Unit-1-Friendship-writing-课件

Unit1Friendshipwriting写作步骤1.Creatingamotivationtowrite2.Brainstorming3.Mapping4.Outlining5.Drafting6.Editing7.Revising3/101.CreatingamotivationtowritehavingaclearpurposeorreasontowriteTheletteronpage71.WhatproblemdoesXiaoDonghave?2.WhatisXiaoDongaskingfor?1.Heisnotgoodatcommunicatingwithpeopleandcan’tmakegoodfriendswiththem.2.Heisaskingforsomeadvicetochangethesituation.4/102.BrainstorminglistingalltheideasrelatedtothetopicIdeasWhy1.toaskpeopletheirlikesanddislikes1.tofindclassmateswiththesameinterests2.tojoinindiscussionsandshowinterestinotherpeople'sideas2.togettoknowdifferentpeopleandletthemseeyouarefriendly5/103.Mapping3.Mappingorganisingusefulideas1.changeyoursefbeconfidentalwayssmilesayhellotoeveryone2.improveyourselflearnmorecommunicatingskillshelppeople4.Outlining首段：开门见山，表明写作意图。在本段中，写信人应该先简单介绍自己，然后陈述事由，表明写信的目的及原因。DearXiaoDong,I’mgladtoreceiveyoure-mail.Youaskmesomethingabout___________(建议的主题）Thefollowingismyadvice.正文：委婉地提出建议及改进措施，或提出忠告。First,whynot...?Ifyoudothis,...Secondly,youshould/can...Then/Thatway,...Thirdly,itwouldbeagoodideaif...Bydoingthis,...末段：礼貌地总结并期盼对方的回复。Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideas______,andIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyouto_____________.YoursSincerely,...5.DraftingwritingaccordingtoyourmappingInmyopinion,youshould...Myopinionis...Ibelieveweshould…Idon’tthinkit’snecessaryto...Iadviseyouto...Wemustdecide...I’mafraidthat...Ithinkyoushould...Don’tworry...6.Editingpeerediting:offeringpraiseandsuggestionspickingoutmistakesself-editing:correctingmistakesimprovingtheletter7.RevisingrewritingyourlettersDearXiaoDong,I’mgladtoreceiveyoure-mail.Youaskmesomethingabouthowtomakefriends.Thefollowingismyadvice.Everyoneneedsfriends,sohowtomakefriendsisveryimportant.First,youmustbefriendlytoothersifyouwanttomakefriendswiththem.Then,lookafterothersmorethanyourself.Inmyopinion,trytomakethestrangerfeeleasy.Ifyouhavedifferentopinions,youcandiscusswithothers.Idon’tthinkit’snecessarytoquarrelwiththem.Finally,Idon’ttrustthosepeoplewholeaveyouwhenyouareintrouble,becauseafriendinneedisafriendindeed.Ihopeeverythinggoesonwellwithyou,andyou’llmakealotofgoodfriends.Yourstruly,MissWang14ThankYou!