新人教版必修一Unit2-Reading-for-writing

Period4ReadingForWritingUnit2TravelingAround学科网创原家独Howtowritetoyourfriendanimpressivetravelplan?Whatkindsofaspectsshouldbeincluded?•Paragraph1:mainpurposeforthetrip___________________•Paragraph2:otherplansforthetrip__________________•Paragraph3:transport________________________________•Paragraph4:finalthoughts__________________ReadRichard’semailtohisfriendandthebrochurethathefoundsilentlyandsolvethetaskbelow.Paragraph1:gotoXi'antoseetheTerracottaArmyParagraph1:gototheShaanxiHistoryMuseum,theXi'anCityWall,andafewotherfamoussightsParagraph3:takethetrain,leaventhedaybeforetheOctoberholidaybeginsandarriveat9:30a.m.Paragraph4:writeagainsoonandsendphotos.Readtounderlinethewordsandphrasesusedtoexpressemotionintheemail.Thencompletethesentencesbelow.Itisamazingsight.Itis____________Iamamazed.It'salmostunbelievable.Ican’t_______________.It'shard_________________It'san_____________________story.amazing.believeittobelieve.unbelievablewriteatravelplan.PretendyouareXiaoLiandreplytoRichard'semail.学科网创原家独writeatravelplan.范文：DearRichard，Iamprettythrilledtohavereceivedyourletter,knowingthatyouaretouringXian,whichisanamazingchoice.I'mwritingtoyouaboutmytravellingplanforthecomingvacation.I,togetherwithmyparentsintendtogotoShandongProvincebecauseItherearelotsofstrikingscenicspotstoexplorethere.Ifwego,wewillhaveanactiveholidayclimbingMountTai.Besides,wecanexplorefamouslakesandspringsinJi'nan.Moreover,wecanalsovisitQufu,whereConfuciuswasburied.Ithinkwewillenjoyourstaythere.weplantotravel5daysand4nights.Itcostsonly1300yuanperperson.Itsoundsgreat,doesn'tit?Lookingforwardtoyourcomingandreceivingyourpictures.LoveXiaoLi旅游计划是一种常见的应用文写作。旅游可分为观光游、文化游、美食游及探险游等不同类型，因此旅游计划也要根据不同的旅游目的进行设计。常规的旅游计划需要明确以下几个方面的问题:TravelplanWhenwillyouleavefor？Whereisyourthedestination?Howwillyougetthere?Whatwillyoudothere?Howlongwillyouthere?Isthereaclearpurposeforthetrip?写法指导学科网创原家独写法指导为了提升旅行计划的层级，还需注意以下几个方面的问题:1.每段是否有明确清晰的主题;2.用一般现在时代替一般将来时:3.用更高级的形容词词汇。例如:表达“好”时，不要总用“nice”,我们还可以用“smart,clean,excellent,exciting,beautiful,wonderful,clever,famous,grand”等表达更具有指向性的同汇:4.用更高级的动词词汇。比如:我们可以用“seemstand,lie.getstay,remain,look.sound,become.keep,grow”等代替be;5.所有“专有名词”要大写:6.文章最后要有适当的总结性语言。写法指导[常用句式]placeofinterest名胜古迹touristattractions旅游景点historicsites历史遗迹Must-seeattractions必看景点goonaholiday/takeavacation去度假checkin登记人住checkout结账退房enjoythesceneryofnature欣赏自然美景gosightseeing观光feellikedoingsth.想要做某事学科网创原家独写法指导[常用句式]bepreparedtodosth,准备做某事mean/intend/plantodosth.打算/计划做某事decide/bedeterminedtodosth.决定做某事lookforwardtodoingsth,盼望做某事long/hope/wish/wanttodosth,渴望/希望/想做某事wishsb.apleasantjourney祝某人旅途愉快Whenwearetiredfromwork,whynotstopandgoouttoenjoy…当我们因工作而感到疲惫时，为什么不走出.....AsfarasI'mconcerned,thetripisverymeaningful.据我所知，该旅行十分有意义。Ontheonehand,wecan...Ontheotherhand,itwillhelpus…一方面，我们可以..另.方面.它可以帮助我们...Theplacewherewe'll...is…我们.....地方超....学科网创原家独巩固提升假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Mike想在暑假到中国旅游，请你为他做一个旅行计划,内容包括:1.时间和地点;2.活动内容。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3.开头和结尾已经给出,不计人总词数。DearMike,I'mdelightedtoreceiveyourletteraskingforhelptotravelin学科网创原家独【参考范文】DearMike,I'mdelightedtoreceiveyourletter,askingforhelptotravelinBeijing.Inmyopinion,theGreatWallisthefirstchoiceforyou,whichisoneoftheSevenWondersoftheWorld.IfyoucometoBeijingwithoutclimbingtheGreatWall,it'sjustlikegoingtoPariswithoutvisitingtheEiffelTower.Besidesthis,you'dbetterenjoyChineseoperaandChinesefolkmusic,whichwillsurelyhelpyouunderstandChineseculturemoredeeply.Theseactivitiestakeabouttwodays.Ifyouneedmorehelp,Icanshowyouaroundotherplacesofinterest.Lookingforwardtoyourcoming!Yours.LiHua【名师点评】本文格式准确、要点齐全、结构完整、层次清晰。尤其是关联词语的运用恰到好处，使整个语篇结构紧凑。叙述具体、语言得当，逻辑通顺，具有很强的感染力。高级词汇delightedchoiceenjoysurelydeeply精彩短语和关联词I'mdelightedInmyopinionthefirstchoiceforyouBesidesthis,helpyouunderstandChineseculturemoredeeply.showyouaroundotherplacesofinterest.Lookingforwardto增分句型I'mdelightedtoreceiveyourletter,askingforhelptotravelinBeijing.Inmyopinion,theGreatWallisthefirstchoiceforyou,whichisoneoftheSevenWondersoftheWorld.