高考英语作文美化攻略

大冶实验高中陈莉娟1英语作文的华丽变身BeautifyyourComposition高三英语组姚晨大冶实验高中陈莉娟2词汇使用的四原则2、地道原则。3、避免重复原则4、后、高、长原则——后学到、较高级、较长词汇。大冶实验高中陈莉娟3应用了较多的词汇It’sveryhelpful.Itbenefitsalot./Itisofgreathelp.SuddenlyIcameupwithagoodidea.anincreasingnumberofpeopleYoureffortswillbeveryimportant.Youreffortswillmakeagreatdifference.moreandmorepeopleSuddenlyIhadagoodidea.大冶实验高中陈莉娟强调句名词性从句常用谚语…定语从句倒装句with复合结构非谓语动词被动句高级句型8大冶实验高中陈莉娟实战（1）Shecan’tcorrectlypronouncetheword.Shehastroubleinpronouncingtheword.SuddenlyIthoughtofagoodidea.Agoodideaoccurredtome.Agoodideasuddenlystruckme.9大冶实验高中陈莉娟实战（2）他昨天下午来的Hecamehereyesterdayafternoon.Hedidn’tcomehereuntilyesterdayafternoon.Notuntilyesterdayafternoondidhecomehere.Itwasnotuntilyesterdayafternoonthathecamehere.10大冶实验高中陈莉娟7将陈述句改为感叹句Topreventthepollutionisveryimportant．Sheisaclevergirl．Howimportantitistopreventthepollution!whataclevergirlsheis!大冶实验高中陈莉娟将陈述句改为倒装句Wecanachievesuccessinthisway.Itissoeasythatevenachildcandoit.Soeasyisitthatevenachildcandoit.Onlyinthiswaycanweachievesuccess.8大冶实验高中陈莉娟将简单句改为强调句Smokingdidgreatharmtohishealth.HowcanweimproveourEnglish?Itwassmokingthatdidgreatharmtohishealth.HowisitthatwecanimproveourEnglish?9大冶实验高中陈莉娟合并为同位语从句LiuXiangisanexcellentathlete.Hewonthefirstprizeinthe2004OlympicGames.Thewordistrue.Theactorwillgiveusaspeech.LiuXiang,anexcellentathlete,wonthefirstprizeinthe2004OlympicGames.Thewordthattheactorwillgiveusaspeechistrue.10大冶实验高中陈莉娟合并为定语从句The2008OlympicGameswasheldinBeijing,anditssloganwasOneWorldOneDream.YesterdaywewenttotheEastGate,andweboughtalotofclothes.The2008OlympicGames,whosesloganwasOneWorldOneDream,washeldinBeijing.YesterdaywewenttotheEastGate,whereweboughtalotofclothes.11大冶实验高中陈莉娟12一：肯定不如双否好二：陈述不如倒装妙三：主动不如被动巧四：分词结构不能少四不如誊写规范不要少大冶实验高中陈莉娟肯定不如双否好Thepostmancomesontimeeveryday.IhavemadegreatprogressinEnglishwithhishelp.Thepostmanneverfailstocomeontime.Icouldn’thavemadegreatprogressinEnglishwithouthishelp.13大冶实验高中陈莉娟陈述不如倒装妙Hedidn’tcomehereuntil5pm.Travellingcannotonlyrelaxus,butalsobroadenourhorizons.Notuntil5pm.didhecomehere.Itwasnotuntil5pm.thathecamehere.Notonlycantravellingrelaxus,butalsobroadenourhorizons.14大冶实验高中陈莉娟主动不如被动巧Wecanborrowfivebooks,andwecankeepthemforamonth.Themainproblemnowishowwecanpreventthisfromhappeningagain.Themainproblemnowishowthiscanbepreventedfromhappeningagain.Fivebookscanbeborrowedandtheycanbekeptforamonth.15大冶实验高中陈莉娟Ifweatherpermits,wewillgohiking.Weatherpermitting,wewillgohiking.Beingastudent,I’dliketoknowthediscount.分词结构不能少16一去（去连词）二看（看主语）三改（改分词）分词结构BecauseIamastudent,I’dliketoknowthediscount.大冶实验高中陈莉娟17ThankYou!欢迎各位领导和同事对我工作提出更好的意见。