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teacherfriendsupermanheroWho:What:acoupleoflovers,God,thedoctor____coupleofloversledan________(envy)lifeinatown.___________(fortunate),themanhadanaccidentandwasseverely_____(injure).Thewoman___________(attend)himdayandnight._________herloverwasstillsleeping,_________(hope),shemadeadeal______God:tobeabutterflyforthreeyearsinexchangefortheman’s________(recover),_____wasahardchoicebuteasytomaketoawillingheart.AenviableUnfortunatelyinjuredattendedtoButhopelesslywithrecoverywhichTheplot(情节)ofthestoryDevelopmentEndingBeginningClimax(高潮)A.Themanwasbadlyinjuredandshowednosignsofrecovery.B.ThewomandealtwithGodtosaveherloverbutanothergirlappearedbetweenthem.C.Themanandthewomanhadanenviablelove.••*structures(结构)•*sentencepatterns(句式)•*words&phrases(词和短语)1•*theme:negative/positive•*interpretation(解意)*keywords(关键词)*clues(线索)Step3polish(润色)Step2draft(拟稿)Step1compose(构思)underlinedwordsenjoyingthesunrisethesunsetconsciousnessthechurchGodtearsloveregretbecamethebutterflyflysweetheart-strickenunderlinedwords(选5个以上)who(人物):Godthebutterflywhere(地点):thechurchevent(事件):enjoyingthesunrisethesunsetconsciousnesstearsloveregretbecameflysweetheart-strickenclues“Icanhelpyou…forthreeyears…”“Yes,Ido!iwon’tregretdoingthat!”Godalsofeltsad…“Doyouregretforwhatyouhavedone?”e….b.Themanandthedoctormarried,andthewomanremainedtobeabutterfly.a.Themanandthedoctormarried,andthewomanleft.c.Themanproposedtothedoctor,butGoduncoveredthetruthtothemanandgavetheseparatedloversahappyreunion.d.Themanproposedtothedoctor,butGoduncoveredthetruthtothemanwhichinvolvedhiminadilemma.Finally,themanleft.1.目睹;见证(2分)vt._________2.他说过的最甜蜜的话(2分)(提示词sweet)_________________________________3.蝴蝶难过得情不自禁地哭了。(4分)(提示词tears)__________________________________________________________________see/witnessThesweetestwordshehaseversaidThebutterflycouldn’thelpsheddinghertearssadly./Thebutterflycouldnolongerholdbackthetears./Tearsfilledhereyesandthebutterflycouldnolongercalmdown.2.第三年的最后一天(2分)____________________________Onthelastdayofthethirdyear1.变深;使加深(2分)vt./vi._________deepen3.他们的爱已成为回忆。(4分)____________________________________________________________Theirlovehasbecomememories./Theirlovehasturnedintomemories./Theirlovehasbecomeapast.2.揭露真相(2分)_____________________1.被打动的;受感动的(2分)adj.be_________bytoucheduncoverthetruth/exposethetruth/revealthetruth/moved/impressed3.对于我为他所做的事我从来没有后悔过。(4分)(提示词regret,用倒装句式)________________________________________________________________NeverhaveIregrettedforwhatIhavedoneforhim.1.唤醒(2分)vt._________awaken/rouse2.遭受许多挫折(2分)_____________________gothroughmanyobstacles/suffermanystruggles3.男人震惊了,越发觉得后悔和内疚(4分)(提示词regrets/guilt)____________________________________________________________________________Themanwasshocked,andthefeelingofregretsandguiltgrewstronger.Paragraphy1:Thebutterflyknewthatalltheseshouldhavebelongedtoher,butnowtheybelongedtoanotherwoman.Shecoulddonothingbutrestontheman’sshoulderoffandon.__________________________________________________Paragraphy2:Godalsofeltsadandsighedtothebutterfly,“Doyouregretforwhatyouhavedone?”________________________________________________________四人一组,完成写作任务,每人扮演重要角色如下:Role1:ThemecontrollerRole2:StructurebuilderRole3:GrammarcheckerRole4:Coherence(连贯)master(每人至少写两句)VersionCThemanproposedtothedoctor,butGoduncoveredthetruthtothemanandgavetheseparatedloversahappyreunion.Paragraphy1:Thebutterflyknewthatalltheseshouldhavebelongedtoher,butnowtheybelongedtoanotherwoman.Shecoulddonothingbutrestontheman’sshoulderoffandon.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Itwasheartbrokentoseetheirlovedeependaybyday.Timewentbyquickly.OnthelastdayofthethirdyearwhenthedealbetweenGodandthebutterflywasalmostover,themanproposedtohisgirlfriend.Hetookoutabeautifulringandsworethesweetestwordshehaseversaid.Hearingthis,thebutterflycouldn’tbreathe.Herdarkeneyeswerefulloftears.sheflewawaysilentlyingreatgriefanddespair.Atthatmoment,sherealizedthathewouldn’tknowhersacrificesandtheirlovehasbecomeapast.Paragraphy2:Godalsofeltsadandsighedtothebutterfly,“Doyouregretforwhatyouhavedone?”____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thebutterflysaid,“No.Nev
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