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EnquiriesaboutreceivedletterDearSirorMadam,Ihavereceivedyourconditionalofferyesterday,Iamveryhappyyouappreciateandgivemethechancetostudyinyourschool.However,theconditionofmyadmissionisthatmycumulativefinalmarkmustbe85%orhigher.Unfortunately,mycurrentmarkis81.7over100,andthereareonlythreecoursesleftinthelastyear,ourfinalgraduatedissertationonlytakeslittlepartinourmark.Iamafraiditwillbealmostimpossibleformetoreach85%.Ihavetoexplainthatgradingofourdepartmentisverystrictcomparedwithotherdepartmentinschool,Iknowmyacademicperformanceonundergraduatestudywasn’tsatisfying,andIamnotlookingforanexcuse.ButIhavefullconfidencethatIcantakeuptoyourgraduatecoursewell.Duringtheannualpractice,IgotanexcellentinComprehensivePracticeonEvent&ExhibitionandEvent&ExhibitionCognition,agoodinSpecializedinEvent&Exhibitions,thosepracticesgivemeabunchofexperiencesandinspiremypassionaboutevent&exhibition,makemewanttopursueinthisarea.Icompletelyrespectthatyouhaveastrictstandardofadmission,butIreallydon’twanttomissthechanceofstudyinginyourschoolsinceyourschoolisstronginMSCInternationalEventsManagement.Also,theschoolbadgeofthedeercompletelytouchesmyheartandimpressedme.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldconsidermyconditionalrequirement.Ibelievemyperformanceinthecominggraduatecoursewillproveyourchoicecorrect.ThanksforyourtimeandIapologizeforanyinconveniencesImighthavecaused.Yourssincerely