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句子润色Polishthesentences湛江二中范凌燕21Howtopolishsentences1Wordsandexpressions2SentencestructuresImprovewordsandexpressionsHeisagoodstudent.goodeasy-goingselflessconsiderategenerousdiligentintelligentpromisingoptimisticThisisagoodsuggestion.goodpracticalbeneficialpositiveconstructiveeffectiveRuleone:求实避虚原则Helikesplayingcomputergames.likebeinterestedinbefondofhaveapassionforbemadaboutbecrazyaboutbeaddictedtobekeenonbefascinatedbyTheInternetletuscommunicatewitheachotherconveniently.letenable…toallow…togivesbachancetodosthmakeitpossibleforsbtodo短语优先原则Ruletwo:Doingsportswillbegoodforyourhealth.begoodforbebeneficialtobeofgreatbenefittocontributetoRule3:弃旧用新原则1.求实避虚原则2.短语优先原则3.弃旧用新原则Bearinmind:词语的替换原则Exercise:1.SuddenlyIhadanideathatsomeonehadenteredmyhouse.2.Hespendsallhissparetimeinreading.3.PlentyofmemoryworkisundoubtedlyhelpfultoEnglishstudy.4.MostofthepeoplewhoareinterviewedlikewatchingTVathome5.Thegovernmentthinksitisimportanttomakepeopleknowthatweshouldprotecttheenvironment.6Somestudentsthinkthattheyshouldsavesomeoftheirpocketmoneyforbooks.7.Ihopeyoucouldconsidermyadvice.8.TheInternetisplayingamoreandmoreimportantpartinourlife.9.Itisdifficultformetogetalongwellwithmyclassmates.10.Ioncehadthesamedifficultyasyours.Exercise:1．SuddenlyIhadanideathatsomeonehadenteredmyhouse.→2．Hespendsallhissparetimeinreading.→3.PlentyofmemoryworkisundoubtedlyhelpfultoEnglishstudy.→SuddenlyanideaoccurredtomethatsomeonehadbrokenintomyhouseHedevotesallhissparetimetoreadingPlentyofmemoryworkwillundoubtedlycontributetoEnglishstudy4MostofthepeoplewhoareinterviewedlikewatchingTVathome5Thegovernmentthinksitisimportanttomakepeopleknowthatweshouldprotecttheenvironment.6Somestudentsthinkthattheyshouldsavesomeoftheirpocketmoneyforbooks.→ThemajorityoftheintervieweesprefertowatchTVathome.→Thegovernmentattachesgreatimportancetoraisingpeople’sawarenessofenvironmentalprotection.→setaside7.Ihopeyoucouldconsidermyadvice.→8.TheInternetisplayingamoreandmoreimportantpartinourlife.→Iwouldappreciateit/begratefulifyoucouldtakemyadviceintoconsideration/account.increasingly9Itisdifficultformetogetalongwellwithmyclassmates.10.Ioncehadthesamedifficultyasyours.→Ihavemuchtroubleingettingalongwell…Ifinditdifficulttogetalongwellwith…TherewasatimewhenIwasfacedwiththesamedifficultyasyoursImprovethesentencestructures1.Weshouldtakemeasurestosolvetheproblem.2.AlthoughIhadmanydifficulties,Ineverthoughtofgivingup.3.WehavealotofgoodstochoosefromontheInternet,sowecancomparethemeasily.4.ManypeoplethinkbirthcontrolisquitenecessaryinChina.5.Wedon'thavelifeexperience.Sowhenwemeetdifficultieswedon'tknowhowtodealwiththem6.Ihopeyoucancometothefestival,becauseitwillbeagreathonortous.7.Ifyousticktoyourdream,youwillrealizeit.8.Iamsurprisedathiswords.句子开头的替换1.Weshouldtakemeasuretosolvetheproblem.2.AlthoughIhadmanydifficulties,Ineverthoughtofgivingup.Aseriesofmeasuresshouldbetakentosolvetheproblem.Facedwithmanydifficulties/Despitemanydifficulties.被动句式非谓语，介词3.WehavealotofgoodstochoosefromontheInternet,sowecancomparethemeasily.WithawidevarietyofgoodstochoosefromontheInternet,wemayhavenodifficultyincomparingthem.With结构4.ManypeoplethinkbirthcontrolisquitenecessaryinChina.ItiswidelyacceptedthatbirthcontrolisquitenecessaryinChina.It形式主语I5.Wedon'thavelifeexperience.Sowhenwemeetdifficultieswedon'tknowhowtodealwiththem6.Ihopeyoucancometothefestival,becauseitwillbeagreathonourtous.Forlackofessentiallifeexperience,wetendtobeconfusedabout/atalosshowtodealwiththem.Yourpresenceatthemeetingwillbeagreathonourtous.介词短语主语名词化7.Ifyousticktoyourdream,youwillrealizeit.Onlyifyousticktoyourdreamwillyourealizeit.Sticktoyourdreamandyouwillrealizeit.倒装句，祈使句8.Iamsurprisedathiswords.Whathesaidgotmesurprised.主语从句1.被动句2.非谓语3.主语从句4.倒装句5.祈使句6.主语名词化7.It形式主语8.介词短语9With结构句子开头的替换Exercise:1Heenjoysplayingcomputergamesanditreallymakeshisparentsworried.2IfyoutravelinZhanjiang,youcanenjoyallkindsofseafoodandadmirebeautifulcoastalscenery.3Whenyouhavequestions,youcanaskyourteacherforhelp.4Heisagoodteacher.Becauseheworkshard.Sowealllikehim.5Peoplehavechangedtheirwayofshoppingalotinthepast10years.Exercise:1Heenjoysplayingcomputergamesanditreallymakeshisparentsworried.Heisaddictedtoplayingcomputers,whichisagreatconcernforhisparents.Whatconcernshisparentsisthatheisaddictedtocomputergames.Hisaddictiontocomputergamesreallyconcernshisparents.2IfyoutravelinZhanjiang,youcanenjoyallkindsofseafoodandadmirebeautifulcoastalscenery.TravelinginZhanjiang,youwillberewardedwithavarietyofseafoodaswellasbeautifulcoastalscenery.3Whenyouhavequestions,youcanaskyourteacherforhelp.4Heisagoodteacher.Becauseheworkshard.Sowealllikehim.Whenquestionsarise,neverhesitatetoseekguidancefromyourteacher.Devotedtohiswork,heisaresponsibleteacherwhoisthoughthighlyofbyusstudents.5People’swayofshoppinghaschangedalotinthepast10years.Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinpeople’swayofshoppinginthepastdecade.Thepastdecadehaswitnessedthegreatchangesinpeople’swayofshopping.Homeworkassignment:一、改写下列文章Everyfamily