历年高考书面表达题高三英语课件

Howtodealwiththewriting书面表达年度内容文体形式1994写关于举办晚会欢迎美国朋友的通知应用文广播稿1995看图指路，说明去野餐的路线说明文书信1996根据表格中的内容介绍自己应用文求职信1997看图写关于交通违章的经历记叙文故事1998看图写参观农场记叙文日记1999看图介绍学校的变化应用文书信2000看图写交通事故报告应用文报告2001根据表格提供的信息写回信应用文书信历年高考书面表达题假设你是李华，在美国探亲。2000年2月8日清晨，你的目击一起交通事故。警察局让你写一份材料，报告当时所见情况。根据下列图画写出报告。注意：1、目击者应该准确报告事实；2、词数100左右；3、结尾已为你写好。AbouttwominuteslaterIstoppedapassingcarandtooktheoldmantothenearesthospital.LiHuaNMET2000书面表达（满25分）2000年高考书面表达审题1、题材：一份书面材料，报告你所目击的一起交通事故的经过，为记叙文体2、主要时态：一般过去时，叙述描绘发生过的一起交通事故。3、人称：为“I”，第一人称。2000年高考书面表达要点（1）2000年2月8日发生了一起交通事故（2）我走在公园路（3）一位老人从街的另一边公园里出来（4）一辆黄车开过来在公园路转弯（5）黄车撞倒了老人并向西开跑（6）我记住了车牌号是AC864，并送老人去医院2000书面表达答案Itwas7:15inthemorningofFebruary8,2000.1_________IwaswalkingalongParkRoadtowardstheeastwhile2______anoldmancameoutoftheParkontheothersideofthe3____street.ThenIsawayellowcardroveupThirdStreetand4____makearightturnintoParkRoad.Thenextmomentthecarhitted5_____themanwhilehewascrossingtheroad.Hefellwithacry.Acardidn’tstopanddroveoffatgreatspeedheadingwest.6___Inoticedthedriverwasayoungwomanbut7________theplatenumberwasAC864.After8________twominuteslaterIstoppedapassedcar9________andbroughttheoldmantothenearesthospital.10________Lihuaonwhendrivehittheandaboutpassingtook√根据下面六幅图画的提示，写一篇短文Commentontheformercomposition:Onedayafterschool,XiaoMingturnedonatapandsplashedwaterhereandthere.Atthismoment,XiaoNonghapenedtopassby.XiaoMingsplashedhimwithwaterandmadehimallwet.XiaoMingranawaywithoutturningoffthetap.WhenXiaoNongsawthis,hewentoverandturnedoffthewater.Heangrybecausehethinkswatershouldn’tbewasted.Thenhewenthomeandwroteanotice.Heputituponthewallnearthetap.Aftersometime,XiaoNongwentbackandlookedthenotice.Hefeltsorryforwhathehaddone.2加was3thought4whichread“Savewater”.5sawAttention:1.改为happened并列选择原因结果时间比较转折递进举例总结Someofthediscoursemarkersand;aswellas;also;or;either—or;orelse;otherwisebecause;owingto;dueto;onaccountof;thankstoso;therefore;thus;asaresultwhen;soonafter;before;later;first;andthen;next;finally;afterwards.onthecontrary;ontheotherhand;likebut;yet;however;although;inspiteof;instead;besides;moreover;even;inadditionforexample/instance;suchas;thatis;namely;afterall;inshort;ingeneral;generallyspeakinginall,inawordCorrectthecompositions评分原则以及给分范围第五档（很好）：完全完成试题规定的任务（21-25）第四档（好）：完全完成试题规定的任务，漏掉1、2个次重点。（16-20）第三档（适当）：基本完成试题规定的任务。（11-15）第二档（较差）：末完成试题规定的任务。（6-10）第一档（差）：末完成试题规定的任务。只能写出与所给要求内容有关的一些单词。（1-5）0分：末能传达读者任何信息。Practice根据下列图画中Tom骑自行车的经历，用英语写一篇短文。短文要写得连贯、完整。字数100字左右。审题1、体裁：叙述Tom骑自行车的经历，为记叙文体2、主要时态：一般过去时，叙述描绘一起交通事故3、人称：第三人称Tom4、要点：记叙描绘文体，抓住四个要点：时间、地点、人物、事件的前后经过。词句文词：①torideabike②tohithisbikeandfalloff句：①Tomwasridingabikealongthestreet.②Thecarhithisbikeandhefelloffit.文：Theotherday,Tomwasridingalongthestreet.Suddenly,acarwasrunningtowardshimfastandhithisbike,thenhefelloffit.参考答案Theotherday,Tomwasridingalongthestreet.Suddenly,acarwasrunningtowardshimfast.Hewassofrightenedthathequicklyturnedtotheleftside.Butitwastoolate.Thecarhithisbikeandhefelloffit.Whenthedriverrealizedthathehadcausedanaccident,hegotsuchafrightthathetookflightwithhiscar.Hewassoonoutofsight,leavingTomhelplessonthespot.Fortunatelyapasser-byhappenedtoseewhathadhappenedandrememberedthenumberofthecar.Hereportedthistothepolice.Nowthedriverhasbeencaughtandwillbepunishedforhiswrongdoing.Usualmistakes1.Makeatelephone:AreyouJack?Yes,Iam2.Welcometovisitourschool.Pleaseyouhelpmedoalittlething.3.IverylikestudyEnglish.Thoughhisbodyisn’tgood,butheinsiststocomehere.4.Iagainsthisidea.jointheconcert,dresssomeclothes.Ianregret.Inspiteofdangerousbecausehisabsent.Treatusfriendly.Prepareformoney.HOMEWORKThanksalot!Anycommentiswelcome!1.Playwithwater2.Splashwaterhereandthere/flowaroundontheground1.Passby/walkby/gopast2.Makehimwetbysplashing/splashhimwithwaterRunawaywithout/runaway,leaving1.Turnoff2.Beangry1.Writeanotice2.savewater3.putup1.Comeback/return/getback2.Feelashamed/besorry