My-Ideal-School-Life

MyIdealSchoolLifeIstudyinamiddleschool.Wehaveawonderfulschoollife,butIhopetohaveamoreenjoyableschoollife.I‘dliketohavemoreschoolactivitiessuchasballgames,swimming,drawingsinginganddancing.Inthisway,ourschoollifewillbemoreexciting.I’dalsoliketohavemoreschooltripstootherplacesbecauseIthinkwecanlearnalotfromtheexperienceoftravelling.Besides,wehavemuchhomeworkeveryday,soI’dliketohavelesshomework.Thisiswhatmyidealschoollifeislike.Iamamiddleschoolstudent.Wehavealotofhomeworkeveryday.IalwaysfeelverytiredsoI’dliketohaveadifferentkindofschoollife.Firstofall,I’dliketohavelesshomework.Next,I’dliketohavemoreschoolactivties.Forexample,I’dliketohavemoreoutings.Picnicsintheparkwillbefun.Wecanshareourfood.Howwonderfulitwillbe!Thelastbutnotleast,I‘dliketohaveaswimmingpoolintheschoolbecauseIenjoyswimmingalot.Iamreallyeagertohavethiskindofschoollife.Itismyidealschoollife.IamgoodatmystudyandIenjoymyschoollifeverymuch.However,Ihopewecanmakesomechangestoourschool.Forexample,I’dliketohavemorebooksandmagazinesinthelibrary.Itwillbenicetohaveabiggerlibrary.Iaminterestedinreadingallkindsofbooks.Besides,I‘dliketohavemoredisplayboardsintheclassroom.Wecanputupsomegoodworksofmyclassmatesonthedisplayboards.Inthisway,wecanlearnmorefromeachother.Itwillalsobehelpfultohaveamodernsciencelaboratoryinourschool.Weneedtodoalotofexperimentswhenwehavechemistryandbiologylessons.Howwonderfulmyidealschoollifeis!Wehaveawonderfulschoollife,butIhopetohaveamoreenjoyableschoollife.IalwaysfeelverytiredsoI’dliketohaveadifferentkindofschoollife.IamgoodatmystudyandIenjoymyschoollifeverymuch.However,Ihopewecanmakesomechangestoourschool.Firstofall,Thelastbutnotleast,Forexample,I‘dliketohave…I’dalsoliketohaveItwillalsobehelpfultohaveBesides,,soInthiswayhavemoreoutingsaminterestedinenjoy….alotWeneedtodoalotofexperimentswhenwehavechemistryandbiologylessons.moreschoolactivitiessuchasballgames,swimming,drawingsinginganddancingputupsomegoodworksofmyclassmatesonthedisplayboardscanlearnmorefromeachotherPicnicsintheparkwillbefun.Howwonderfulitwillbe!Itwillbemoreexciting.Itwillbenicetohaveabiggerlibrary.canlearnalotfromtheexperienceoftravelling.Thisiswhatmyidealschoollifeislike.Iamreallyeagertohavethiskindofschoollife.Itismyidealschoollife.Howwonderfulmyidealschoollifeis!有头有尾（保证语法正确尽量创新）整合课文中的素材（词汇、词组、句型）（避免较多语法错误）文章的逻辑过渡（连词）文中一定要出现点题句（与文章题目联接的紧密性）避免使用全篇简单句平常多积累语言素材（固定搭配、好词好句）