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1范文1GoodHealth1．身体健康的重要性。2．保持健康的途径。3．我自己的实践。GoodHealthThedesireforgoodhealthisuniversal.Inourcompetitivesocietyitisimportanttomaintaingoodhealth.Ontheonehand,peoplewithgoodhealthcandoworkwithfullconfidenceandtheirprogressinworkinturncontributestotheirhealthandhappiness.Ontheotherhand,asickpersonisusuallynotinterestedineverythingaroundhimandthereforehelosesmanyopportunitiestobecomesuccessful.Therearemanywaystokeepit.First,thosewhoarealwaysonthegofrommorningtillnightshouldfindtimetorelaxbecausetoomuchstresswillaffecttheirhealth.Second,enoughtimeshouldbeleftforsleepbecausethatwillhelponebecomerestedandrefreshed.Finally,regularphysicalexercisesbenefitone'shealthalot.Sooneshouldalwayskeepinmindthatacertainamountofexerciseisnotawasteoftime.Asforme,Ilikeplayingtennisinthemorning.Ialsoattachmuchimportancetoenoughsleepandrelaxation.Ibelievethiswillensuremygoodhealthfortherestofmylife.评析这篇文章语句通顺，语言流畅，句式变化多样，用词面比较宽。就内容来说，则很切题，包括了提纲中的所有要点。第一段的第二句即主题句是从提纲发展而来的，第二段的首句，即主题句也是由提纲中的第二点发展而来。范文2HopeProjectEducationplaysaveryimportantroleinthemodernizationofourcountry.However,becauseofhistoricalfactors,therearestillalotofpeopleinChinawhoareundereducated,especiallyamongyoungstersinruralareas.Theycannotaffordtheexpensesofschoolingandneedhelp.Atthesametime,Chinaisnotabletoinvesttoomuchmoneyinthematteratpresenttime.ItisinthisparticularsituationthattheauthoritiescarryouttheHopeProject.Thisprojectisnecessarytoourcountry.Itisanurgentmeasurethatthegovernmenthastaken.Inthefirstplace,thisprojectwillprovideconditionsfortheyoungsterstogobacktoschool,whichwillcontributetotheirfuturesuccess.Thusitwillleadtotheenhancementoftheintelligencelevelinourcountry.Secondly,educationmakesitpossibleforpeopletoacquireknowledge,whichisusefultotheirfuturework.Hence,thisProjectbenefitsthemodernizationofourcountryalot.Finally,itcanmakemorepeopleeducated.Therefore,itmayindirectlyresultintheincreaseofthelivingstandardsofourpeople.Inmyopinion,thisprojectisofgreatimportancetoourcountryatthepresenttime.Anditalsowillhaveaprofoundeffectonthefutureachievementsofourcountry.Isuggestthatmoreworkbedonesothateverychildinthecountrysidecanreceiveelementaryeducation.2评析次序词的使用不仅限于first,second,third，本文第二段使用了inthefirstplace,secondly,finally列举原因，说明希望工程为什么对我国很必需，条理清晰，层次分明范文3ModernizingChinaModernizationwillbringanumberofbenefitstothepeopleofChina.Advancementsinscienceandtechnologywillresultinbetterindustrialandconsumerproducts.Newroads,trucksandtrainswillimprovetransportationforbothpeopleandgoods.Withnewhealthcaremethodspeoplewilllivehappierandlonger.However,modernizationalsogivesrisetoanumberofnewproblems.Pollutionoftheair,ground,andwaterhasbecomeaseriousprobleminmanypartsofChina.Anincreaseinvehiclesontheroadshasalsoresultedinmoretrafficaccidents,injuriesanddeaths.Wecan,however,dealwiththeseproblemsifwearecareful.Wecantrainmanyenvironmentalscientistswhocanhelpfactoriesoperatecleanly.Wecanpassnewlawstoregulateourtrafficmoresafely.Finally,wemustexpandoureducationsystemtopreparebettereducatedpeoplefortomorrow.评析本文是段与段之间使用过渡句较好的例子。文章第一段说现代化给中国人民带来许多益处，第二段一开始就由however引出过渡句，指出现代化也同样带来新的问题。第三段段首的过渡句则用一个however巧妙地过渡到如何解决这些问题。过渡句的使用既表达了各段之间语义上的转折，又使文章各段衔接自然。范文4PopulationControlProgressinscienceandtheimprovementoflivingconditionshaveledtotherapidgrowthoftheworldpopulation.Modernmedicine,forexample,hasmadeitpossibleforbabiestogrowuphealthilyandforpeopletolivelonger.Withimprovedlivingconditions,particularlyinthecountryside,peopletendtohavelargerfamilies.Asaresult,theworldpopulationhasincreasedsorapidlythatithasnowexceeded6billion.Buttheovergrowthofpopulationpresentsathreattotheexistenceofhumansociety.Alargepopulationdemandsagreatdealoffoodsupplyandshelterspace.However,limitedproductivityandscarceworldresourcescanhardlymeettheneedsoftheever-increasingpopulation.Thus,inthelongrun,theovergrowthoftheworldpopulationwillonlyharmmankind.Toguaranteethesteadydevelopmentofhumansociety,mankindmustrealizetheconsequencesresultingfromfastpopulationgrowthandcarryoutafamilyplanningprogramme.Onlybyadoptingeffectivemeasures,canhumansocietydevelopsteadilyandhaveabrightfuture.评析本文把各个段落巧妙连接的方法是利用转折关系：文章第一段说：科学的发展和生活条件的改善使世界人口出现了迅速增长。第二段却一转，说道：人口的过分增长威胁了人类社会生存，第二段段首句引出的问题，是第一段讨论内容的又一方面。最后一段提出解决办法，即人们必须采取行之有效的人口政策限3制人口的增长。转折过渡句往往用在这样类型的文章，即所有事物都有正有负，正、反两方面均提出后，再寻找解决办法。范文5ControllingCancerTherearetwomaincausesofcancer:heredityandenvironment.Wecandonothingtochangeourheredity,thatis,thebasicphysicalcharacteristicsthatwerepassedontousbyourparents.However,wecandoagreatdealtocontrolourenvironment,whichmayaccountfor80-90%ofallcancers.Environmentalpollutioncanbedividedintotwokinds:personalandimpersonal.Personalpollutionmaybedefinedroughlyasunhealthyhabitssuchassmoking,drinking,andeatingthewrongfoods.Clearly,withenoughwillpowerwecancontrolthispersonalenvironment.Impersonalpollution,ontheotherhand,referstothosethingswhicharebeyondourindividualcontrol.Oneexamplewouldbeindustrialpollution,whichisveryhardtocontrolbecauseoftheexpenseinvolved.Itwouldbeexpensiveintermsofprofitsandperhapsjobs.TheAmericanautomobileindust