高三作文指导润色文章1

WorldExpocommemorativecoinsWhydoyouwanttohavethisWorldExpocoin?1.so---that2.too---to3.Itis---that---4.With---5.(Thereason)why---isthat---6.belikelyto/Itislikelythat---7.Itseemsthat---sb./sth.seemstobe/do8.Itneveroccurstosb.that---9.Only---10.Thereisnodoubtthat---11.havetrouble/difficulty(in)doing12.can’thelpdoing13.Themore---,themore---14.Thereisnopoint(in)doingsth.15.pastorpresentparticiples高三英语写作指导润饰词句，增加文采DearSirorMadam,Pleaselistentomyhope.I’maseniormiddleschoolstudent.IwanttobeanexchangestudentinEnglandsinceIwasachild.It’sthebestwaytoimprovemylanguage.Englandhasmanypalacesandchurches.Iwanttolivewiththehostfamily,IcanknowmoreabouttheEnglishculture.Icanmakesomefriendswithblueeyesandgoldenhair.Ithinkit’scoolandwonderful.Itcanopenmyeyesightareainthisway.That’smyheartwords.Pleaseconsiderit.Yoursfaithfully,LiHua评点：1.基本交代清楚了来信目的；2.没有分段3.没有运用过渡的连接词；4.表达方式单一，语句欠丰富，5.基本上没有高级词汇和句型；6.开头生硬,结尾处汉式英语较严重.Thefirstparagraph:Giveabriefself–introductionandmakeclearyourpurposeThesecondparagraph:Givereasonsorlistsomeadvantagesofbeinganexchangestudent.(containingfacts,data,examples,etc.)Thethirdparagraph:Expresswishesandgratitude.DearSirorMadam,Pleaselistentomyhope.I’maseniormiddleschoolstudent.IwanttobeanexchangestudentinEnglandsinceIwasachild.It’sthebestwaytoimprovemylanguage.Englandhasmanypalacesandchurches.Iwanttolivewiththehostfamily,IcanknowmoreabouttheEnglishculture.Icanmakesomefriendswithblueeyesandgoldenhair.Ithinkit’scoolandwonderful.Itcanopenmyeyesightareainthisway.That’smyheartwords.Pleaseconsiderit.Yoursfaithfully,LiHuaI’maseniormiddleschoolstudent.Iwanttobeanexchangestudent.I’maseniorschoolgirlwhowantstobeanexchangestudenttoEnglandforoneyear.It’sthebestwaytoimprovemylanguage.AsEnglishisbecomingmoreandmoreimportantinjob-huntingandcommunication,thereisnodoubtthatbeinganexchangestudentisaneffectivewaytosuccess.1.使用从句Iwanttolivewiththehostfamily,IcanknowmoreabouttheEnglishculture.ItislivingtogetherwiththehostfamilythatcanhelpmegetabetterunderstandingoftheEnglishculture.2.使用强调句InspiredbytheEnglishculture,I’mwillingtoseizetheopportunitytolivewiththehostfamilytoenrichmyknowledge.Livingwiththehostfamily,IcanhaveabetterunderstandingoftheEnglishculture.3.使用非谓语动词Iwanttolivewiththehostfamily,IcanknowmoreabouttheEnglishculture.Englandhasmanypalacesandchurches.（一般）Englandisalsoanancientcountrywithmanyculturalrelicsandfascinatingcastles.（高级）4.使用with的复合结构OnlybystudyingabroadinEnglandcanIbroadenmyhorizons.•Itcanopenmyeyesightareainthisway.5.使用倒装句,goingabroadisthebestwaytomasteraforeignlanguageassoperfectalearningcircumstanceisoffered.,itislivingtogetherwiththehostfamilythatcanhelpmegetabetterunderstandingoftheEnglishculture.,oneisboundtobenefitalotfromaone-yearstudylikethis.,EnglandisadevelopedcountrywherealotofjobOpportunitiesareinstoreforme.6、使用恰当的连接词Reasonsforbeinganexchangestudent:TobeginwithWhat’smoreInadditionTherefore1.ThereasonswhyIaminterestedinitarelisted________.2.Ihopeyoucan_______this______________andIwould______________ifyoucouldgivemeanearlyreply.3.I__________tovisitplacesofinterestinEngland.4.Iwill___________thisopportunityto_________________.5.Itisalsosaidthattheweatherthereis___________.7.运用高级词汇，提高表达层次asfollowstakeintoconsiderationbeverygratefulhaveadesiremakethemostofmakemyselfimprovedagreeableasfollowstake---intoconsiderationbeverygratefulmakethemostofagreeablemakemyselfimprovedhaveadesireDearSir,IamaseniorschoolstudentwhowantstobeanexchangestudentinEnglandforoneyear,soIamwritingtoapplytoyouforyouradmission._________________________________________________.___________,asEnglishisbecomingmoreandmoreimportantinJob-huntingandcommunication,thereisnodoubtthatbeinganexchangestudentisaneffectivewaytosuccess._________,ItislivingtogetherwiththehostfamilythatcanhelpmegetabetterunderstandingoftheEnglishculture._________,Englandisalsoanancientcountrywithmanyculturalrelicsandfascinatingcastles.OnlybystudyingtherecanIbroadenmyhorizons.___________,IwillmakethemostofthisopportunitytomakemyEnglishimprovedifpossible._______,_______________________________________________.IhopeyoucantakemyrequestintoconsiderationandIwouldbeverygratefulifyoucouldgivemeanearlyreply.yourssincerelyWangHuaThereasonswhyIaminterestedinitarelistedasfollows.TobeginwithWhat’smoreInadditionThereforeInawordoneisboundtobenefitalotfromaone-yearstudylikethis假如你是李明，本学期你们班级里从外省转来一名学生王华，他一时无法融入新的集体，感到苦恼，请给他写一封信，信中应该包括以下要点：1.分析原因。2.提出建议。DearWanghua,Youfeelupsetasyouareanewcomer,andyoucan’tgetfamiliarwitheveryonesoon.Ithinkyoushouldbeactive!Anyway,Iwilltrytohelpyou.Inmyopinion,youaretooshytotalktoyourclassmates.Maybethenewsurroundingsmakeyouuncomfortable.Nevergiveupyourselfandisolateyourself.Thefollowingaremysuggestions.First,youmustspeaktoothersandcommunicatewiththeothersmore.Second,don’talwaystrytoregardyourselfasanimportantoneintheclass,justrelaxyourselfanddisplayyourabilitiesfreely,thenotherswillbeawarethatyouareaniceperson.Inthisway,whenyoutryyourbest,youcanreallybecomeapartofourclass,Ithinkyouwillbepopularwiththeothers.Wishyougoodluck!YoursLiMingDearWanghua,