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读写任务训练一、复习归纳Thewritertellsusthattheparentsaswellasthepupilandtheteachershoulddosomethingabouteducation.Tostartwith,parentsshouldprovidefriendlyatmospherefortheirchildrenbycommunicatingwiththem.Next,parentsshouldhelptheirchildrenbecomemoreindependent.Inaddition,childrenshouldbecomemoreresponsiblewiththehelpoftheirparentsastheygrowolder.Parents’HelpIsImportant•Idoagreewithwhattheauthorsays.Theparents,thepupilandtheteachershouldberesponsibleforchildren’seducation.Parentsshouldprovidetheirchildrenwithfriendlyatmospherebylisteningtotheirchildren,talkingwiththemandencouragingthemtofacedifficulty.WhenIwasalittlechildIoftenaskedmyparents’questions.Insteadofpayingnoattention,myparentsalwayslistenedcarefullytowhatIwassayingandtriedtoexplaineverythingbygivingmanyexamples.Tosumup,parentsareresponsiblefortheirchildren.Parents’helpisimportant.读写任务型写作模板标题第一段:第二段:第三段:请根据以上范文归纳读写任务型写作模板:概括所给短文内容要点[约60字]过渡词引出主题句---自己的观点---理由[约80字]总结句[约10字]•标题•标题是段落中心思想的精练表达形式。根据所写短文的内容,概括出中心思想然后加以提炼,拟定标题;•Istimemorevaluablethanmoney•OnSmoking•Howtomakefriends•Happiness•IswatchingTVagoodthing?•Myviewofmoney/time/pollution•Myattitudetowardbuildingacarfactory•…•第一段:概括所给短文内容要点•注意:利用原文中所给的语言材料,用自己的话来写;概括后的文章意思要通顺,行文要连贯。写作具体方法和要求:1.第一段概括要做到开门见山:例如:1)Accordingtothepassage,weknow…2)Thisarticleismainlyabout…3)Thewriterstatesthat…2.第一段要做到有层次感:必要时概括段中运用firstly,…secondly,…lastly,…或…but…,so…等来列出原文作者观点或内容。3.第一段概括要抓住要点,语言精练:Thewritertellsusthattheparentsaswellasthepupilandtheteachershoulddosomethingabouteducation.Tostartwith,parentsshouldprovidefriendlyatmospherefortheirchildrenbycommunicatingwiththem.Next,parentsshouldhelptheirchildrenbecomemoreindependent.Inaddition,childrenshouldbecomemoreresponsiblewiththehelpoftheirparentsastheygrowolder.Parents’HelpIsImportant•第二段:过渡词引出主题句---自己的观点---理由•开头用语:•Idoagreewiththeauthor…•Insomeway,Iagreewith…,but…•Thisopinionsoundsrightbutishardlypractical.•Itisdefinitelynotlikethat.Asamatteroffact,…•Frommypersonalanglealone…•Inmyopinion,…•Frommypersonalpointofview…•AsfarasI’mconcerned…•…•第三段[最后一段]:总结句开头用语:•Inconclusion,…•Inshort,…•Tomakealongstoryshort,…•Ingeneral,…•Inaword,…•Inbelief,…•Onthewhole,…•Allinall,…•…•Examples:•1)Allinall,thedevelopmentofchildrenisnotonlytheresponsibilityoftheirparents,butalsotheresponsibilityofthewholesociety.•2)Inaword,smokingharmsyourselvesaswellasyourneighbors,soitshouldbestrictlyforbidden.•3)Inconclusion,wevaluemoneybutcan’tputmoneyaboveeverythingelse.二、读写训练•读写任务•阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文•Letchildrenlearntojudgetheirownwork.Achildlearningtotalkdoesn’tlearnbybeingcorrectedallthetime;ifcorrectedtoomuch,hewillstoptalking.Henoticesathousandtimesadaythedifferencebetweenhislanguageandothers’language.Bitbybit,hemakestherightchangestomakehislanguagelikeotherpeople’s.Inthesameway,childrenlearntodoalltheotherthings.Theylearntotalk,run,climb,rideabicyclebycomparingtheirownbehaviorswiththoseofmoreskilledpeople,andslowlymaketheneededchanges.Butinschoolteachersnevergiveachildachancetofindouthismistakesforhimself,evenfewerchancesforhimtocorrecthimself.Theydoitallforhim.Teachersactasifthestudentwouldnevernoticeamistakeiftheydidnotpointoutittohim.Theyactasifthestudentwouldnevercorrectitunlesshewasmadeto.Soonhebecomesdependentontheteacher.Letthestudentdoithimself.Lethimworkout,withthehelpofotherchildrenifhewantsit,whatthiswordmeansandwhattheansweristothatproblem.•写作内容•1)概括短文的内容要点,该部分的字数大约60词左右•2)就“学生的学习错误该不该改正”这个主题发表你的看法,至少包括以下的内容要点,该部分的字数大约60词左右;•a)以英语学习为例,简述你学习过程经常出现的语言错误;•b)你是如何看待自己的语言错误;•c)你的老师如何对待你的语言错误;•d)你对老师的做法持什么看法?为什么?•写作要求•你可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的论点,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不要抄袭阅读材料中的句子。•评分标准•概括的准确性、语言的规范性、内容的合适性以及篇章的连贯性。•读写任务步骤:•(一)审读阅读材料[寻找作者的论点,论据和结论]•(二)概括原文观点[转述作者的论点,论据和结论]•(三)提出自己观点[赞成或反对]•(四)论证自己观点[用事例论证自己的观点]•(五)得出结论•审读阅读材料,整理短文说理思路(找出短文的论点,论据和结论):•1.论点:•Letchildrenlearntojudgetheirownwork.•任务(一)审读阅读材料•2.论据:•1).Achildlearningtotalkdoesn’tlearnbybeingcorrectedallthetime;ifcorrectedtoomuch,hewillstoptalking.Henoticesathousandtimesadaythedifferencebetweenhislanguageandothers’language.Bitbybit,hemakestherightchangestomakehislanguagelikeotherpeople’s.[正面论据]•2).Inthesameway,childrenlearntodoalltheotherthings.Theylearntotalk,run,climb,rideabicyclebycomparingtheirwonbehaviorswiththoseofmoreskilledpeople,andslowlymaketheneededchanges.[正面论据]•3).Butinschoolteachersnevergiveachildachancetofindouthismistakesforhimself,evenfewerchancesforhimtocorrecthimself.Theydoitallforhim.Teachersactasifthestudentwouldnevernoticeamistakeiftheydidnotpointoutittohim.Theyactasifthestudentwouldnevercorrectitunlesshewasmadeto.Soonhebecomesdependentontheteacher.[反面论据]•3.结论:•Letthestudentdoithimself.Lethimworkout,withthehelpofotherchildrenifhewantsit,whatthiswordmeansandwhattheansweristothatproblem.•任务(二)概括原文观点---客观简要地转述作者的论点,论据和结论:•论点Letchildrenlearntojudgetheirownwork.•=Letchildrenlearntodecideiftheyhaveanylearningmistakesintheirwork.•=Children’slearningmistakesshouldnotbecorrectedbytheirteachers.•=Thewritersaysthatchildren’slearningmistakesshouldnotbecorrectedbytheirteachers.•论据1).+2).Achildlearningtotalkdoesn’tlearnbybeingcorrectedal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