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四年之约，与你相伴1大学四级作文范文（一）FirePreventiononCampus1.前段时间校园火灾频发，造成生命和财产损失2.分析火灾发生的原因3.作为学生，如何预防校园火灾发生●审题概述●这是一分析火灾原因和如何预防火灾为中心的文章，撰写时重点即在于此。开篇综述校园火灾频发情形及造成的生命和财产损失，然后说明火灾原因，最后提出可能的火灾预防措施。第一段，主要概述；第二段，说明原因；第三段，详细论述措施。【范文】FirePreventiononCampusPeoplearealarmedbythesuccessionofcampusfiresinrecentyears.Ineachoftheseaccidents,heavycasualtieswerereported–houseswereburneddown,studentslosttheirlives,andpropertiesweredamaged.Facedwithsuchachillingfact,peoplekeepasking,“Whatonearthresultsintheserepeatedtragedies?”Abriefsurveyofthemrevealsthathumanfactorsstillprovetobetheleadingcauses.Forexample,threeofthesefireswerecausedbythestudents’useofelectricwater-heaters.Asstudentsoftenleavetheheatersunattended,therisksareratherhighshouldthewaterinthebottleboildrywhilenooneisaroundtoturnoffthepower.Inothercases,fireswerealsocausedbystoves,candles,cigarettebutts,etc.Sincemostofthesedisasterscouldhavebeenpreventedifproperprecautionshadbeentaken,studentsshouldbebettereducatedontheimportanceandmeasuresoffirecontrol.Thefollowingthreeremindersareofparticularimportanceforusstudents:First,learnhowtouseafireextinguisher.Second,double-checkcandles,heaters,stovesandotherelectricappliances,andmakesuretherearenoopenflamesbeforeleavingrooms.Lastly,donotsmokeinthedorm.◇第一段思路点评：概述并引入下文◇语言点提示：（1）此句Whatonearthresultsintheserepeatedtragedies?常可作为过渡句，引出下文（2）注意描述有关火灾客观事实，多使用被动语态，如arealarmedby，werereported，wereburneddown，weredamaged，Facedwith。◇第二段思路点评：论述火灾的主要原因是使用电热水器，还有造成火灾的次要原因是实用电炉、蜡烛和乱扔烟蒂◇语言点提示：electricwater-heaters电热水器◇第三段思路点评：详述预防火灾的三点措施，注意使用连接词语first,second,lastly。◇语言点提示：takeprecautions采取预防措施fireextinguisher灭火器（二）EnhanceAwarenesstoGuardagainstCampusThefts1.校园盗窃案件时有发生2.物品被盗的原因3.学生如何加强防盗意识●审题概述●这是一篇论述校园物品被盗和加强防盗意识的文章。第一段，主要陈述校园盗窃案件发生的情况。第二段，主要分析校园物品被盗的原因。第三段，主要阐述学生怎样增强防盗意识。【范文】EnhanceAwarenesstoGuardagainstCampusThefts“Ifyoudon’twanttowakeupandfindyouhavenopantstowear,you’dbetterputthemoninsleep,”goesapopularjokeamongstudents.Obviously,campustheftshavebecomeincreasinglyannoyingastheyoccurfarmoreoftenthanbefore.Anditseemsthatthethievesarelesschoosythesedays,withtheirtargetsrangingwidelyfrombikes,cellphones,purses,pre-paidICcardstosunglasses,bags,andevenunderwear.Inshort,anythingthatworthadimeislikelytobestolen.Whatmakesstudentstheeasytargets?Thereasonsarenothardtofind.ButIbelieveofallthesereasons,thelackofanti-theftalertnessisthemostimportant.Forlackofalertness,thestudentstendtoleavethedoorsandwindowswideopenduringsleepatnoonoratnightin四年之约，与你相伴2summer.Forthesamereason,they’llalsoleavetheirbikesunlockedbeforeastoreorbyaroad,orforgettotakeawaytheirpersonalstuffbeforetheygooutoftheclassroomtomakeaphonecall.Theseactsundoubtedlyhaveincreasedtheirexposuretothelight-fingeredmonsters.Inordertominimizepossiblelosses,thestudentsmuststayonguardinthefirstplace,asawarenessofthetheftsaroundoftenmakesabigdifference.Tobemorespecific,thestudentsshouldnothideanytemptingamountofcashinthedorm.Putitinthebankinstead.Besides,donotleaveanyvaluableitemsunattended.Takethemwhereveryougo.Inaddition,it’sadvisabletodevelopaneighbourhoodwatchprogrammewithotherstudentsinthedormandneighbouringdorms.◇第一段思路点评：陈述校园盗窃案件发生的情况◇语言点提示：itseemsthat此句型表示一种可能性◇第二段思路点评：说明被盗原因◇语言点提示：（1）Whatmakesstudentstheeasytargets?此句引出下文（2）anti-theftalertness防盗意识（3）lackofalertness缺乏警惕（4）light-fingered小偷小摸的、惯行扒窃的◇第三段思路点评：阐述如何加强防盗意识◇语言点提示：注意关联词语inthefirstplace，Besides，Inaddition的使用可使行文更富逻辑性。（三）HowWillOurLifeGoonwithoutInternet?1.网络提供给了人们丰富多彩和便捷的生活2.很多人开始感觉离开网络寸步难行3.你对网络依赖症的看法●审题概述●本文是一篇论述你对网络与人们生活关系的文章。第一段，侧重简述网络给人们生活的多彩、便利。第二段，详述网络与人们生活的紧密度。第三段，论述对网络依赖的观点。【范文一】HowWillOurLifeGoonwithoutInternet?IfaskedwhethertheInternetisthegreatestdiscoveryofthe20thcentury,myanswerwouldbeyes.TheInternethasdrawntheworldclosertogether,realizedcountlessincredibledreams,andprovidedmodernpeoplewithagreatmanyconveniencesandabrilliantlife.Today,manypeoplesimplyfeeltheycannotlivewithouttheInternet.Governmentspublishtheirlatestpoliciesanddecisionsonlineforworldwiderecognition.Politicalcampaignsareoftendoneonlinetogainwiderpublicsupport.CompaniesandenterprisesresorttotheInternetformorebusinessopportunitiesandpotentialcustomershomeandabroad.UniversitiesandresearchersturntotheInternetifthey’dseekinternationalcooperationorfunding.Commonfolkslikeusalsorelyonthecyberworldinvariousways,forcommunication,entertainment,bankingandshopping.True,thepoweroftheInternetisallpervasiveanditsmanynegativeeffectsarealreadyvisible.Forexample,Internetaddictstendtowithdrawtotheirownfantasyworldratherthancommunicatewitharealperson.Childrenareexposedtoonlinepornographyandviolence.Internetfraudsareaneverydayoccurrence.Inviewofallthis,youareadvisedtousetheInternetwithwisdom.Keepitatasafedistanceandneverloseyourself.◇第一段思路点评：综述网络给人们生活带来的多彩和便捷。两个长句足矣。第一句用if引导的条件句引出“网络”话题，第二句概述网络带给多彩和便捷的生活。◇语言点提示：hasdrawn…,realized,andprovided此为谓语连动式的运用。◇第二段思路点评：详述网络与人们生活的紧密关系，先总述，后分述。◇语言点提示：resortto借助、诉诸、求助于◇第三段思路点评：先陈述人们对网络的依赖，再谈对此的看法。◇语言点提示：（1）negativeeffects副作用、反面作用四年之约，与你相伴3（2）addicts成瘾者、依恋者（3）fantasyworld虚拟世界、虚幻世界（4）pornography色情表演、色情作品（5）fraud欺骗、诈骗【范文二】Asaprimarysourceofinforma