IachievedconsiderablesuccessinlearningEnglishthroughthecombinationofhardworkandplanning.Ipreparedgoodmaterialswiththehelpofmyteacher,madeplansformydailystudyandself-monitoredthewholeprocessofmylearning.Imaderapidprogressandbecameveryconfident.IthinkIcouldn’thavedoneitwithoutagoodplan.Diligenceisakeytosuccess,butinmyopinion,goodplanisalsoessential.Throughplanning,wecandevelopcleargoals,findmoreefficientandeffectivemethodsandthushavemoreopportunitiestoreachourgoalsthanthroughhardworkingalone.AppreciateandlearnthethreewellorganizedcompositionsfromstudentsTheEssayWhatmakesagoodessay?DiscussionContentEverythingneededincludedwhichisrelatedtoyourview.(内容要完整)Structure*Goodbeginningandending(好的开头结尾)*Wellorganizedandsmoothlydeveloped(结构合理,行文流畅)*Properlinkingwordsbetweensentences1.Basedonthispassage,____________________,makingaplanbeforedoingsomethingisessential.2.____________,we’llcompleteourgoalwithareasonableplan.3.___________________________it’simportanttohaveaplan.asfarasIamconcernedOnthecontraryasfarasIamconcernedonthecontraryasaconsequence使用恰当的连接词UseproperlinkingwordsAsaconsequence4.Asanoldsayinggoes,“nopains,nogains”,_____________________,Ithink,onlybytakingpainstocompleteourgoalswithaplan,canweattainsuccess.5._________________,Ihaverealizedthevitalimportanceofastrongplan.howeverSincethenhoweverSincethenLanguage*NoChinglish(避免中文式英文)*NoGrammaticalmistakes(没有语法错误)*Withexactlyusedwordsandrelativelychangedsentencepatterns(词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化)Adoptavarietyofsentencepatterns使用较丰富的句式thispassage,asfarasIamconcerned,Somethingisessential.2.Withoutadetailedplan,Icouldn’tevenallocatemytimesensible,makingmeidleawaytheentirevocation1.BasedonmakingaplanbeforedoingAdoptavarietyofsentencepatterns使用较丰富的句式3.Formypart,Ithinkthatadetailedplanistoapersonwhatalighthouseistoaship.4.Inaword,beingastudent,weshouldlearnarule,thatis,aplanofvitalimportanceforustoachievesuccess.Adoptavarietyofsentencepatterns使用较丰富的句式5.Althoughbeaversarealwaysthesymbolofworkinghard,theirunplannedworkingarealwaysuseless,leadingtothewasteofboththeirtimeandsuperbability.6.Therefore,theconfinementtosuccessliesnotonlyinone’scapacityforsubstantialactions,butalsoinone’sadvancedplanningPleaselearntoYourcomposition项目自评他评1.书写工整吗？有没有乱涂乱划?2.句子开头注意大小写了吗?3.有没有注意标点符号?4将文章分段了吗?分成了几段?5有单词拼写错误吗?几个?6.有时态错误吗?误用了哪种时态?7.注意主谓一致了吗?8.有没有语态的错误?9.有没有使用关联词?使用得当吗?10.有没有词性的错误?哪一种?11.简单句表达正确吗?12.是否注意使用了复杂的句子结构?13.表达方式是否多样化?注意长短句搭配了吗?14.有没有用好词好句?用了哪些?书面表达评价表