2014届正反观点英语作文写作指导课件OK

对比观点题型写作基本步骤：１．仔细审题，列举大纲。２．围绕要点，写出句子。３．添加过度，确保连贯。４．先求正确，再求灵活。５．认真眷写，卷面整洁。现在正是春暖花开的春游时节。你校学生以“高三学生要不要参加春游活动”展开了讨论。请根据以下讨论结果，写一篇短文。并说明你的主张。６５％的学生认为３５％的学生认为１．应该春游１．不应该春游２．接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空气，有利健康２．高考临近，没有心情玩３．活动是精神放松，大脑休息，有利于学习３．春游耽误学习分四段写：Para.1.Introduction:引入主题句Para.2.Point1有一些人认为……Para.3.Point2另一些人认为……Para.4.Conclusion我的看法……Theoutlineofthewriting:写作基本步骤：第一：仔细审题，列举大纲。写作基本步骤：第二：围绕要点，写出句子。•1.gradethreestudentsofahigh/middleschool•2.Thereare65%studentsagreeit.•3.Have65%studentsagreeit.----65%ofthestudentsagreewithitbeinfavoroftheideabefortheidea•4.Theythoughtgospringoutingcantouchthenature.----TheythinkwecangetclosetonaturebygoingspringoutingGradeThree---Senior3students•5.Theythinkgoingspringoutingcanmakethembreaththefresh/fleshair.•呼吸新鲜空气（breathesomefreshair)•6.Itisbenefittotheirhealthy.Itisbeneficialtotheirhealth.•7.makespiritloose.精神放松（relaxoneselfrefreshoneself/makesbrelaxed•8.letourbrainhaveagoodrest大脑休息（resttheirbrains）Chinglish,即中式英语•9.begoodforstudyingbegoodforstudy•10.(1)Highexamwillcome.(2)Becauseofcollegeentranceexaminationiscoming.(3)Withcollegeentranceexaminationiscoming.------Withthecollegeentranceexaminationcoming.Keywords:高三学生（senior3students）春游(gospringouting）讨论（discussion）接触自然（beclosetonature）呼吸新鲜空气（breathesomefreshair）精神放松（relaxthemselves）大脑休息（resttheirbrains）高考临近（withcollegeentranceexaminationdrawingnear）没心情玩（don’tfeellikeplayingoutside）耽误学习(wastethetime)在我看来（inmyopinion…）Para.1.主题句的内容要明确具体，语言简洁，开门见山，句式力争多样性Introduction:（sample）ShouldSenior3studentsgospringouting?Wehavehadaheateddiscussion.巧用过渡句、过渡词，理顺文章的逻辑关系Opinionsaredividedonthequestion.Differentpeopleholddifferent/oppositeopinions.写作基本步骤：第三：添加过度，确保连贯。Point1:65%的人认为应该春游（亮明观点）Sentencepattern:Mostofus(about65%)holdtheopinionthat…,…ofthemareinfavoroftheideathat…About65%ofthestudentsarefortheideathatSenior3studentsshouldgospringouting.Reason1：接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空气，有利健康Sentencepattern:Theythinkitgoodtodosth……/sthdogoodtosthIntheiropinion,itisofgreatbenefittodosth……Eg:Theythinkitgoodfortheirhealthtobeclosetonatureandbreathesomefreshair.Reason2:活动使精神放松，大脑休息，有利于学习（注意：两个观点之间的连接）递进what’smore；besides;moreover;inaddition；furthermoreEg:what’smore,theycanrelaxthemselvesforawhileandresttheirbrainssothattheywillbemoreenergetic.Conclusion:小段总结，进一步亮明观点，前后呼应。•Eg:Theythinkitwilldogoodtotheirstudy.•Point2:３５％的学生认为不应该春游（亮明观点）•注意：使用过渡句，自然衔接句子和段落（承上启下）•Sentencepattern:•However,otherspreferto…•Someothershavejusttheoppositeopinion…..•Ontheotherhand….•Eg:Ontheotherhand,about35%ofthestudentsareagainsttheidea.•Reason1:高考临近，没有心情玩•Sentencepattern:•Theysay/believe/holdtheopinion…that….•Eg:Theysaythatwiththecollegeentranceexaminationdrawingnear,theydon’tfeellikegoinganywhere.•Reason2:春游耽误学习•（注意：两个观点之间的连接）Eg:Besides,theythinkgoingspringoutingwilltakeatleastadayoff.Theycan’taffordthetime.Theythinktheyshouldfixtheirattentionontheirstudy.ShouldSenior3studentsgospringouting?Wehavehadaheateddiscussion.Opinionsaredividedonthequestion.About65%ofthestudentsarefortheideathatSenior3studentsshouldgospringouting.Theythinkitgoodfortheirhealthtobeclosetonatureandbreathesomefreshair.what’smore,theycanrelaxthemselvesforawhileandresttheirbrainssothattheywillbemoreenergetic.Theythinkitwilldogoodtotheirstudy.onepossibleversionOntheotherhand,about35%ofthestudentsareagainsttheidea.Theysaythatwiththecollegeentranceexaminationdrawingnear,theydon’tfeellikegoinganywhere.Besides,theythinkgoingspringoutingwilltakeatleastadayoff.Theycan’taffordthetime.Theythinktheyshouldfixtheirattentionontheirstudy.Inmyopinion,I’dliketosaythatweshouldgospringouting.表示观点对比类写作作文模版Thetopicof①——（主题）isbecomingmoreandmorepopularrecently.Peoplehavedifferentopinionsonthisproblem.…ofthemareinfavoroftheideathat…Theyholdtheirviewforthereasonof(理由一）Whatismore，(理由二）。Moreover，（理由三）。However,…ofthemholdtheoppositeopinion./Peoplewhoareagainstitdon’tthinkso.Firstly,Secondly(besides),Thirdly(finally)，Inmyopinion，theformerissurelyawisechoice.影响高考英语书面表达得分的几个因素1.语篇信息是否完整2.行文是否连贯流畅，语言是否得体。3.是否使用高级词汇4.是否使用复杂句5.卷面整洁,书写工整表示观点对比类写作套语A.总起:Opinionsaredividedonthisquestion.Differentpeopleholddifferent/oppositeopinions.Peoplehavetaken/adopteddifferentattitudestowards…Peoplehavedifferentopinionsonthisproblem.Peopletakedifferentviewsonthisquestion.B.表达观点一:…ofthemholdtheopinionthat….…ofthemareinfavoroftheideathat…Peoplewhoarefortheideathink…C.表达不同观点之间的衔接:However,…ofthemholdadifferentview./…ofthemholdtheoppositeopinion.Peoplewhoareagainstitdon’tthinkso.However,everycoinhastwosides.Ontheotherhand,…peoplethink….D.结尾常用套语:Inmyopinion/Personally/Formypart…AsfarasI’mconcerned,…Inshort/inbrief/inaword,…表列举说明的关联词:•Firstly/Firstofall/Tobeginwith,....Secondly…Thirdly…•Inthefirstplace…Inthesecondplace…Inthethirdplace…•Finally/Lastbutnotleast,....表示递进、强调的关联词•....Besides/Apartfrom/What’smore/•Inaddition/Furthermore/oreover/•worsestill/tomakemattersworse…