高考英语书面表达模板江苏教育版高三英语课件

写作指导---现象解释Directions:forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopic:TheDayMyClassmateFellIll(orGotInjured).Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1）简单叙述一下这位同学生病（或受伤）的情况2）同学、老师和我是如何帮助他、她的3）人与人之间的这种相互关爱给我的感受是……Topic⑴Itsohappenedthat_______________________________________________⑵Justatthemoment,___________._________________⑶Itimpressedmemostbecause______________________________.⑷Whathappenednextwas_________________.⑸Atfirst,__________________________⑹Almostatthesametime,___________.________________________________________⑺What,smore,_____________________.onedaywewerehavinganEnglishclassinthelanguagelabmyclassmateLucynexttomefellunconscioussuddenly.herfacewassoredthatitseemedtobeburningmovingandunforgettablemyteacherphonedadoctor.agirlstudentwettedherhandkerchiefandputitonLucy,sheadsomestudentsmadeatemporarybed___________________________.⑻Asaresult,__________________.⑼AsIunderstand,______________⑽Ontheonehand,_______________.⑾Ontheotherhand,____________._______________⑿Therefore,___________________________.forLucybyputtingsomedeskstogether.Lucysooncametoherself.lovemakesabeautifulworldLucyisalwaysreadytohelpotherswewilltryourbesttohelpherwhensheisinneedweshouldloveeachotherandmakethisworldabetterplace.⑴指出事件发生在语音室。⑵引出要叙述的内容：同学Lucy突然生病。⑶用red,burning形象描述Lucy当时的情况。⑷概况事件给我的印象之深，为后文的具体描写作铺垫。⑸老师采取的措施。⑹一位女同学的行动。⑺另外一些同学具体帮助Lucy的行动。⑻大家对Lucy帮助的结果是使她Lucy苏醒，注意cometo的正确使用。⑼我对这件事情的看法:人与人之间的相互关爱使世界更美好。⑽站在Lucy的角度上谈自己的感受一。⑾换一个角度谈自己的感受。⑿结论：重申自己的感受。2、现象解释型题二Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteaneye-witnessaccountofatrafficaccident.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:假设你在某日某时某地目击一起车祸，就此写一份见证书。见证书须包括以下几点：1)车祸发生的时间及地点2)你所见到的车祸情况3)你对车祸原因的分析AnEye-WitnessAccountofaTrafficAccident⑴Itsohappenedthat___________________________.___________________.⑵Justatthemoment,_________________________⑶Itimpressedmemostbecause____________________.⑷Whathappenedwas________.⑸Atfirst,__________________________________________________.⑹Almostatthesametime,_________________________________________.⑺What,smore,_____________________________._____________.⑻Asaresult,__________________.____________________________⑼AsIunderstand,______________________________________________.⑽Ononehand,____________________________.⑾Ontheotherhand,___________________________.⑿Therefore,__________________________________onthemorningoflastSudayIwasonthewaytoschool.acarwasdrivingoutofastreetcornerthedriverdrovesofast.atragedyIsawawomanridingabikewithhereyeslookingupattheskyshewasknockedoffherbikebythespeedycar.thecargotoutofcontrolandranintoatreeontheroadsideboththewomanandthedriverwereinjuredseriously.boththedriverandthepasser-byareresponsiblefortheaccident.thedriverwasdrivingtoofastthewomanwassocarelesshadbothofthembeencarefulenough,thetragedycouldhavebeenavoided点评⑴指出车祸发生的时间与地点。⑵描写车祸发生前的情况。⑶继续说明车祸的发生前的情况，为车祸的发生做铺垫。⑷总体概括车祸的严重性：tragedy⑸描写车祸当时的场景一：一位妇女不专心骑车。⑹描写车祸当时的场景二：被车撞倒。⑺车祸发生当时的场景三：车失去控制，撞在树上。⑻车祸的结果：司机与骑自行者均受伤。⑼我对车祸发生起因的看法：双方都有责任。⑽车祸发生的原因一：司机车速太快。⑾车祸发生的原因二：骑车者不小心。⑿结论：假设二人都小心点，车祸将不会发生。4、现象解释型题四Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthefopic:HarmfulnessofFackeCommldities.Youshouldwriteatleast100wordsandyoushouldbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:1)目前社会上有不少假冒伪劣商品（fakecommodities）。为什么会有这种现象？2)举例说明假冒伪劣商品对消费个人、社会等的危害。I⑴Asisknowntoall,._____________⑵seemtogetaccustomedto.⑶Infact,__________________________________.____________________________________⑷Thereasonsof_______________________________lieinseveralaspects.⑸Firstly,_________________.______________________________⑹Secondly,_____________________________.⑺Thirdly,____________________________________________________________.⑻Finally,__________________._______________________________________⑼Asamatteroffact,__________________________________.⑽Ontheonehand,_____________________________________________._____________________________________________therearealotoffakecommoditiesinthemarketPeoplegetaccustomedtofakecommoditiesonmarketmorekindsandlargerquantitiesoffakecommoditiesareappearingaroundus.thisphenomenonfakecommoditiesmaybringgoodprofitsforproducers.ourmarketsupervisionisstillnotpowerfulenough.manyfakecommoditiesaremuchcheaperthangenuineonesmanyconsumersfinditdiffculttoidentifyfakecommodities.fakecommoditiesdogreatharmtopeople.fakecommoditieshaveposedaseverethreattothehealthydevelopmentofoursocialistmarket⑾Ontheotherhand,_________________________._________________________________________________________________⑿Therefore,______________________________________manyfakecommodities,suchasfakemedicines,mayharmtheconsumers’healtheventheirlivessomemeasuresshouldbetakentoeliminatefakecommoditiesassoonaspossible.点评⑴摆出现象，引出话题。⑵讲明事实，人们对假货司空见惯。注意onmarket和inthemarket之间的差别。⑶说明假货发展趋势，种类和数量越来越多。⑷inseveralaspects：自然合理地引起下文，说明原因。⑸原因之一：生产商牟取不法利润。⑹原因之二：市场监督力度不够。⑺原因之三：许多假货比较便宜。Manyfakecommodities注意语言的严密性，并不是所有的假货都便宜。⑻原因之四：许多顾客难以分辨真假。⑼说明作者观点，假货确实危害严重。⑽理由之一：假货泛滥，危害社会主义市场的健康发展。⑾理由之二：许多假货危及消费者的健康甚至生命。⑿得出结论，总结全文。