新教材译林版高中英语必修第三册课件-Unit1Natureinthebalance表达作文巧升格

Unit1Natureinthebalance表达作文巧升格写一封建议信本单元的写作任务是建议信，属于应用文。建议信的目的是向有关组织或个人提出建议，所提建议旨在针对某种事物或现象，提出一些改进的措施。建议信一般采取三段式结构。[基本框架]1．开头——提出写建议信的缘由。2．主体——写出建议的具体内容，并指出你所提出的建议可能会带来的好处。3．结尾——表明希望自己的建议被采纳。[常用词块]1．wildlife野生生物2．extinction灭绝3．indangerof处于……危险中4．withthedevelopmentof...随着……的发展5．takemeasures/steps采取措施6．protect...from...保护……免受……7．stopsb.fromdoingsth.阻止某人做某事8．resultin导致9．payattentionto注意10．tomakemattersworse使事情更糟糕的是11．low­carbon低碳的12．polluted受污染的13．arouseone'sawarenessof...唤起某人的……意识14．runout用完15．adjustto适应[常用语句]精彩开头(1)I'mwritingtotellyouthat...(2)Recentlywehavemadeasurveythat...(3)Manypeopleareworriedabout...(4)Itworriesmoreandmorepeoplethat...丰满主体(1)Weintendto...tohelp/save/protect...(2)Wearereadytocallonpeopleto...(3)Wefeellikedoing...toteachtheillegalhuntersalesson...(4)We'drathernot...butdo...(5)We'dliketo...topunishthosewhodoharmtowildlife.余味结尾(1)Ihopethatmysuggestionsarehelpfulforyourdecision­makinganyway.(2)Ibelievethatyouwilltakemysuggestionsintoseriousaccount.(3)Iwouldbemorethanhappytoseeimprovement.(4)Iwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyouforfurtherdetails.(5)Weneedyoursupporttomakemoreandmorepeople...假如你叫李华，你所生活的城市周围有很多动植物正逐渐减少，对此你想向有关部门写一封信，分析造成这种现象的原因，并根据实际情况提出切实可行的几条建议。以下几条要点要包括在内：1．野生动植物的现状；2．分析造成许多野生动植物濒临灭绝的原因；3．提出几条保护野生动植物的具体措施。注意：1．词数80左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2．开头语和结束语已给出，不计入总词数。DearSir/Madam，I'mwritingtogivesomesuggestionstoprotectthewildlifelivinginandaroundourcity._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopemysuggestionsarehelpful.Yourssincerely，LiHua[参考范文]DearSir/Madam，I'mwritingtogivesomesuggestionstoprotectthewildlifelivinginandaroundourcity.Asweknow，manyspeciesofwildlifeareindangerofextinction.Thisisbecausetheenvironmentthattheyarelivinginhasbeendestroyedgreatly.Theynotonlyhavelittletoeat，butalsocanbekilledbyhumanbeings.Personally，moremeasuresshouldbetakentoprotectthemfrombeinghurt.Firstly，morelawsmustbemadetostoppeoplefromcuttingdowntrees.Secondly，allthefactoriesmustcleanthewastewaterbeforeitispouredintoriversorlakes.Thirdly，morereservesshouldbesetupsothattheycanlivesafely.Ihopemysuggestionsarehelpful.Yourssincerely，LiHua