最新高考英语写作专题辅导课件-基础写作[地点介绍]

1.neighbor与……为邻2.bemadeupof/consistof由……组成3.belocated/situatedin/near坐落在4.serveas当……用5.with/hasahistoryof有……的历史相关短语6.with/hasapopulationof有……人口7.coveranareaof面积有...8.thethirdlargestcity第三大城市9.befamousfor以……而著名10.bewell-knownfor/as因为/作为……而出名11.onitseastlies东边有……12.afantasticplace一个极好的地方13.berich/abundantin盛产14.athree-storeyedbuilding一栋三层楼的房子1.Iwouldliketointroducemyhometowntoyou.我向你介绍一下我的家乡。2.Myhometown,neighboringHongKong,islocatedinGuangdongProvince.我的家乡,毗邻香港,位于广东省。相关句式3.Guangzhou,acitywithapopulationofaboutthirteenmillion,hasahistoryofmorethan2,200years.广州,拥有一千三百人口的一座城市,有三百多年的历史了。4.Coveringatotalareaof7,434squarekilometersthiscityhasapopulationofabouttenmillion.这座城市占地面积达7,434平方公里,人口大约是10,000,000。5.Itisrichinnaturalsourcessuchascoalandgold,andhasmildclimate.它自然资源得天独厚,有丰富的煤和金矿,而且气候温和。6.Ourschoolisnolongerwhatitusedtobe.我们学校再也不是过去的样子了。1.介绍或描述地点的基础写作,通常以表格形式来呈现写作点。该类表格通常有两列,其中一列概括事物特征、属性,另一列对此特征、属性展开描述。学生必须重新组织表格内容,不能死板地依据表格从左到右翻译,如不能写成“ThelocationofGuangzhouisinthesouthofChina”这样不地道的句子,相应的表达应该是:GuangzhouliesinthesouthofChina.2.确定时态。介绍地点等描述基本特征的文章通常使用一般现在时。3.避免开头指代不明。若文章没有给出写作对象或设定情景，避免用it作主语引导第一句,而应该具体写出描述的对象，如theGreatWall,HongKong等。但如果整篇文章多处用“it”等作主语,文章会稍显逊色,所以在写作过程中,可根据文意适当变换主语,如改写为theplace,thecity等。你将带领一个外国旅游团参观长城，请根据以下的信息要点，用5个规范的英语句子写一篇长城的简单介绍。你的介绍应包括全部信息要点，介绍的开头已经给出，不计入5个句子中。【信息要点】历史有两千多年的历史。特点世界上最长的城墙,长6000多千米;建筑材料主要为石头,砖头,修建工作都是人工进行;主要用于防御外来入侵者,沿墙每隔几百米就有烽火台(watchtower)。现状世界著名旅游景点之一，每年吸引许多外国游客到长城观光旅游。[写作要求]只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。[评分标准]句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。[例题导写]1.按顺序写作。学生应该按照表格内容(即“历史、特点、现状”)的先后顺序进行写作，这样既可避免重整顺序而浪费时间,也避免错改顺序而给老师带来阅卷困难。2.草拟提纲、简单翻译是写作重要步骤之一。请翻译要点：(1)有(多久)的历史_________________Ithasahistoryof...(2)世界最长的城墙________________(3)6000多千米长__________________(4)由石头,砖头做成______________(5)由人工修建__________________beconstructedbyhandthelongestwallintheworld6000kilometerslongbemadeofstonesandbricks6)防御外来入侵者__________________________________________________________________(7)每隔几百米_____________________everyfewhundredmeterspreventthecountryfrombeinginvaded;defendthecountryagainstforeigninvaders(8)著名旅游景点之一______________________________________________________________________(9)吸引许多外国游客___________________________________oneofthefamousscenicspots;oneofthefamousplacesofinterest;oneofthefamoustouristattractionsattractmanyforeignvisitors3.规范表达名词。如果名词修饰语过长,应转用“a/an/the+名词+of”的表达,例如,“两千多年的历史”应该写成“ahistoryoftwothousandyears”,而不能写成“twothousandyears’history”。4.变换表达,丰富句式。请按要求完成句子：(1)Itismorethan6000kilometersinlength,______________________________________(“是世界上最长的城墙”,使用非限制性定语从句)(2)ItwastheGreatWall_____________________________________________inancienttimes.(“帮助人们防御外来入侵者”,使用强调句)thathelpedpeoplefightagainsttheforeigninvaderswhichmakesitthelongestwallintheworld(3)_________________________________________________________,therewerewatchtowerseveryfewhundredmetersalongthewall.(“长城主要用于防御外来入侵者”,使用原因状语从句)(4)TheGreatWallisoneofthewell-knownplacesofinterestonearth,_____________________________________________.(“每年吸引许多外国游客到长城观光旅游”,使用非谓语结构)AstheGreatWallwasbuilttodefendpeopleagainsttheinvadersappealingtoalargenumberofforeignerseveryyear(5)TheGreatWallis____afamoushistoricalattraction____itattractshundredsofthousandsofforeignvisitorseachyear.(使用“如此……以致”的句型表达)(6)So________________________thatitattractshundredsofthousandsofvisitorshomeandabroadeveryyear.(“长城如此吸引”,使用倒装句)attractiveistheGreatWallsuchthat[参考范文]LadiesandGentlemen，WelcometotheGreatWall.TheGreatWall,whichismorethan6,000kilometerslong,isthelongestwallintheworld.Ithasahistoryofmorethan2,000years.Itismadeofstonesandbricksandalmostalltheconstructionwasdonebyhandwithoutanymachine.Asthewallwasbuilttodefendthecountryagainstforeigninvaders,therewerewatchtowerseveryfewhundredmetersalongthewall.Now,theGreatwallisoneofthemostfamousplacesofinterestinChinaanditattractsmanyforeignvisitorseveryyear.［能力提高］1.请根据中文提示,完成有关地点介绍的语汇积累。(1)位于______________________(2)靠近_______________________________________________nextto/closeto,intheneighborhoodof,neighboring...belocated/situatedin；lie(s)in(3)有(多少)人口________________________________________________________________________(4)有(多久)历史____________________________________Ithasapopulationof...;Withapopulationof...,sth....;Thepopulationhasreached...Ithasahistoryof...;Withahistoryof...，sth...(5)占(多大)面积________________________________________________________(6)表达“容量”Thehotel________(拥有)120rooms;Thebuildingcan_____(容纳)5000people.coveranareaof...(squarekilometers/squaremeters)possesseshold(7)是(多少)长/宽/深Itis...____/____/___.=Itis...in_____/_____/_____.(8)著名景点aplaceof______,ahistorical_________,ascenicspot(9)表达“吸引、著名”sth.________________sb.;sth.be__________________________(形容词);befamous____(因……而著名);befamous__(作为……而著名)aslongwidedeeplengthwidthdepthinterestattractionattract/appealtoattractive/appealing/wonderfulfor2.请根据中文,完成短文。Guangzhou,thethirdlargestcityinChina,alsoknownasCityofFlowers,servesasthecapitalcityofGuangdongand(1)___________________________________________________________________________(政治，经济，科学，教育，文化中心).(2)________________________________________________(全市面