大学英语四级作文谚语名言类

题型分析之一------谚语警句型Para.1(一般三句话）1.点明文章要阐述的谚语或名2.用自己的话解释这一谚语或名言的意思3.论点句,表明自己对这一谚语的观点态度Para.2（一般六句话）A.支持性的细节分论点（至少两个论点；举例子证明，可以用正反两方面的逻辑）B.从事实引出结论，再说明论点Para.3（一般二至三句）conclusion:阐明其现实或更深远意义•句型•1.•AnEnglishproverbsays,•Asthesayinggoes,•Oneofthegreatmenonceremarked,•Nearlyeverycivilizationhasitsownequivalenttotheproverb,•Aninspiringproverbechoinginmymindgoes,Oneofthegreatmenonceremarked,“Healthisabovewealth”.(没有必要用一对引号）改为：Asthesayinggoes,healthisabovewealth.•第二句•Itmeansthat…•Inotherwords,…•第三句•Itgoeswithoutsayingthat/•Itisobviouslyclearthat/•Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat•例子•1.Asthesayinggoes,healthisabovewealth.•1.Oneofthegreatmenonceremarked,lifewithouthealthislifeless.•1.Nearlyeverycivilizationhasitsownequivalenttotheproverb,lifethatlackshealthlackseverything.•2.Itmeansthathealthisofthetopmostimportance/valueinourlife.•2.Itindicatesthatmakingmoneyatthecostofhealthisnotworthwhile.•2.itmeansonlypeoplewhoareingoodhealthareabletoleadameaningfullife.•3.Icannotagreewithitmore.•3.Thoughtheproverbconveysomesense,Icouldnotfullyagreewithit.第二段•论点：•1.Healthisthefoundationofaqualitylife.Withoutagoodbody,theaccomplishmentswemade,therelationshipwekept,thesocialstatuswetryhardtobuildwillbecompletelyuseless.•例子：•StevieJobs,CEOoftheAppleCompany•businessmanwhoworksohardthathecollapseeventually/arichmanwithseverehealthproblems•Myfriends/myfather/myself•例子：•StevieJobs,CEOoftheAppleCompany•(Letus)TakeStevieJobforexample.•TakeStevieJobasanexample.Imaginehowmuchmorehecouldhavedonetotheworldifhehadnotdiedatsuchayoungage?(虚拟语气/反问句式)•TakeStevieJob,formerCEOofAppleCompanywhodiedattheageof56.•论点•Agoodbodyissomethingthroughwhichweareabletoexperiencetheworld.•例子•Arichpatient(出不了门的/坐轮椅的—confinedinawheelchair/confinedtohisroom)•Steviewonder/StephenHawking•Myfriends/myselfTakeStevieHawkingforexample.Anintellectualgiantasheis,thegreatmanundoubtedlymissesopportunitiestoexperiencethephysicalworldforhisparalysis.Whatapity!说理Withoutagoodhealth,wecannottravelorstudy,thusopeningourmindandenrichingourlife.•论点3：•Ifapersonalishealthy,hetendstoholdamoreoptimisticandmoreconfidentviewtowardstheworld.•说理•论点4：healthisamongafewthingsthatcannotbeboughtwithwealth.•说理•History/Oursocietyaboundswiththeexamplesof…•Edison/Columbus/Einstein•Suchexamples/instancesmightbegivenindefinitely,butthiswillbesufficienttoshowthat…•Ontheotherhand/Onthecontrary,if…•Thereishardlyamanwhocanachievesuccesswithout…•Allevidencepointsto/justifies/lendssupporttothefact…•结论•Foruscollegestudents,thesaying/proverbhasaprofoundandrealisticsignificance;Justimaginehowfarcanwemakeinouracademicstudy,ifwedon’thaveastrongbody?•Fromwhathasbeendiscussed/mentionedabove,•Tosumup,范文1•(第一段）Asthesayinggoes,lifethatlackshealthlackseverything.Itmeansthathealthisofthetopmostvalueinourlife.Icannotagreewithitmore.(3句)•(第二段）Firstofall,healthisthefoundationofaqualitylife.Withoutagoodbody,theaccomplishmentsonemade,therelationshiponekept,thesocialstatusonetriedhardtobuildwouldturnintonothingnesseventually.TakeStevieJobasanexample.Hecouldnolongerenjoythefruitofthehugeaccomplishmentshemadeafterhedieduntimelyat56.Furthermore,Agoodbodyissomethingthroughwhichoneisabletoexperiencetheworld.Withoutagoodhealth,onecannottravelorstudy,thusopeningourmindandenrichingourlife.Moreover,muchevidencepointstothefactahealthypersontendtoholdamoreoptimisticandmoreconfidentview,andcanfitintothesocietybetter.(7句)•(第三段）Tosumup,Healthcomesbeforeeverything.(1句)范文2•(第一段)Haveyoueverheardoftheproverb,withouthealthlifeisnotlife,lifeislifeless?Itmeansonlypeopleingoodhealthconditioncanenjoyameaningfullife.Thoughitconveys/carriessomesense,Icouldnotfullyagreewithit.(3句）•第二段AsfarasIamconcerned,importantashealthis,themeaningoflifedoesnotlieinhealth.论点1：Manypeopleofill-healthaccomplishgreatthingsinlife.TakeZhangHaidiforexample.Despiteherdisability,shetaughtherselfandmasteredquiteafewforeignlanguagessuchasEnglish,JapaneseandGerman.Sheturnedintoasuccessfultranslatorandauniversitygraduateeventually.Canyousaythatherlifeislifelessormeaningless?Definitelyno.(论点2)Furthermore,poorhealthsometimesisablessingindisguise.StephenHawkingonceremarked,notuntilhewasdiagnosedwithAIS,anincurabledisease,didhebegintoreallyfocushisattentiononhisrealinterest-spacecosmology.Therealizationthathisdaysarenumberedhelpedhimthinkreallyseriousabouthisresearch.•第三段Tosumup,Ithinkthemeaningoflifeliesnotinhealthbutinmanyothers.具体评分标准•8分——基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。•8-11分：句子意思清楚，没有或者几乎没有语法错误，逻辑连贯。但是简单句较多，最多出现一句较容易的定语从句或者强调句，且说理啰嗦，中心不够突出。•11分——切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。•11-14句子意思清楚，没有或者几乎没有语法错误，逻辑连贯。说理重点突出，紧凑清楚，能够灵活且正确运用多种句式。•14分——切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较强。基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。•其他类似的题型题型分析•话题写作（Topicwriting）–针对某一社会现象，分析原因并论述你的观点。–一般会给出中文提纲，要求按照提纲的顺序写作。–提纲的结构一般是：•现在存在某一现象（对现象本身进行描述）•分析造成这一现象原因或是现象会带来的影响•我的观点•社会现象/新事物•第一段如何写？•1.点明文章要讨论阐述的事物或现象2.我对这个事物或现象的基本看法•3.赞成的理由因为其重要性(或反对的理由因为其危害性)（更加具体的阐述自己的观点）题型分析–实例1–2012年6月真题–WriteacompositionentitledOnExcessivePackagingfollowingtheoutlinebelow:•目前许多商品存在过度包装的现象•出现这一现象的原因•我对这一现象的看法和建议题型分析–实例2–Modeltest4–WriteanessayonthetopicStopSpoilingYourC