2013年广州二模读写任务评讲

第二节：读写任务TheseriousdeclineinthehealthofChinesestudentsiscausingconcernamongparents,schoolsandexperts.Thenextgeneration’sfutureisindangerandthereisaneedtounderstandthecauseoftheproblemandfindasolution.Inthelast10years,studentshavefoundanalarmingincreasein:·Obesity—…junkfood…softdrinks…·Pooreyesight—·Stress—…Thelonghoursofstudyandhomework…2013年广州二模基础写作评讲SomehavesuggestedincludingPhysicalEducation(P.E.)intheGaokaoasapossiblesolutiontostudents’problems.Theysaythiswillforcestudentstobemoreactive,playsportsandthereforeloseweight.Others,however,opposetheidea,sayingthataddingonemoretesttotheGaokaowouldonlyincreasestudents’workloadandstressandwouldworsentheiroverallhealth.Althoughthereisnoeasyanswer,allagreethatsomethingmustbedonetostopseriousdeclineinstudentshealth.2013年广州二模读写任务评讲【写作内容】1.以约30个词概括这段短文的内容；2.然后以约120个词就“健康与学习”的话题进行写作，内容包括；（1）你是否赞成体育入高考及原因；（2）健康与学习的关系；（3）你认为还有什么方式可以帮助学生提高身体质。2013年广州二模读写任务评讲ThispassagelistssomeofthecausesforthedeclineofChinesestudents’healthanddiscussesonepossiblesolutiontotheproblem–includingP.E.intheGaokao.这篇文章列出了中国学生健康衰退的一些原因，还讨论了该问题的一个可能的解决方案——体育包括进高考。2013年广州二模读写任务评讲2013年广州二模读写任务评讲写出topicsentences:（1）你是否赞成体育入高考及原因；Frommypointofview,it’sunreasonabletoincludeP.E.intheGaokao.在我看来，把体育包括进高考是不合理的。（2）健康与学习的关系；Itisoftensaidthat“ahealthymindneedsahealthybody.”人们常说：健康的头脑需要健康的身体。（3）你认为还有什么方式可以帮助学生提高体质。Inordertoimprovestudents’health,thefollowingaspectscounts.为了改善学生的健康，下面几方面很重要。ThispassagelistssomeofthecausesforthedeclineofChinesestudents’healthanddiscussesonepossiblesolutiontotheproblem–includingP.E.intheGaokao.Inmyview,it’sunreasonabletoincludeP.E.intheGaokao.Whilestudentsmayspendmoretimedoingphysicalexercisetoprepareforthetest,thisdoesn’tmeantheywillimprovetheirhealth.Onthecontrary,additionaltestpressureandexcessiveexercisemaymaketheirhealthworse.Moreover,it’sunfairtostudentsbornwithhealthproblemsandtothosenotgiftedinsports.2013年广州二模读写任务评讲Itisoftensaidthat“ahealthymindneedsahealthybody.”Withgoodhealth,youhaveenoughenergytoperformatyourbest.Ithinkthecoreissuehoweverishowtogetstudentshealthier.Inordertoimprovestudents’health,thefollowingaspectscounts.Besidesatest,Ithinkthatschoolsshoulddothingssuchasstopsellingthesoftdrinksandjunkfood,aswellasgivestudentslesshomeworkandmoretimeforoutdooractivities.2013年广州二模读写任务评讲smallercomparativelyeasydrivepark.2013年广州二模读写任务评讲