5-Unit 1 写作课--劝说信

Howtowriteapersuasiveletter?如何写好说服性信函？DearBob,I'msorrytolearnthatyoulikecomputergamesverymuchandoftenstayuplateplayingthem.I'mwritingtopersuadeyoutochangethishabit.Itiswell-knownthatthecomputergamesaveryexciting.However,theycangreatlyinfluencebothofyourhealthandstudiesifyouspenttoomuchtimeonthem.First,itisbadforyourhealth,especiallyyoureyes.Second,ifittakestoomuchtimeofyourfreetime,youhavenotimetodosomethingimportantlikereading.Third,ifyouoftenstayuplate,youwillfeeltiredthefollowingdayandwon'tbeabletodowellatschool.SoIhopeyouunderstandthebadeffectsofplayingcomputergamesandstopit.Yours,LiHua（阐述理由）（引出话题，表明目的）（总结全文，表达祝愿）1.2.3.文体时态人称信件一般现在时Thefirstperson（第一人称）Thesecondperson（第二人称）Step1审题的步骤:好文章的评分标准1.覆盖所有要点2.语言结构和选词恰当丰富3.有效使用连接词，层次清楚DearBob,I'msorrytolearnthatyoulikecomputergamesverymuchandoftenstayuplateplayingthem.I'mwritingtopersuadeyoutochangethishabit.ItiswellknownthatthecomputergamesaveryexcitingHowever,theycangreatlyinfluencebothofyourhealthandstudiesifyouspenttoomuchtimeonthem.First,itisbadforyourhealthespeciallyyoureyes.Second,ifittakestoomuchtimeofyourfreetimeyouhavenotimetodosomethingimportantlikereading.Third,ifyouoftenstayuplateyouwillfeeltiredthefollowingdayandwon'tbeabletodowellatschool.SoIhopeyouunderstandthebadeffectsofplayingcomputergamesandstopit.Yours,LiHua（阐述理由）（引出话题，表明目的）（总结全文，表达祝愿）（引出话题，表明目的）（总结全文，表达祝愿）Yours,LiHuaDearBob,I'msorrytolearnthatyouaresocrazyaboutcomputergamesandthatyouoftenstayuplateplayingthemI'mwritingtopersuadeyoutoquit.Thereisnodenyingthatcomputergamesareveryexciting.However,theycanhaveagreatinfluenceonbothyourhealthandstudiesifyouareaddictedtothem.First,itisharmfultoyourhealth,especiallyyoureyes.Second,itisawasteoftimebecauseyouhavemuchmoreimportantthingstodo,suchasreading.Third,ifyoudon'tgetagoodnightsrest,youwillfeeltiredthefollowingdayandwon'tbeabletofocusonyourstudiesTherefore,Ihopeyouunderstandtheharmfuleffectofplayingcomputergamesandgetridofthehabits.ItisyourturnnowHaveadiscussionwithyourteammates假设你是李华,你的外籍朋友Jack不久前选修了他们学校的汉语课程,由于感觉学习起来困难很大,他打算放弃请你给他写一封信，劝他坚持学习I’msorrytolearnthatyouwanttogiveuptheChinesecourse.I’mwritingtotrytopersuadeyoutocarryonwithit.Herearethereasons.Tobeginwith,itisnormalforyoutohavedifficultylearningaforeignlanguageatfirst,especiallyChinese.Butastheoldsayinggoes,“Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.”Sodon’tloseheart.Inaddition,learningChinesewellwillbeofgreatimportanceanduseforyou.NotonlywillithelpyoulearnmoreaboutChinesehistoryandculture,butalsoallowyoutocommunicatewithChinesepeoplebetter.Besides,asanativespeakerofChinese,I’mmorethanwillingtohelpyouwithit.Allinall,ifyou’redeterminedtolearnChinesewell,I’msureyouwillhaveagoodcommandofitoneday.IhopeyoucansticktoChineselearning.DearJack,I’msorrytolearnthatyouwanttogiveuptheChinesecourse.I’mwritingtotrytopersuadeyoutogoonwithit.Herearethereasons.Tobeginwith,itisnormalforyoutohavedifficultylearningaforeignlanguageatfirst,especiallyChinese.Sodon’tloseheart.Inaddition,IknowyoulikeChinaverymuchandwanttovisititsomeday.LearningChinesewellwillbeveryimportantandusefulforyou.NotonlywillithelpyoulearnmoreaboutChinesehistoryandculture,butalsoallowyoutocommunicatewithChinesepeoplebetter.Besides,asanativespeakerofChinese,I’mmorethanwillingtohelpyouwithit.Allinall,Ihopeyouwon’tgiveup,asIbelieveyoucanmakeitintheend.Bestwishes,LiHua