12.投诉信

投诉信12.文体概述投诉信是人们在遇到一些不文明现象、所购商品质量差、售后服务不满意等情况下解决问题的一个方法。在语言方面，要注意把握分寸，要公平、公正。投诉信应包括三个方面的内容：1.表明写信目的，投诉的内容。2.投诉的具体原因。3.希望得到的结果。1.抱怨________________________2.表达不满________________________3.忍受________________________4.对……满意________________________5.糟糕的服务________________________poorservicecomplainaboutconvey/expressone’sdissatisfactionputupwith/bearbecontent/satisfiedwith常用语块6.采取措施________________________7.解决问题________________________8.预防……发生________________________9.调查此次事件________________________10.以粗鲁的方式________________________inarudemannertakemeasuresdealwith/solvetheproblemprevent…fromhappeninginvestigate/lookintothematter/incident11.向……道歉______________________12.出乎意料______________________13.不用说______________________14.尽快______________________15.把某事牢记在心______________________makeanapologyto…/apologizeto…outofone’sexpectationneedlesstosayassoonaspossiblebearsth.inmind1.我写信是投诉关于……2.这几年我对你们的服务都很满意，但是我写信是表达关于……的不满。2.Ihavebeencontent/satisfiedwithyourserviceforyearsbutIamwritingtoexpressmydissatisfactionabout…1.Iamwritingtocomplainabout…套用句式3.我对……不满意有一些主要原因。首先，……更糟糕的是，……最后，……3.TherearesomemainreasonswhyIamnotcontentwith…Atfirst,…What’sworse,…Eventually,…4.我真诚地希望你能认真调查这件事情，以及采取恰当的措施防止类似事件再次发生。5.你若能尽快采取措施处理这个问题，我将感激不尽。5.Iwouldappreciateit(verymuch)ifyoucould(takemeasuresto)solvetheproblem(assoonaspossible).4.Isincerelyhopethat/Itismysincerehopethatyouwilllookintothematterseriouslyandpropermeasuresshouldbetaken(topreventsuchanincidenthappeningagain).习作修改(做短文改错，背经典范文)DearSir,I’mwritingtoexpressmydissatisfactionaboutthemobilephoneofDephone-S250Iboughtin20thApr.2015atTeemall.Tendaysbeforethat,itdidn’tringorsenttextmessages.ThenItookthemtotheseller,butwastoldthatthemodelhadbeensoldoutandIhadtowaitatleastthreemonthforanewone.LaterIwenttotherepairman.onaftersenditmonthsHesaidsinceitwasanewmodelinChina,itwasimpossiblytofixitwithouttherightspareparts.Iwassodesperateonhearthat.WhatcanIwaitthatlong?Therefore,Isincerelyhopeyoucansendtomeanewoneofsamemodel.Iwouldgreatlyappreciateitifyoucouldtakemeasurestosolvetheproblemassoonaspossible.Sincerelyyours,BuManyiimpossiblehearingHow∧the作者写信向商家投诉，表达对所买手机的不满。1.in→on具体到某一天用介词on。2.before→after根据句子的逻辑意义，应该是“十天后”，故用after。3.sent→send与or前面的ring应保持一致。4.them→it指代所买的手机，应该是单数，故用代词it。5.month→months因为是三个月，故用复数形式。6.impossibly→impossible此处作表语，故用形容词。7.hear→hearing介词on后应接动名词形式。8.What→How根据句意应该是“我怎么可以等那么久呢？”故用how。9.去掉send后的to因为send是及物动词。10.在same前加the因为thesame属于固定搭配。假定你是李华，上周六，你有一次不愉快的就餐经历，对餐厅的服务员态度非常不满意。于是你给该餐厅老板写一封投诉信。要点如下：1.问题：牛肉面有苍蝇，服务员态度粗鲁。2.要求：餐厅赔礼道歉。注意：1.词数100左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。课堂练习DearSir,IamLiHua,afrequentcustomerinyourrestaurant.IhavebeenpleasedwithyourexcellentserviceforyearsbutnowI’mwritingtoexpressmydissatisfactionaboutthepoorserviceofyourwaiters.LastSaturday,IwenttoyourrestauranttohavelunchbutIhadanawfulexperience.Whenhavingbeefnoodles,Isuddenlyfoundthereweretwofliesinthem,whichdisgustedmealot.SoIaskedthewaitertochangeanotherdish.Outofmyexpectation,hedidn’tchangeitbutsaidinarudemannerthathewastoobusytosolvetheproblem.Needlesstosay,suchawayoftreatingcustomersisunacceptable.It’smysincerehopethatyoucaninvestigatethematterseriouslyandmakeaformalapologytome.Ilookforwardtoabetterservicenexttime.Sincerelyyours,LiHua假定你是李华，你在上周日搭坐102号公交车，该公交车司机的不文明行为让乘客很愤怒。于是你向公交车公司写一封投诉信。要点如下：1.司机的不文明行为(大声讲话、紧急刹车、态度粗鲁等)。2.希望尽快查清此事。注意：1.词数100左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。课外作业DearSir,IamLiHua.Iamwritingtocomplainaboutoneofyourbus-drivers’improperandrudebehaviors.LastSunday,IwastakingtheNo.102buswhosedrivernotonlykeptontalkingwithamanloudlybutalsodroveveryfast.Sosomepassengersadvisedhimtoconcentrateondriving,buthedidn’tpayanyattention.What’sworse,hedroveevenfaster.Thenanotherpassengercouldn’tbearit,askingthedrivertokeepthepassengers’safetyinmind.Butthedriverstoppedthebussosuddenlythatallthepassengersnearlylosttheirbalance.However,hedidn’tapologizebutsaidrudely“It’snoneofyourbusiness.”Isincerelyhopeyoucaninvestigatethisincidentandpropermeasuresshouldbetakentopreventsuchanincidenthappeningagain.Sincerelyyours,LiHua