my dream(550字)

mydream(550字)WhenIwasthreeyearsold,mymotherhiredatutortoteachmepiano.Itissuchaclassicstorythateveryparentwantstheirdaughtertobeanelegantlady.Soplayingpianoisthebestwaytoshowelegance.ButmaybeIwasnottalentedinplayingpiano,Ishowedlessinterestandfinally,mymotherhadgivenupherpianodream.NowIamveryinterestedinpainting,IwillpaintmanypictureswhenIamfree.Myteacherspokehighlyofmewhenshetookalookatmyworks.MymotherhasrealizedthatIfoundmytalentandshefelthappyforme.修改后：WhenIwasthreeyearsold,mymotherhiredatutortoteachmepiano.Itissuchaclassicstorythateveryparentwantstheirdaughtertobeanelegantlady.Soplayingpianoisthebestwaytoshowelegance.ButmaybeIwasnottalentedinplayingpiano,Ishowedlessinterestinit.Finally,mymotherhadtogiveupherpianodream.NowIamveryinterestedinpainting,IwillpaintmanypictureswhenIamfree.Myteacherspokehighlyofmewhenshetookalookatmyworks.MymotherhasrealizedthatIfoundmytalentandshefeelshappyforme.修改老师：Andy老师初一:蓝，，，作文网专稿未经允许不得转载