2013届高考英语一轮复习写作专题讲座课件 第07讲 高级词汇和较复杂结构的写作与训练

一、使用高级词汇词汇量能反映一个人知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标准。考生要想取得高分，就要强化使用复杂、高级的词汇。常用方法如下：1．多实少虚写作中多用specificwords，少使用generalwords，多用蕴含感情色彩的词语，少用中性词。如good指人时可用以下形容词替换：kind,honest,generous,selfless,brave,warmhearted,sympathetic,honorable,humorous,smart,gentle等；good指事物或事情时可用以下形容词替换：great,fantastic,splendid,marvelous,excellent,wonderful,meaningful,enjoyable,nice等。以下句子中的形容词虽然都可以用good代替，但远不如原句出彩。Ihopeeveryonecanhaveatime.Heisateacher.ThisisreallyaideatogoclimbingMountHuathisweekend.wonderfulwarmheartednice2．短语优先多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。Icannolongerbearthewayhespeakstous.→Icannolongerthewayhespeakstous.HewhatIsaidintheclass.→HewhatIsaidintheclass.putupwithdidn'tlistentoturnedadeafearto3．弃旧取新写作中要恰当得体地使用高中学过的、较长的词汇。Weallthesamechance.→Weallthesamechance(opportunity)．Wehavehomeworktodoattheweekend.→Wehavehomeworktodoattheweekend.havepossessalotofendless4．避免重复尽量避免过多地使用某一个单词，必要时选择使用其他恰当的同义词或词组来代替。Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherwatchingfootballmatches.→Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherwatchingfootballmatches.likesenjoysWe'vebuiltanewexperimentbuildingbesidetheoldoneandwe'vealsoalibrarywheretheoldplaygroundusedtobe.→We'vebuiltanewexperimentbuildingbesidetheoldoneandwe'vealsoalibrarywheretheoldplaygroundusedtobe.builtsetup二、使用较复杂结构1．在一篇文章中要适当地改变语法结构来增加文章表达方式的多样性。(1)改变时态和语态Thebellisringingnow.→Theregoesthebell!(2)使用名词性从句Itdisappointedeverybodythattheplayerwasbadlyinjuredinthefirstround.→Thefactthattheplayerwasbadlyinjuredinthefirstrounddisappointedeverybody.(3)使用较高级的状语从句Iwon'tbelievewhatyousay.→Nomatterwhatyousay,Iwon'tbelieve.(4)使用定语从句Thegirlisspokenhighlyof.Hercompositionwaswellwritten.→Thegirlwhosecompositionwaswellwrittenisspokenhighlyof.(5)使用虚拟语气Youdidn'ttakemyadvice,soyoufailedintheexam.→Ifyouhadtakenmyadvice,youwouldn'thavefailedintheexam.(6)使用倒装句Somevaluablebooksandmycreditcardsareinit.→Initaresomevaluablebooksandmycreditcards.(7)使用强调句型Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper.→Itwasnotuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperthatheknewwhathadhappened.2．改变句子开头的方式。不要一味地采用“主语—谓语—宾语”的文法语序。可以适当地把一些成分(如状语)提前，放在句子的开头，这样使整个句子读起来跌宕起伏，增加书面表达的表现力。WemetattheschoolgateandwenttotheHongxingFarmtogetherearlyinthemorning.→EarlyinthemorningwemetattheschoolgateandwenttotheHongxingFarmtogether.Theyoungmancouldn'thelpcryingwhenheheardthebadnews.→Hearingthebadnews,theyoungmancouldn'thelpcrying.3．通过整合的方式，把几个松散的句子用一定的连接方式连接起来，也可以对所学的英语句式加以简化，使写出来的句子更加准确、得体、简洁、灵活。Wehadashortrest.Thenwebegantoplayhappily.Wesanganddanced.Sometoldstories.Someplayedchess.→Afterashortrest,wehadgreatfunsinginganddancing,tellingjokesandplayingchess.