高日作业指导

WritingFundamentalsEnglishinDailyLifeAgendaThefirstassignmentThesecondassignmentThedeadline高级日常英语作业01(第1-4单元)高级日常英语作业02(朗读题)MyRoutineTripInstructions:FollowingtheexampleinUnit4,Activity6,Task2,writeabriefaccount(120-150words)describingyourroutinetriptoaworkplaceortoastudyplace.p.189NowIstudyattheuniversity,whichisinthetowncentre.Myhomeisontheoutskirtsofthetown,aboutoneandahalfmilesfromtheuniversity.ThereisaregularbusservicebetweenthetwobutIprefertowalkwhentheweather'sfine.Itisapleasantwalk,downhillalltheway!IttakesmeaboutfortyminutesandIspendthetimeenjoyingthepeaceandquietoftheearlymorningandthinkingaboutthedayahead.Ipassalovelyoldchurchonthewayandhavetocrosstheriver.Sometimes,ifIhavetime,Istoptochattooneortwopeopleontheway.Ifitisraining,Ihavetotakethebus.Thebusjourneyitselfisquickbutit’salongwalkfrommyhousetothebusstopandthenfromthebusstoptotheuniversity.Soitisactuallyquickertodothewholejourneyonfoot!Itischeapertoo.Thebuscosts54pence,whichisquiteexpensiveforsuchashortdistance…SomehelpfulwordsSubway/underground地铁Taxi/bus/bike/bicycle/motorbikehitchhiking搭便车Long-distancebus长途客车Regularbus班车Shuttlebus往返巴士Markingcriteria本课程作业为短文写作，满分为100分，分为语言（50分），内容（40分）、和结构或格式（10分）三部分，三部分分值相加即为作文的总分。语言50分用词巧妙，词汇丰富，表达手法灵活多变，写作技巧精湛，明显超出普通水平。语法结构严谨。40分用词正确，能灵活运用多种表达手法，偶有选词错误。语法结构一般。30分（及格）用词能力稍差，表达手法单一，选词有较明显错误。语法结构需较多改进。20分用词较差，表达手法单一。文中时用汉语词汇或拼音。选词有明显错误。语法结构急需改进。Example1Iusuallyleavemyhometomyworkingplaceatabout7:40am.Itisnotashortdistancebetweenmyhomeandworkingplace.Ineedtakeovergroundandundergroundtubetomyoffice.BatongLineistheovergroundoneandairconditioned.Itrunsevery3minutesatpeaktimeandhaveanaveragejourneytimeof30minuteswithpassengerspackedlikesardines.AftergettingofftheBatongLineIchangedtotheLine1tubewhichistheundergroundtube.SomeofthetraininLine1arenotairconditioned,itissoterribleinthesehotdays.Ifoundaladybesidemefaintedbecauseoftheheataftertwentyminitesjourny.Icompaniedhergotoffthecarriageandaskedthetubestafftakecareofher.Fornotimeadmit,Icontinuedmyjourney.WhenIgottomyoffice,Ithoughtisitsoexpensiveofthetimetosurviveinthisbigcity.Example1Iusuallyleavemyhometomyworkingplaceatabout7:40am.Itisnotashortdistancebetweenmyhomeandworkingplace.Ineedtakeovergroundandundergroundtubetomyoffice.BatongLineistheovergroundoneandairconditioned.Itrunsevery3minutesatpeaktimeandhaveanaveragejourneytimeof30minuteswithpassengerspackedlikesardines.AftergettingofftheBatongLineIchangedtotheLine1tubewhichistheundergroundtube.SomeofthetraininLine1arenotairconditioned,itissoterribleinthesehotdays.Ifoundaladybesidemefaintedbecauseoftheheataftertwentyminitesjourny.Icompaniedhergotoffthecarriageandaskedthetubestafftakecareofher.Fornotimeadmit,Icontinuedmyjourney.WhenIgottomyoffice,Ithoughtisitsoexpensiveofthetimetosurviveinthisbigcity.Example2Iwalkedjoyfullyalongthepaththatwaslitupbythegoldenraysofthemorningsun.Beautifulflowersofmanycolorswereblooming.Howfragranttheysmelled!Littlebirdsweresinginginthetrees,asifgreetingme“goodmorning!goodmorning!”...myheartwasburstingwithhappiness..我愉快的走在小路上，金色的朝阳洒满大地，盛开的花朵五彩缤纷，香气袭人，小鸟在树上歌唱，好像在向我道早安，我幸福的心花怒放MainDifferencesbetweenEnglishandChinese1.narrationanddescriptioninChineseseemtobeabitmoreornateor“flowery”thaninEnglish2.ChineseandEnglish-speakingpeopleseemtolookdifferentlyontheuseofsetphrasesandexpressions.GoodEnglishwritingencouragesoriginalityanddiscourages“clichés”e.g.千方百计，七嘴八舌，三令五申ascoldasacucumber3.English-speakingwriterstendtobelessmilitantintoneandlanguagethanmostChinese.Theideaisto“letthefactsspeakforthemselves”.4TheyhavedifferentmeaningsofwordsRead读书cook做饭drive开车XLet’sgoandeatourmealsXHesangsongsattheconcertXIdon’tsmokecigarettesordrinkwine.5TheyhavedifferentwordformationsSuffix:er:work--workerwrite--writer员:教员,学员,演员ly：beautifully,greatly,wonderfully地:完美地,高兴地,匆忙地6Theydifferingrammar:Numberofnounse.g.Onebook,twobooks一本书,两本书们:人们,同志们,朋友们X猴子们,书们X三个人们7TheydifferinTenseandaspect:Work,worked,willwork(现在)工作,(过去)工作,(将来)工作progressive:正在Theyarehavinglunch。perfect:已经7Theyhavedifferentwordorders毛主席ChairmanMao劳动模范Modelworker东北Northeast衣食住Food,clothing,andhousing6)Useofverb我有点累了Iamabittired他的眼睛是蓝的Hehasblueeyes.8Differentwaysofthinkingandassociationofthoughtanddifferentculturalbackground.Youhavemysympathy.我很同情你(x你有我的同情)他老婆跑了.Hiswifeabandonedhim.(XHiswiferanaway.)Exercise:够意思!不过我的意思你还是收下,不要不好意思.Howkindyouare!ButIinsistthatyoushouldreceiveit.Don’tfeelembarrassed.Wrap-up本课程作业为短文写作，满分为100分，分为语言（50分），内容（40分）、和结构或格式（10分）三部分，注意汉英差异内容40分文章内容切题，内容充实，思维新颖见解独到，思想水平卓越。篇幅适当，行文流畅，有较强的可读性和趣味性。28文章基本切题，但思想表达能力有限，立意不清。篇幅较短。句子结构一般，有时意思模糊，理解较困难。可读性及趣味性较弱24文章大致切题。篇幅不够，句子结构较差Example1Iusuallyleavemyhometomyworkingplaceatabout7:40am.Itisnotashortdistancebetweenmyhomeandworkingplace.Ineedtakeovergroundandundergroundtubetomyoffice.BatongLineistheovergroundoneandairconditioned.Itrunsevery3minutesatpeaktimeandhaveanaveragejourneytimeof30minuteswithpassengerspackedlikesardines.AftergettingofftheBatongLineIchangedtotheLine1tubewhichistheundergroundtube.SomeofthetraininLine1arenotairconditioned,itissoterribleinthesehot