高考英语二轮复习资料ppt第四板块书面表达7步成文第六步打磨开头和结尾与众不同把分添

7步成文第六步打磨开头和结尾，“与众不同”把分添近三年高考英语全国卷的书面表达以应用文为主，一般要求写一封书信，书信一般有自己专门的开头格式。但固有的、模式化的开头会让阅卷老师多读生厌、疲惫不堪，因此要想给阅卷老师留下好的第一印象，就得有一个引人入胜、新颖别致的开头，这能够激发阅卷老师的兴趣，博得好感。有了一个好的开头，若再加上一个画龙点睛的结尾，那就真可谓锦上添花，无可挑剔了。“头好一半文”“尾好更添韵”说的就是开头和结尾的重要性。一、“四档”“五档”差在哪[典例感悟](2017·全国卷Ⅰ)假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括：1．时间和地点；2.内容：学习唐诗；3.课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。“冤屈的”四档作文(得分17分)DearLeslie，I'vedecidedtoteachyouTangpoetryinRoom101Building1at8amonWednesday,whichwilllasttwohours.TangpoetryisasymbolofChinesetraditionalliteratureandplaysanimportantpartinChineseculture,soit'snecessaryforyoutohaveagoodknowledgeofit.Besides,inordertolearnTangpoetrywell,you'dbettergetsomeinformationaboutTangDynastybeforeclass.Lookingforwardtoyourearliestreply.Yours，LiHua升格后的五档作文(得分23分)DearLeslie，IamwritingtotellyoumyplanforthecomingChineselesson.I'vedecidedtoteachyouTangpoetryinRoom101Building1at8amonWednesday,whichwilllasttwohours.TangpoetryisasymbolofChinesetraditionalliteratureandplaysanimportantpartinChineseculture,soit'snecessaryforyoutohaveagoodknowledgeofit.Besides,inordertolearnTangpoetrywell,you'dbettergetsomeinformationaboutTangDynastybeforeclass.Wouldyoutellmeifit'sconvenientforyou?Furthermore,whenyoumeetwithsomepuzzlingquestions,don'thesitatetoturntome.Yours，LiHua名师点评左栏的文章运用了定语从句、并列句结构等，asymbolof,playanimportantpartin,haveagoodknowledgeof的应用恰到好处，总体是一篇不错的作文。但美中不足的是缺少了文章开头的点题和恰当的结尾，不仅使得文章读起来稍欠流畅，而且未达到词数要求。右栏的作文加上开头和改编了结尾使得文章总体上得到了升华，并且达到了词数要求，从而上升了一个档次，从四档跨入了五档。二、如何由“四档”升“五档”(一)应用文常见开头段的写法——开门见山咨询信求职信应用文的特点是开门见山，用简洁的语言引出文章的主题，使读者清楚文章要表达什么内容，常用的开头有：(2018·衡水模拟)IamwritingtoaskforsomeinformationaboutthepreparationoftheEnglishcontest.I'mwritingtoinquire/askforsomeinformationabout...(2018·浙江高考)LearningthatourEnglishAssociationneedssomevolunteerstomeettheforeignstudentsvisitingourschool,I'dliketoapplyfortheposition.·I'mwritingtoapplyforthepositionof...·Learningfrom...,I'dliketoapplyforthepost...(2018·烟台模拟)I'mwritingtomakeanapologytoyouformybeingnotabletoattendtheparty.I'mwritingtomakeanapologytoyoufor...道歉信(2018·芜湖模拟)IamLiHua,aconsumerfromChina.Iamwritingtocomplainaboutyourpoorservice.I'mwritingtocomplainabout...投诉信(2018·全国卷Ⅰ)Now,Iamwritingtoinformyouofsomerelevantdetails.I'mwritingtoexpressmyviewconcerning.../toinformyouof...建议信(2018·杭州模拟)Fromthebottomofmyheart,Iwouldliketoconveymythankstoyouforyourserviceofhighquality.·I'mwritingtoexpressmythanksfor...·I'dliketoconveymyheartfeltthankstoyoufor...感谢信(2018·全国卷Ⅱ)MayIhaveyourattention,please?Recently,anoutstandingmoviewillbeshowninourcampus.(2018·全国卷Ⅱ)Inordertolearnmoreaboutthedevelopmentofourschool,allthestudentsarewelcometowatchtheshortfilmGrowingTogether,whichisadocumentaryonthehistoryofourschool.·MayIhaveyourattention,please?Recently,a/an...willbe＋过去分词＋in...·Inorderto...,allthestudentsarewelcometo...·Thereisgoingtobea/an...＋时间＋地点通知(2018·天津高考)IamwritingtoinviteyoutohelpustotakepartintheWorldAdolescentRoboticsCompetitiontobeheldinTianjinattheendofthisJuly.·I'mwritingtoinviteyouto...·I'mwritingtotellyouthattherewillbea...Wouldyouliketo...？邀请信(二)应用文常见结尾段的写法——表示期待咨询信求职信在应用文的结尾处我们常使用一些功能句式，向对方表示友善的感谢或亲切的问候，表达愿望或期待等。常用的结尾有：(2018·济南模拟)Iamwaitingforyourreplyatyourearliestconvenience.I'mwaitingforyourearlyreply.(2018·浙江高考)Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldgivemethechance.·Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldconsidermyapplication/givemethechance.·Ihopetohavetheopportunityofaninterview.(2018·萍乡模拟)Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldmakeupforthelossassoonaspossible.I'dappreciateitifyou...assoonaspossible.投诉信(2018·全国卷Ⅰ)Hopefully,thesesuggestionswouldbeofgreathelptoyou.Iamlookingforwardtoyourgoodnews.·Intheend,Iwillbeverygladifyoufindmysuggestionsuseful.·Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionspractical.·I'llappreciateyoutakingmysuggestionsintoaccount.建议信(2018·新乡模拟)Imustthankyouagainforyourtimelyhelp.·Imustthankyouagainforyourgeneroushelp.·Pleaseacceptmygratitude,nowandalways.感谢信(2018·全国卷Ⅱ)Hopefully,youwouldmakeittoouractivity.Ihavetheconfidencethatyouwillhaveagreattimethen.·Wehopethatyouwouldmakeittoouractivity.·Wearelookingforwardtoyourwarmparticipation.通知(2018·天津高考)I'mlookingforwardtoyourjoiningmyteam.I'mlookingforwardtoyourparticipation.邀请信(2018·太原模拟)Isincerelyhopethatyouwillbeabletothinkinmypositionandacceptmyapologies.·Onceagain,I'msorryforanyinconveniencecaused.·Isincerelyhopethatyouwillkindlyacceptmyapologies.道歉信[课堂应用体验]翻译下列开头和结尾句1．我代表学生会给您写信请求帮助我们的校友。2．如果方便的话，我希望你能接受我们的邀请。3．我写信申请在您的大学里学习。Iamwritingtoyou,onbehalfoftheStudents'Union,toaskforhelpforourschoolmate.Wehopethatyouwillacceptourinvitationifitisconvenientforyou.I'mwritingtoapplytostudyinyouruniversity.4．我写信告诉您我的问题，这个问题困扰了我很长时间。5．我写信给你是因为我有些确实严肃的问题想要和您交流。6．7月25日至8月10日在北戴河将有一个英语暑假夏令营。7．我的确希望你能考虑我的建议。Iamwritingtotellyoumyproblem,whichhastroubledmeforalongtime.IamwritingtoyoubecauseIhavesomethingreallyserioustocommunicatewithyou.ThereisgoingtobeanEnglishsummercampinBeidaihefromJuly25toAugust10.Idohopeyouwillconsidermysuggestion.8．对于您慷慨的帮助，我再次表示感谢。9．我为给你带来这么大的麻烦再次向你道歉。10．我想向你致以最诚挚的祝贺。11．如果你能认真对待我的投诉，我会非常高兴。12．请一定按时参加。Thanksagainforyourgeneroushelp.Iapologizetoyouagainfo