The-Cons-and-Pros-of-Doing-a-Part-time-Job

Score:87TheConsandProsofDoingaPart-timeJobAtpresent,thereareseveraladvantagesforstudentstohaveparttimejobs.Forinstance,ithelpsustorealizethatnosuccesscomesfromnothing.Itenablesustobeindependentandbuildsupourselves-confidence.What'smore,part-timejobscancultivateoursenseofindependence.Therefore,part-timejobscangetthestudentsoutoftheivorytowerandprovideopportunitiesforustocontactsociety.Aseverythinghastwosides,thedisadvantagescan'tbeignored.Part-timejobscutintostudents'studytime.Someevenbecomesopreoccupiedwithmakingmoneythattheycan'tfocustheirattentiononstudying.Intheend,thestudentsmayfallbehindorfailintheirstudies.Inmyopinion,studentscanchoosetotakeupparttimejobsaccordingtoourownsituation.Themostimportantthingisforustokeepgoodbalance,putourstudyontopofthelistandassignanadequateamountoftimetoit.Professor'scommentsandsuggestions:1.Niceeffort（努力）.2.Thisdiscussionstayedmostlyonthetrailforthistopic.3.Counting（统计）thenumberofwordsinthecompositionfromyousupportsmyforecast（预见）thatthelengthwouldbejustwhatwasrequired.Yourpaperoffersaneffectiverefinement（提炼）ofthistopic.4.Yourarticlepresentsdistinguishedspelling.Pleasemaintainthishabit.5.Thisarticleconveysalmostperfectgrammar.Wehopeyouwillkeepcultivatingthisskill.6.Youshowedupeveryonebyresponding（提交作业）aheadofthedeadline.Usage:composition：作文；作品。英文里，writing,article,paper,piece,essay,creation，都可以表示“作文、文章”的意思。convey：表示；表达。convey还可表示“运送；传递”的意思。offer：呈现出；表现出。offer还可表示“提供；提出”的意思。present：显示。present还可表示“赠送；提出”的意思。showupeveryone：超过他人。staymostlyonthetrail：扣住主题。文章体检报告-13103023040女士基本信息所得分数87.29关键词数4关键词排名等级B文章长度171长度排名等级C拼写错误0语法评价A作业提交时间2014/09/29下午05:13:14是否准时是结构信息单词总数109词重复率1.57单词类别*88,6,9,6平均词长4.50平均句长171.00*“单词类别”指的是“常用词汇”、“次常用词”、“学术词汇”、“其他词汇”四类单词。