译林英语模块四Unit3Writing-a-proposal(共28张PPT)

M4U3TaskLearnhowtodistinguishbetweenfactsandopinions.Learnhowtoaskforinformation.Learnthestyleofformalwriting.Writeaproposalforanewcomputerroom•Numbers•Names•Places•Events•Inmyopinion,…•I(don’t)believe/think(that)•Itseems(that)/lookslike…Afactisapieceofinformationthatisprovedtobetrue.Anopinionisafeelingorbeliefthatisnotcertainorproved.1.Chinahasatotallandareaofover9.6millionkm.2.On15thOctober2003,thefirstChinesepersonwentintospace.3.Ibelieveourpaintingisworthquitealotofmoney.4.Suzhouisover80kmawayfromShanghai.FactFactOpinionFact5.Itseemsthatpeoplepreferlivinginflats.6.Ithinkthatpeoplewholittershouldbefined.7.Mr.Wangcamehometofindhiscomputerbroken.OpinionOpinionFactTheeditoroftheschoolnewspaperReadtheletteronpage53andunderlinethesentenceswhichshowthefactsofthecomputerroomandtheopinionofthewriter.completethenotesheetbelow.Nameofthestudent:___________Class:__________Dateofvisittocomputerroom:__________________Computernumber:_______Problemswithcomputer:_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Solutiontried:_____________________________________________OtherProblems:_________________________________________________________________________suggestion:___________________________________CaoYingClass3,grade1Sunday,2ndMarchPCNo.7thekeyboardhavelettersmissing,themousesandmonitorsarenotfunctioningproperly.triedotherPCs,buttheywereinworseconditionoldandslow,sometimesdonotwork,notconnectedtotheinternet,printerdidnotworkneedtoupdatethecomputersandotherequipmentTime,frequency,reasons,problemsandrecommendationforimprovementareneededwhenweareinterviewingsomeone.Readtheguidelinesandthefirstfivepointsonpage54,andanswerthefollowingquestion:Whatinformationisneededwhenyouareinterviewingsomeone?Whatproblem(s)\haveyougotwhenyou…?ProblemsWhydoyou…?Forwhatreason(s)doyou…?ReasonsHowoftendoyou…?Howmanytimesaweek/…doyou…?FrequencyWhen/Whattimedoyouusually…?TimeWhatdoyouthinkcanbedonetosolvetheRecommendationAnswers:1.When2.Howoften3.Why4.Whatproblem5.WhatTheeditorinterviewingastudent1.intheafternoon2.threetimesaweek:Monday,Thursday,Friday3.forschoolwork4.keyboards,speed,memory,noInternetconnection5.buynewcomputersandnewsoftwareProblemSuggestedsolution2.Themonitors,keyboardsandmousesaretooold.3.Therearenotenoughcomputers.4.Thereisonlyoneprinter.5.Softwareisoutdated.6.ThereisnoInternetaccess.7.TheRAMandharddrivesaretoosmall.8.Itistoohotinsummerintheroom.9.Theroomclosestooearly.Theyshouldbereplaced.MoreshouldbeboughtMoreshouldbebought.Itshouldbeupdated.ComputersshouldbeconnectedtotheInternet.Theyshouldbeupdated.Air-conditioningshouldbeinstalled.Openinghoursshouldbeextended.Writeatoschoolleadersproposal•Itisaformalsuggestiontoanofficialpersonorgroup.•Purpose:topersuadesomeonetogoalongwithyourideaandputitintoaction.Whatisaproposal?DearXXX,......................................................................................................Yours(sincerely),Signature(签名)FormalInformalItgivesmemuchpleasuretoinformyou.I’mpleasedtotellyou.Everyconsiderationwillbegiventoyourrequest.Wewillthinkaboutwhatyouaskedfor.MrBrowninformedmeofyourdecision.MrBrowntoldmethatyouhadmadeupyourmind.Wearewritingwithreferenceto…Wearewritingabout…Wedonotanticipateanyincreaseinprices.Wedoexpectpricestorise.Wewouldliketotakethisopportunityto…Wewantto…DearSir,Recently,manystudentshavemetwithsomeproblemsinthecomputerroom,andtheyarenotinterestedinstudyingthere.Therefore,Iamwritingthisproposaltoyoutoexpressouropinionthatthecomputerroomneedsimproving.Theproblemsareasfollows.Firstofall,thecomputersthatweuseatthemomentareoldandslow,andtheyoftencrash,whichwastesalotoftime.What’smore,manykeyboardshavelettersmissingandsomemousesarenotfunctioningproperly.Inaddition,thecomputerstherearenotconnectedtotheInternet,sowecannotgettheinformationthatweneed.AsfarasIamconcerned,measuresshouldbetakentosolvetheseproblems.Ontheonehand,wehadbetterbuynewandbettercomputersandreplacekeyboardsandmouses.Ontheotherhand,IrecommendthatcomputersshouldbeconnectedtotheInternet.Inordertoprepareourselvesforthefuture,wereallyneedawell-equippedcomputerroom.Wehopeyouwilltakeoursuggestionsintoconsiderations.BestwishesAsupermaninSenior2ProblemsSuggestionsConclusionThebodyIntroductionContentStructureLanguageAGoodProposal•Isthisproposalwrittenformally?Apeer-editlist•Doeshe/shepresenttheinformationclearly,simplyandintherightorder?•Isthisproposalpersuasive?DearSir,Recently,manystudentshavemetwithsomeproblemsinthecomputerroom,andtheyarenotinterestedinstudyingthere.Therefore,Iamwritingthisproposaltoyoutoexpressouropinionthatthecomputerroomneedsimproving.Theproblemsareasfollows.Firstofall,thecomputersthatweuseatthemomentareoldandslow,andtheyoftencrash,whichwastesalotoftime.What’smore,manykeyboardshavelettersmissingandsomemousesarenotfunctioningproperly.Inaddition,thecomputerstherearenotconnectedtotheInternet,sowecannotgettheinformationthatweneed.AsfarasIamconcerned,measuresshouldbetakentosolvetheseproblems.Ontheonehand,wehadbetterbuynewandbetter