高三英语作文公开课

英语书面表达EnglishCompositionWriting一.WritingskillsHowtoimproveyourwriting主要特点记叙为主稍加议论旁带说明Whatmakesagoodessay?AtopicparagraphSomesupportingparagraphsAconcludingparagraph正确使用有关连接词顺序：firstthenlaterintheendeventuallysincethentostartwith转折：butyethoweverwhileneverthelessonthecontrary递进：what’smoreinadditionfurthermore因果：becauseassinceasaresultowingtothanksto让步：thoughevenifeventhoughasinspiteofdespite条件：ifunlessonconditionthataslongassuppose列举：forexamplesuchasasfollowstakeforexample总结：inshortinconclusioninawordinbriefonthewhole用适当的连接词填空1.Hewastired,hewenttobed.2.Hemadeapromise,hedidn’tkeepit3.Iagreetotheplan.thebuildingofthefactorywillprovidepeoplewithdifferentjobs,itcansavealotofmoney,itwon’tdomuchharmtotheenvironmentsobutTobeginwithSecondlyFinally一个好的段落要有丰富的句式1.感叹句2.倒装句3.强调句4.省略句5.With结构6.定语从句7.各种名词性从句8.各种状语从句利用不同的句式来表达同一个意思，能增加文章的文采1.感叹句e.g.Howdisappointedhewas!2.强调句e.g.Itwastheyoungboythathelpedtheoldman.3.倒装句e.g.Onlyinthiswaycanwesolvetheproblem.4.省略句e.g.Cometomeifnecessary5.定语从句e.g.Thebookwhichwasborrowedfromthelibraryhasbeenreturned.6.名词性从句e.g.That’swhatIshoulddo.Practice怎样使用丰富的句式和高级词汇1.Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.(使用名词性从句）2.ThoughI’mweak,I’llmaketheeffort.(使用倒装句)3.Ifyouworkhard,youwillmakerapidprogress.(祈使句+and）4.Iwon’tbelievewhathesays.(nomatterwhat状语从句）5.Theysangandlaughedastheywentbacktoschool.(使用V-ing形式）6.Weallthinkheisagreatman.(thinkhighlyof)Whatsurpriseshimisthatthelittlegirlknowssomanythings.WeakasIam,I’llmaketheeffort.Workhardandyouwillmakearapidprogress.Nomatterwhathesays,Iwon’tbelieve.Singingandlaughing,theywentbacktoschoolWeallthinkhighlyofhim书面表达例1Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourvillage!①Thisvillageisverysmall.Ithasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor②.Ithaschangedalotsince1978③.Peoplehereare④richerthanbeforeNowitistakingonanewlook.Inthepast,theschoolherewasverysmall⑤.⑥Nowithasbeenrebuilt.⑦Thenewlybuiltteachingbuildinghas4stories⑧.Itisthemostbeautifulbuildinginthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.⑨Theyenjoyfreeeducationinit.⑩Thankyou.Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourvillage!①ThisvillageIsasmallonewith/whichhasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobepoor.②However,ithaschangedalotsince1978③andhasbeendevelopingveryfast.Peoplehere④liveamuchbetterlifethanbefore.NowItistakingonanewlook.Inthepast,theschoolherewasverysmall⑤andmostchildrencouldn’taffordtogotoschool.⑥Butnowithasbeenrebuilt⑦andthenewlybuiltteachingbuilding⑧whichhas4storiesisthemostbeautifuloneinThevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrenstudyhere.⑨what’smore,theyenjoyfreeeducation.⑩Mayyouenjoyyourstayhere/Mayyouhaveapleasanttimehere!Thankyou.从什么方面来评价作文structureIstheessaydividedintoparts?Doeseachparthaveatopicsentence?contentAreallthedetailsstated?Iseverythingtothepoint?languageDoesthewriteruseanylinkingwords?Arethereanymistakes?Isthereanyadvancedvocabulary?Arethereanygoodsentencepatterns?二.书面表达六步法审抓扩连改抄书面表达六步法一.审题认真读题然后找出基本要素5W1H何时何地何人为何如何做了何事书面表达六步法二.抓要点确定主要行为，配动词，注意时态，语态及搭配的副词，介词等。Whathappened?书面表达六步法三.扩展成句形成基本语义单位，把要点变成完整的句子，注意连词.Whodidwhat?书面表达六步法四.连句成文词与词搭配句与句相连时间空间细节连贯呼应书面表达六步法五.查错改错主谓一致吗？时态正确吗？语态正确吗？有“半截话”吗？要尽量剔除错误书面表达六步法六.誊写卷面整洁不一定加分,卷面潦草一定要扣分!书信方法指导目前，随着对英语学习的实用性，生活性要求的加强，书信已经成了一个热门题材的考查形式，常以提纲式要点作文的形式出现，话题内容也紧紧围绕学生的生活实际，此类考查形式绝不是简单的对要点逐条翻译而是将所给的几个要点科学合理的组织成通顺的语句，形成亮点鲜明的高分作文。常见的写作格式如下：第一段，文章开头：称呼（通常已给出）。第二段，寒暄语句，引出写信的目的：寒暄句+主题句。第三段，根据提纲扩展主题段落:主题句+扩展句1+扩展句2+扩展句3.第四段，表明自己的观点，并结束书信主题段落：在最后要他谈自己的看法。第五段，寒暄句+落款。练习热点命题作文假如你是李华，你的英国朋友来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文，请你根据下列要点写回信。要点：1.参加中文学习班；2.看中文书刊，电视；3.学唱中文歌曲；4.交中国朋友。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头语已为你写好。TopicDear,I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon./I’mgladtowritethelettertoyouon.Hereareafewsuggestionsforyourreference.First,itisimportantto.Asyouwill,Then,italsohelpsifyou.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideato.Because.Youcanalso.I’msurethat.Pleasenexttime/inthefuture.Sincerelyyours,Signature结论审题，抓点造句，成文改错，誊写背诵精彩范文