unit4-Wildlife_protection_(writing)_写作-保护动物

写作专题突破【写作要求】假如你是李华，上周日去动物园，看到游客对动物乱扔石子甚至往一头熊的头上泼水，对此你感到非常气愤。现在请你用英语就此事给某报社编辑写封信，并提出你的建议；请求该报帮着呼吁人们保护和爱护动物。要求：词数120左右。•【审题谋篇】•第一自然段为总写：写明写信目的，你的感受(应用一般现在时态)。•第二段：反映你的所见所闻，应用一般过去时态。•第三段：你的建议，应用一般现在时和将来时态。•最后一段：请求该报帮助。•本文应用第一人称；可以用first，second，but，even等词连接或过渡。•【写作要点】•1.我写信是要告诉你上星期天我在动物园的经历。•(1)____________________youaboutmyexperienceinthezoolastSunday.•(2)HereIwritetotellyouabout________________inthezoolastSunday.•答案：(1)I’mwritingtotell•(2)whatIsaw•2．有很多动物被养在动物园内，它们好像没有得到很好的对待。•(1)Thereweremanyanimals________________inthezooand________theywerenotbeingtreatedwell.•(2)Manyanimals________________andthey_____•___________treatedwell.•(3)______________manyanimals______________werenotbeingtreatedwell.•答案：(1)kept；itseemedthat•(2)werekeptinthezoo；seemednottobe•(3)Itseemedthat；keptinthezoo•3．首先要教育人们：动物是我们的朋友。动物对人们生活的重要性。•(1)Firstweshouldmakepeopleknowthat_________•___________and____________________.•(2)__________，weshouldtellpeople_____________animalsandthattheyareourfriends.•(3)_______________，weshouldmakepeopleknowanimalsareourfriendsandimportanttopeople’slife.•答案：(1)animalsareourfriends；importanttopeople’slife•(2)Firstly；theimportanceof•(3)Firstofal•4．任何虐待动物的人都要被罚款。•(1)____________________badlyshouldbefined.•(2)____________________badlyshouldbefined.•(3)____________________badlyshouldbefined.•答案：(1)Anyonewhotreatsanimals•(2)Whoevertreatsanimals•(3)Thosewhotreatanimals•5．我建议把动物放回到自然界去。•(1)Isuggestthat____________________innature.•(2)________________isthattheseanimalsshouldbesetfreeinnature.•(3)________________thattheseanimalsshouldbesetfreeinnature.•答案：(1)thoseanimalsshouldbesetfree•(2)Mysuggestion•(3)Itismysuggestion【连句成篇】________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________•【佳作欣赏】•DearEditor，•HereIwritetotellyouaboutmyexperienceinthezoolastSunday.Ifeelterriblysorryandashamedofwhatpeopledidtotheanimals.•Thereweremanyanimalskeptinthezooanditseemedthattheywerenotbeingtreatedwell.Isawmanyvisitorsthrowsomestonesatthemandsomevisitorsevenpouredwaterontoabigbear’shead.Somepeoplejustlookedandlaughed，butnoonethoughtthosewerewrong.Hereiswhatweshoulddo.Firstweshouldmakepeopleknowanimalsareourfriendsandimportanttous.Secondanyonewhotreatsanimalsbadlyshouldbefined.Last，ifpeoplecan’tstopdoingso，mysuggestionisthattheseanimalsbesetfreeinnature.Ihopeyoucanhelpeducatepeopletoloveandrespectanimals.Thankyou.Yourssincerely，LiHua【类文点津】写一封反映问题或提意见、征求意见的信1．一般书信体的组成：正式信件(多用于外交、商务、社交等场合)：开头(start)，一般用Dear或Dear＋姓/身份/职务等，如Deareditor，Dearmayor，orDearSmith.正文(body)：正式信件讲话要含蓄一点，用词要谨慎一些。结尾(ending)：Yourssincerely，Sincerely，Sincerelyyours，Yourstruly，Yoursfaithfully等较正式用语。•非正式信件(多用于亲友、同学、同事之间)•开头：Hi，Mydear；Dearest等。•正文：因彼此情谊笃厚，讲话可以直率一点、开门见山，意见要中肯。•结束语：Love，Cheers，Regards，Bestwishes，Yours等相对随便的词语。•2．常用表达：•反映现象的常用开头句式：•I’mwritingtotellyouthat...•Recentlywehavemadeasurveythat...•Manypeopleareworriedabout...•Itworriesmoreandmorepeoplethat...•提出措施的常用句式：•Weintendto...tohelp/save/protect...•Wearereadytocallonpeopleto...•Wefeellikedoing...toteachtheillegalhuntersalesson...•We’drathernot...butdo...•We’dliketo...topunishthosewhodoharmtowildlife.•征求对方支持的常用表达：•Weneedyoursupporttomademoreandmorepeople...•Wouldyoupleasehelpusto...by...?•We’llappreciateitifyoucan...•Inorderto...，weneed...•...sothat...•IhopethatIcangethelpfrom...•Iexpectthatyoucan...•Asweknow，thenumberofsome①wildplantsandanimalshasalready②decreasedandsomeanimalshavealready③diedout.Soitishightimeforusto④paymuch⑤attentiontowildlifeprotection.Buthowcanwepreventendangeredanimalsfrombeing⑥indangerofdisappearing？Firstly，weshould⑦protectthem⑧frombeing⑨hunted.It’sof⑩importancetoeducatepeopletoregardanimalsasourfriends.Thosewho词语串串练•wanttogetlarge⑪incomefromhuntinganimalsfortheir⑫furshouldbepunished.Secondly，somenature⑬reservesand⑭zonesshouldbeset⑮sothatanimalscanlive⑯inpeace.Itisalsonecessaryto⑰employsomepeopletolookafterthem.Onlyinthiswaywillanimalsnotbe⑱harmedmoreoften.Thirdly，thehabitofeatingthemeatofsome⑲endangeredanimalsshouldbegotridof.⑳Accordingtosomereports，somerestaurantsarestillservingsuchdishesnow.Thegovernmentshouldmakemore○21powerfullawstostopthis○22incidenthappeningagain.Ifso，thedayswhenallendangeredanimalsare○23at_the_mercy_ofhumanbeingswillbegone.Ifeveryonehasthesenseofprotectingwildlife，itis○24certainthatanatmosphereofwildlifeprotectionwill○25come_into_being.Thusahappy○26endingforbothhumanbeingsanwildlifewillappear.•正如我们大家所知，野生动植物的•数目已经减少，一些动物也已经灭•绝了。所以是时候我们该密切注意•保护野生动植物了。但是我们怎样能够阻止濒临灭绝的动物面临消失的危险呢？首先，我们应该保护它们免遭捕杀。教育人们把动物看作是我们的朋友很重要。那些想通过猎杀动物获取它们的毛皮而获得暴利(income收入)的人应该受到惩罚。第二，应该设立一些自然保护区和保护带，为•的是动物能够平静地生活。雇用一些人照看他们也是有必要的。只有这样动物才不会经常受到伤害。第三，应该摒弃吃濒危动物的习惯。据报道，有的饭店现在依然供应此类菜肴。政府应该制定更强有力的法律来阻止类似事件的再次发生。如果这样，濒危动物任人摆布(mercy仁慈；宽恕)的日子将一去不复返。如果我们每个人都有保护野生动植物的意识，那么保护野生动植物的氛围必然会形成。这对人类和野生动植物来说将会是一个幸福的结局。本部分内容讲解结束点此进入课件目录按ESC键退出全屏播放谢谢使用