2018年6月浙江高考读后续写分析(父子骑马野外迷失)

Continuingthestory第二节读后续写(满分25分)阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Itwassummer,andmydadwantedtotreatmetoavacationlikeneverbefore.HedecidedtotakemeonatriptotheWildWest.WetookaplanetoAlbuquerque,abigcityinthestateofNewMexico.WereachedAlbuquerqueinthelateafternoon.UnclePaul,mydad’sfriend,pickedusupfromtheairportanddroveusuptohisfarminPecos.HiswifeTinacookedusadeliciousdinnerandwegottoknowhissonsRyanandKyle.MydadandIspentthenightintheguestroomofthefarmhouselisteningtothefrogsandwaterrollingdowntherivernearby.Veryearlyinthemorning.UnclePaulwokeusuptohavebreakfast.“Thedaystartsatdawnonmyfarm,”hesaid.Afterbreakfast,IwenttohelpAuntTinafeedthechickens,whilemydadwentwithUnclePaultotakethesheepouttograze(吃草).IwasimpressedtoseemydadandUnclePaulridinghorses.Theylookedreallycool.____________________________________________________________________________Intheafternoon,IaskedUnclePaulifIcouldtakeahorseride,andhesaidyes,aslongasmydadwentwithme.Iwasn’tgoingtotakeahorseridebymyselfanyway.So,mydadandIputonournewcowboyhats,gotonourhorses,andheadedslowlytowardsthemountains.“Don’tbelateforsupper,”UnclePaulcried,“andkeeptothetracksothatyoudon’tgetlost!”“OK!”mydadcriedback.AfterawhileUnclePaulandhisfarmhousewereoutofsight.Itwassopeacefulandquietandthecolorsofthebrownrocks,thedeepgreenpinetrees,andthelateafternoonsunmixedtocreateamagicscene.Itlookedlikeabeautifulwoven(编织的)blanketspreadoutuponthegroundjustforus.________________________情节的不合理性：1.神兔带我们迷路，又带我们回家。2.马突然有灵性，带我们回家。3.超级无能的爸爸，无所作为的爸爸1.Dad/mydad2.我们发现我们迷路了Wefoundourselvesgotlost.Wefoundourselveslost.Wefound(that)wegotlost.3.从视线中消失sth.disappear/vanishfromsight/viewSth.wereoutofsight.4.看见什么Wecaughtsightofsth.Sthcameintosight/view.5.策马前进urgethehorseonwithawhipwhipthehorseon/forward6.突然想起某人的话Hiswordspoppedintomymind/head.Para1Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.1.Thewriterwasattractedbytherabbit.2.Hebegantochasetherabbit.3.Hisfatherfollowedhimbehind,concernedabouthissafety.4.Bothofthemgotawayfromthetrackandwerelostinthedepthsoftheforest.Para2Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.1.Thewriter'sfeelingswhentheyfoundtheygotlost.2.Howhisfathercomfortedhimandworkedoutthesolution3.Howtheyfoundtheirwayback4.Thewriter'safterthoughts1.Dad/mydad2.我们发现我们迷路了Wefoundourselvesgotlost.Wefoundourselveslost.Wefound(that)wegotlost.3.从视线中消失sth.disappear/vanishfromsight/viewSth.wereoutofsight.4.看见什么Wecaughtsightofsth.Sthcameintosight/view.5.策马前进urgethehorseon(withawhip)whipthehorseon6.突然想起某人的话Hiswordspoppedintomymind/head.Descriptionofthehorse1.Normally,thatwouldn’tbotherahorse,butforsomereason,mymare(母马)wasalotmorenervousthannormal.2.Shestartedtoneighandkickedupherheels.3.Itshotitstwofrontlegsup,andIheldontothesaddle(马鞍)tightly.Allofasuddenthehorsewasquicklygalloping(gallop飞奔)awayandwewerewayoffthetrack.4.Myhorsebolted(窜)totherightasIheldontightlyandtriednottofall.5.Badlystartledbythesuddenincident,thehorsespedoffthetrackintoanotherdirection.Descriptionofthehorse6.Itwassoquickthatmyhorsewasscared.Thehorsestartedtoneigh,shiver（颤抖）andgraduallylosecontrol.ItsuddenlyrantoanotherdirectionawayfromtheinitialtrackUnclePaulhadwarnedustokeep.7.Thehorsewasrunningwild(失去控制)andfinallywefelloffthehorseandthehorsejustranaway,leavingmeandmydadlyingontheground.1.动物的叫声集锦neigh:马的嘶叫声bark：狗的叫声bellow：（公牛）吼叫声bleat：（羊或小牛）咩咩声buzz：（蜜蜂、蚊子等）嗡嗡声cackle：（母鸡下蛋后）咯咯声cheep：（小鸡）唧唧声；chirp：（小鸟）啁啾声，crow：（公鸡）喔喔声grunt：（猪等）咕噜声水流声：1.Weheardariverbabblingnearby(v)2.Haveyouheardthebabbleofrunningwater?(n)3.ababbling/ripplingbrook(adj.)4.Shealwaysbabblesaboutthemistakesmadebyherson.(v)唠唠叨叨Descriptionoftherabbit1.ThelittleRabbithadacoatofwhite/brownhair.Thetwoearswerelongandstooduprightonitshead.2.Itraiseditsmuzzle(动物的嘴),wiggling(摇摆)itsflocky（毛茸茸）shorttail.3.Itwassocutewithitsmouthchewinggrass,glancingatusoccasionally.Descriptionofthesurroundings1.Thesettingsuncastagoldenglowoverthemountain.2.Thesunsetdyedthehorizon.3.Themoonburstthroughthecloudsandcastitssilverlightalloverthewetland.4.Theluxuriant/thickforest,thetinyflowersthatperfumedtheair,thegroupsofsheepinthefardistanceandthesingingriverallmademysoulpurified.5.Atthatmoment,itwascompletelydarkexceptthefaintlightgivenoutbyafewstarsinthesky.6.Darkcloudsseemedtobegatheringinthesky.7.Bynowthesunhadalmostdippedbehindthehorizon.Feelingandreactionofthewriterandhisfather:1.NeverhadIseensuchalovelycreatureinmylifesoIfolloweditswithoutthinkingtwice.2.Frozenwithfear,Iwas/stoodrootedtothespot.3.SoeagerwasItoapproachalovelycreaturethatIfeltanurgetocatchit.4.Intheblinkofaneye,therabbitescapedoutofsight.5.Withouttheslightesthesitation,Ifollowedit,offthetrack.6.Sodidmydad,leavingUnclePaul’swordsbehind.7.Intheforest,weweregreetedwithbreathtakingscenery.8.Fearslowlycreptuponus.Unexpectedly,thereseemedtobefootsteps,stampingonthefallenleaves,creaking(嘎吱作响).9.Failingtoresistthetemptation,IbeggedDadforanadventure.10.Asenseofcuriosityandexcitementgraduallycreepingintomyheart,Iwhisperedtomyfather.11.Speechless,mydadofferedacomfortingsmile,whicheasedmyterror.12.Dadtriedinvaintofindthewaybackaseverythingaroundseeme