《Teenage-Life》Reading-for-Writing-PPT

1SectionⅦReadingforWriting——建议信TeenageLife《TeenageLife》ReadingforWritingPPT《TeenageLife》ReadingforWritingPPT2基础·自主学习核心·互动探究本单元的写作任务是读一封建议信，了解建议信的结构和语言特征，然后再写一封建议信。Ⅰ.Pre-writing(Ⅰ)Learningtowriteafterthemodel10September，2018DearWorriedFriend，Youwrotethatyouareveryworriedaboutyourfriend，ChenLei.Iunderstandquitewellthatyouareanxiousandfeelterrible.Youthinkthatyourfriendplayscomputergamestoooftenandspendstoomuchtimeonline.3基础·自主学习核心·互动探究Irecommendthatyoutalktoyourfriendabouthisbehaviour.Itisnotunusualforteenagersofyourgenerationtobeattractedtocomputergamesandtheonlineworld.Butspendingtoomuchtimeonlineisunhealthyandmakesitverydifficulttofocusonotherthingsinlife.SomestudentsevenbecomeaddictedtotheInternetandcannotconcentrateonschoolandfamilylife.Ithinkyoushouldencourageyourfriendtotrynewhobbies.Whynotdiscusstheproblemtogether?Iamsurehewilllistentoyou，sinceyouarehisgoodfriend.Allthebest，SusanLuo4基础·自主学习核心·互动探究(Ⅱ)Preparationforwriting—Wordsandphrases①____________vt.建议②___________adj.不健康的③____________vt.鼓励④___________adj.有用的⑤____________vt.忠告，建议⑥________________闲暇⑦____________盼望，期望⑧_______________对……担心⑨____________喜爱⑩____________对……上瘾⑪____________集中精力于⑫___________________对……有益处⑬____________交朋友⑭____________收到……的来信⑮___________________玩得愉快recommendunhealthyencourageusefuladviceinone’ssparetimelookforwardtobeworriedaboutbeattractedtobeaddictedtoconcentrateonbegoodfor/dogoodtomakefriendshearfromenjoyoneself/havefun5基础·自主学习核心·互动探究Ⅱ.While-writing假如你是李华，你的好朋友苏茹在交友方面存在着一些困难，请根据下面提示给她写一封建议信。1.要交朋友首先要做一个朋友；2.要和朋友同甘共苦；患难之中的朋友才是真正的朋友；3.友谊需要时间和投入(effort)。6基础·自主学习核心·互动探究Step1Listtheoutlineofthepassage.Paragraph1：the____________oftheletterParagraph2：the____________thatyougiveParagraph3：thewriter’s____________purposesuggestionshope7基础·自主学习核心·互动探究Step2Listthewords，phrasesandsentences.1.Wordsandphrases①_____________________________n.建议②_____________________________n.情况③_____________________________交朋友④_____________________________做……有困难⑤_____________________________接受某人的建议⑥_____________________________和……同甘共苦⑦_____________________________需要⑧_____________________________全心全意tip/advice/suggestionsituationmakefriendshavetrouble/difficultyindoing...takeone’sadvicesharehappinessandsorrowwith...callforputone’sheartinto8基础·自主学习核心·互动探究2.Sentences①知道你在交友方面有麻烦，我很抱歉。(havetroublein...)______________________________________________________②如果你采纳我的建议，改变这种情况是很容易的。(be＋adj.＋todo)______________________________________________________③要交朋友为什么不先做一个朋友呢？(whynot)______________________________________________________④你和朋友同甘共苦难道不是一个好主意吗？(Wouldn’titbeagoodidea...？)________________________________________________________________________⑤正如一句谚语说的，患难之中的朋友才是真正的朋友。(asasayinggoes)______________________________________________________Iamsorrytoknowthatyouarehavingtroubleinmakingfriends.Thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Whynotbeafriendfirst，ifyouwanttomakefriends?Wouldn’titbeagoodideaifyousharehappinessandsorrowwithyourfriend?Justasasayinggoes,afriendinneedisafriendindeed.9基础·自主学习核心·互动探究Step3Draftthearticlebyusingthefollowingwordsandphrases.however，tobeginwith，inaddition，lastbutnotleast15Sept，2019DearSuRu，Iamsorrytoknowthatyouarehavingtroubleinmakingfriends.However，thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Herearesometipstohelpyou.10基础·自主学习核心·互动探究Tobeginwith，whynotbeafriendifyouwanttomakefriends？Inaddition，wouldn’titbeagoodideaifyousharehappinessandsorrowwithyourfriend?Justasasayinggoes，afriendinneedisafriendindeed.Lastbutnotleast，wouldn’titbeagoodideaifyouputyourheartintomakingfriends?Itiswellknowntousallthatfriendshipcallsfortimeandeffort.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful.Allthebest.Yours，LiHua11基础·自主学习核心·互动探究Ⅲ.Post-writing—polishingthepassageExchangeyourletterwithyourpartner，andpayattentiontothefollowingpoints.□1.Areallthepartsofaletterincludedandorganisedingoodorder?□2.Doesthewritergivereasonsfortheadvice?□3.Doesthewriteruseproperexpressionstogivesuggestions?□4.Doesthewriterusecommasandstopscorrectly?□5.Isthehandwritingeasytoread?12基础·自主学习核心·互动探究篇章结构Thefirstpart：thebeginning(dateandgreeting)oftheletterThesecondpart：thebody(fact-stating，youropinionandhope)oftheletterThethirdpart：theend(wishesandsignature)oftheletter13基础·自主学习核心·互动探究亮点表达1.建议信开头常用句式①Iknowyouarenowhavingtroublecommunicatingwithothers，andyoumayoftenfeellonely.我知道你现在在与人交流方面有些麻烦，你也可能经常感到孤独。②I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon...很高兴收到你就……征求建议的来信。③Herearesometips/afewsuggestionstohelpyou.这里有帮助你的一些建议。14基础·自主学习核心·互动探究2.表达建议常用句式①First(ly)，whynotjoinaclub?Ifyoudothis，youcanmakefriends.首先，为什么不参加一个俱乐部？如果你这样做的话，就会交到朋友。②Second(ly)，youshould/cantrytotalkwithothers.Then/Thatway，youwillfeelbetter.其次，你应该尽力与人交谈。这样，你会感觉好点。③Third(ly)，itwouldbeagoodideaifyoureadabookorlistentomusic.Bydoingthis，youwillcalmyourselfdown.第三，如果你看书或听音乐将会是个不错的主意。通过这样做，你会使自己平静下来。④Lastbutnotleast，youshouldtalkwithherfirst.最后但同等重要的是，你应该先和她谈一谈。⑤AsfarasIamconcerned/Inmyopinion，youshouldhelpeachother.就我而言/在我看来，你们应该互相帮助。15基础·自主学习核心·互动探究3.建议信结尾常用句式①Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful.我希望你会发现这些办法有用。②Astimegoeson，peoplewillknowyoubetteran