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一是以表格形式,将统计的数据或被说明的事物直接用表格形式体现出来,即统计表(table)。图表类说明文的类型比例“幸福感”的来源50%从父母或亲友的爱、从温暖的家庭中感到幸福30%从助人、捐赠、义卖中感到幸福10%从友情中感到幸福10%异于上述情况,从不同角度讲述自己的幸福评价:调查情况体现了同学们是热爱生活的,但同时也反映了他们生活面较窄、视野不够开阔。二是以图形形式A表示数据变化的曲线图(graph);0102030405060708091011B表示数据的大小或数量之间的差异的柱状图(barchart/graph);C表示总体内部结构变化的饼状图(piechart)DiagramD平面图、示意图、图底或外形图图表类写作步骤:一般分三步第一步:开门见山地点明本图表所反映的主题,包括时间、问题和对象。常使用的词汇有:survey,graph,chart,table,figure,describe,tell,show,indicate,reveal,demonstrate等。常用句型有:1.Last…,we__________asurveyamong…about…或Last…,asurveyabout…______________among…2.________theabovegraph/chart,wecanseeobviouslythat…3.___(正如)isshownbythegraph,therehasbeenarapidincreasein…或___canbeseenfromthetable,…FromAscarriedoutwascarriedoutAsExercises:1.上周末我校在2600名中学生中进行了有关“幸福感”的相关问题调查。Lastweekend,we____________________________“Thefeelingofhappiness”_______________________inourschool.2.从以上图表中我们可以明显地看出,…...。____________________wecanseeobviouslythat…3.正如从统计表中所看到的,龙川正在发生巨大的变化。____________________________________________________________________inLongchuan.4.正如曲线所示,最近5年来物价飞速增长。__________________________,therehasbeen________________priceinthepastfiveyears.carriedoutasurveyaboutamong2600studentsFromtheabovechart,Ascanbeseenfromthetable,arapidincreaseinAsisshownbythegraphgreatchangeshavetakenplace第二步:数据解读。分析数据间的主要差异及趋势,在描写数据间变化及总趋势特征时,可采用分类式或对比式以支持主题,并阐明必要的理由。注意层次。即factsandreasons。写好第二、三、四句。常用句型:一、描述上升:1.Thenumberof…(sharply/rapidly/slowly/slightly/gradually/steadily)increased(wentup/rose/grew)by(to/…%/twothirds/from…in…to…in…)2.Therewasagreat/slightincrease/risein3.…3.Statisticsshowa20%riseintrafficaccidentscomparedwithlastyear.Exercise:和去年同期相比,其销售额上涨了8.3%,达到1063亿美元。Sales______________8.3%toarecord$106.3billion________________thesameperiodlastyear.increasedbycomparedwith二、描述下降:1.Thenumberof…(sharply/rapidly/slowly/slightly/gradually/steadily)decreased(dropped/reduced/wentdown/fell)by(to/…%/twothirds/from…in…to…in…)2.Thestatisticsshowa20%fall(drop)intrafficaccidentscomparedwithlastyear.Exercise:统计数据表明,与去年相比房价下降了5%。(房价:housingprice)______________________________________________________________________________________Thestatisticsshowa5%fall(drop)inhousingpricecomparedwithlastyear.三、描述对比、倍数:常用转折,对比及倍数的词汇:while,onthecontrary,comparewith,but,however,bethesameas,besimilarto,beequalto,as…as…,behalfas…as,lessthan,morethan,betwice/threetimesmorethan…,be…times+theheight/length/widthof…1.Accordingtothesurvey,80%of…arequitesatisfiedwithit,while15%dislikeitand5%hadnoopinion.2.Thenumber/ratehas(nearly)_______(翻了一翻),asagainstthatoflastyear.3.Thenumberof…is__________________thatof….(是…的5倍)=Thenumberof…istimes____thanin…(比…多4倍)doubledfivetimesasmanyasfourmore常用句型:Exercise:如图中所示,他们的收入在1985年翻了一翻,总计为540元。Asisshownbythegraph,in1985their_________________,amountingto540yuan.incomedoubled四、描述平稳过渡、无变化:1.Thenumberof…stayedthesamebetween…and…2.Thenumberof…remainedthesame(steady/unchanged).常用句型:Exercise:1.有两个原因可以解释这样一种现象。Therearetworeasonsthataccountforthisphenomenon.第三步:总论。归纳总结或发表评论。常用表达:1.InmyopinionInmyviewPersonallyAsformyselfInconclusionInsummaryTosumupGenerallyspeaking2.Fromthefigures,wecandrawaconclusionthat…3.Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wecandrawaconclusionthat…_______________________________________studentshavepassionforlife,buttheylacklifeexperienceandbroadhorizons.比例“幸福感”的来源50%从父母或亲友的爱、从温暖的家庭中感到幸福30%从助人、捐赠、义卖中感到幸福10%从友情中感到幸福10%异于上述情况,从不同角度讲述自己的幸福评价:调查情况体现了同学们是热爱生活的,但同时也反映了他们生活面较窄、视野不够开阔。Fromthefigures,wecandrawaconclusionthat归纳总结或发表评论________①.Lastweek,wedidasurveyamong2,600studentson“Whoisyouridol?”._____②.ThesurveyshowsthathalfofthegirlschoosefilmandTVstarsasidols,while48%oftheboysfavorsportsstars.③.Asthedatashows,“parents”rankthesecondforthegirls,butthefourthfortheboys.④.However,thepercentageoftheboyschoosing“greatfigures”isthesameasthatofthegirls.________⑤.Asformyself,ThomasEdisonismyidol,becausehisinventionshavegreatlychangedourlife.范文剖析Step1Step3Step2点明主题包括时间、问题和对象数据解读,即factsandreasons归纳总结或发表评论:下图是我国近10年私人汽车拥有情况,反映了人们生活水平的变化.[写作内容]请根据以上数据,写一篇短文,包括以下内容:1.近10年我国私人汽车拥有量发生了巨变,变化情况如右图。2.理由:经济增长快,很多中国人想拥有私家车;在现代社会,许多中国人做生意需要车并能节约时间;3.随着汽车逐年的不断增加,在中国各个城市几乎都出现了如交通堵塞等许多社会问题。[写作要求]1.只能使用5个句子表达全部内容;2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。实践演练0102030405060708091011考虑句子之间和整个篇章的连接和连贯性,写出需要的连接词或短语。__________________________,greatchangesincarownershiphavetakenplaceinChinainthepasttenyears.Thenumberofprivatecarshasincreasedbymorethan5timesfromnearly3millionin2001toover15millionin2011.___________________________theeconomyofChinahasdevelopedsorapidlythatmanyChinesepeoplewanttoownprivatecars._______,inmodernsociety,manyChineseneedacartodobusinesssoastosavetime._____________,asthecarconstantlyincreasesyearbyyear,alargenumberofsocialproblems,suchastrafficjams,turnupinnearlyeverycitythroughoutChina.AscanbeseenfromthegraphIt’smainlybecauseBesidesInmyview非常喜欢:图片漂亮,激发兴趣;课文有趣、话题新颖;文化知识丰富、帮助了解世界。不喜欢:生词多、句子复杂、影响理解;未发表意见基础写作结论:新教材帮助大部分学生提高了英语水平。80%5%15%•IrecentlysurveyedmyclassmatesabouttheirviewsonthenewEnglishtextbook.Accordingtothesurvey,80%ofthestudentsarequitesatisfiedwithit,while15%dislikeitand5%hadnoopinion.Studentswholike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