英语四级作文

Gene专治各种写作疑难杂症•应对考试是有方法的，但学好英语本身没有捷径。英文写作本身是一个博大精深的话题，四级作文不过是沧海一粟。Question1Howdoyouputagiraffeintoarefrigerator?Opentherefrigerator,putinthegiraffeandclosethedoor.Question2：Howdoyouputanelephantintoarefrigerator?Correctanswer:Opentherefrigerator,takeoutthegiraffe,putintheelephantandclosethedoor.Question3Question4Thereisariveryoumustcross.Butitisinhabitedbycrocodiles.Andtherearenobridgesoranyothermeans.Howdoyoumanagetocrosstheriver?Youswimacross!Becauseallthecrocodilesareattendingtheanimalmeeting!Professionalspreschoolers0102030405060708090professionalspreschoolersResults：Thinkinanotherway!•现象•四级英语评分标准解读•四级英语写作八大误区•四级英语作文十大禁忌•英语写作语言的丰富性•四级英语写作闪光句型•图表式作文•应用文写作•范文赏析及点评•预测范文1：写不完：2：想写，不知道写啥；3：想写，写不出来；4：想到哪儿，写到哪儿；5：写了，自己都不知道对不对；6：没有框架意识；上来就写，一气呵成！7：句式单一；8：汉化句子；9：时态跳跃，穿越时空；10：单词拼写拿不准；11：字母大小写不注意；12：从来不注意标点符号的使用；•对策•构思简单，少犯错误。外语考试的作文，考查的目标不是考生的思维水平或逻辑分析能力，而是考核语言表达能力。所以建议采取的措施是，简化自己的思维和分析。也就是，如何降低自己的思维水平，来迎合自己有限的语言状况。语言上，关键在于变化，变化不分难易，只要有变化就行。变化分为词的变化、句的变化。在用词上，同一文章中，相同意义的词要争取不断的用近义词替换。四级英语评分标准解读•Globalscoring•RewardScores•从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。内容和语言是一个统一体。作文应表达题目所规定的内容，而内容要通过语言来表达。2分——条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。5分——基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。8分——基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。11分——切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。14分——切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较强基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。•四级英语写作误区•过分注重内容而忽略了语言•简单翻译outline中提出的中文•过分迷恋所谓的“万能模式”，企图以“模式”来代替大量的写作实践。•使用句型太复杂以致出错•加入太多的想象成分，使内容细节过多，文章冗长。意识流倾向。•用中文思维串联英文词汇•过分“精雕细琢”而忽视了“大局”英语作文十大禁忌•忌中国式英语•忌字迹潦草•忌语言口语化•忌标点和首字母错误•忌一味的使用从句•忌意识流写作•忌句式单一，关键词重复•忌时态跳跃，穿越时空•忌重大语法错误•忌单词拼写错误AmericanChinesenotenoughheartflowerangryopenYouhaveseed，Iwillgiveyousomecolortoseesee,brothers！togetherup！•★汉式表达（汉语思维）Chinglishwayofexpression•1.a）However,everythinghasitsblackside.•b)However,therearetwosidestoeverything./everythinghasitsdrawbacks./everythinghasitsprosandcons./nothingisperfect.•2．a）Thereisnodoubtthatproperphysicalactivitieskeepourbodiesfit.•b）Thereisnodoubtthatproperphysicalactivitieskeepusfit．•3．a）Inaword，Iwanttofindajobthatfitsme，andmoneyandotherthingsareoutofthought．•b）Inaword，Iwanttofindajobthatsuitsme，andmoneyandotherthingsarenotmychiefconcern．•4．a）Takingpartinsportsandgameswillgiveusagoodbody．•b)Takingpartinsportsandgameswillkeepusfitandhealthy．•5．a）JustopentheTVset，youcanknoweverything，andwon’thavetogoout．•b）SimplybyswitchingontheTVset，youcanlearneverythingwithouthavingtogoout.•6、a）Smokingcigaretteswilldoharmtoourbody.•b）Smokingcigarettesharmsourhealth．•7．a）Weshouldputourheartsintothestudy．•b）Weshouldpaywholeheartedattentiontoourstudies．•8．a）TVcanwidenoureyes．•b）WatchingTVcanbroadenourminds/horizons．•9．a）Ifastudentonlyhasknowledgeofnaturalscience，hewillbecomeaone-leggedmanwhenhecomesoutofuniversitydoors．•b）Ifastudentonlyhasknowledgeofnaturalscience，hewon‘tbeawell-roundedmanwhenhegraduates．•10．a）Atthispointintime，wewerecompletelyexhausted．•b）Bythen，wewerecompletelyexhausted．／Wewerecompletelyexhaustedbythattime．★汉式“有”的概念Chinglishhave•1．a）Thechiefreasonforthechangehavefivepoints．•b）Therearefivemainreasonsforthechange．•2．a）Trafficisaseriousproblem，oneofthereasonsisthatShanghaihaveovertenmillionpeople．•b）Trafficisaseriousproblem，andoneofthereasonsisthatthereareovertenmillionpeopleinShanghai．★汉式“越来越多／少”的概念Chinglish“moreandmore”／“lessandless”•1．a）Nowadays，youngpeoplewhoseektogoabroadarebecomingmoreandmore．•b）Nowadays，moreandmoreyoungpeopleareseekingtogoabroad．•2．a）Peoplebegintoeatgrainlessandless，whiletheyeatfruitmoreandmore．•b）Peoplearebeginningtoeatlessgrainbutmorefruit．•3．a）Withthedevelopmentofcities，greenlandbecomesmoreandmoreless．•b）Withthedevelopmentofcities，greenlandisdecreasing．Evermorerapidly.★汉式的多个动词连用•1．a）Peoplethinkgotoamoviewillcostalotofmoney．•b）Peoplethinkgoingtoamoviewillcostalotofmoney.•2．a）ThebestwaytothetrafficprobleminShanghaiisbuildsubways．•b）ThebestwaytosolvethetrafficprobleminShanghaiistobuildsubways．•3．a）Therearemanypeopletakepartinsportsnow．•b）Therearemanypeoplewhotakepart/takingpartinsportsnow．•4．a）Makecitiesgreenerhasmanyadvantages.•b）Makingcitiesgreenerhasmanyadvantages．•5．a）Nowpeoplegoabroadisnoteasy．•b）Itisnoteasyforpeopletogoabroadnow.•6．a）Althoughdifficultyisexist，butwecanovercomeit.•b）Althoughdifficulty（do）exist，wecanovercomethem．★英汉语序机械对应ChinglishSentenceOrder•1．a）Becausewiththedevelopmentofindustry，energyismuchneeded．•b）Withthedevelopmentofindustry，energyismuchneeded.•2．a）Ifnoelectricity，wewillhavenoTVtowatch，andnoradiotolistento．•b)Ifthereisnoelectricity，wewillhavenoTVtowatchandnoradiotolistento．/Iftherewereno…wewould…•3．a）Althougheveryoneisequaltoanopportunity，butnoteveryonecanseizeit.•b）Althoughopportunitycomestoeveryone，noteveryonecanseizeit.•4．a）Myexaminationdidn’tpass．•b）Ifailedmyexamination．•5．a）Hehascomebackfor2weeks．•b）Hehasbeenbackfor2weeks．•6．a）Theskyisrainingheavily．•b）Itisrainingheavily．•7．a）Heonlysaidafewsentences．Hemadeusverydisappointed．•b）Wewerequitedisappointedthatheonlysaidafewwords．•Ok,yes,no,allright,Ithink,very,good，much,Inmyopinion,important,so,because,hi,Well,say,howareyou?What’sup?Mygod!,bye,goodbye,comeon,Hey,sorry,look!•1．a）Manystudentswhoare