高二英语概要写作Summary-Writing定稿12.19

SummaryWriting阅读与构思档次描述第五档（21—25分）—理解准确，涵盖全部要点。—能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇。—有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所完成的概要结构紧凑。—完全使用自己的语言。(1)togetallthekeypoints(2)tostatethepointswithaccurategrammaticalstructuresandwords(3)tomakeyoursummarycoherent(连贯）(4)toexpressthepointsinyourownwordsHowtowriteagoodsummary?(1)togetallthekeypoints(4)toexpressthepointsinyourownwordsReadingforgeneralinformation1.Thispassageis_____A.Narrative-tellsastorybasedonrealorimaginaryexperiencesB.Expository-explainsorconveysinformationC.Persuasive-triestoconvincethereadertoagreewithanopinionortotakeaction2.Structure?A.general—specificB.specific---generalvisitingcolleges[Para.1][Para.2-4]3.Topic?ReadingfortopicsentencesTopicTopicsentencesPara.1Para.2Para.3Para.4It’sareallygoodideatovisitcollegesbeforeyouapply.There’snoexcusenottovisittheschoolsinyourlocalarea.Ifcampusvisitsaren’t…,attheveryleastyoushouldfindsometimebetweenapplyingandgettingyouracceptanceletters.Now,iftimeandmoneyaremakingitimpossible,thencheckouttheonlinecollegefairs.It’sareallygoodideatovisitcollegesbeforeyouapply.There’snoexcusenottovisittheschoolsinyourlocalarea.Ifcampusvisitsaren’t…,attheveryleastyoushouldfindsometimebetweenapplyingandgettingyouracceptanceletters.Now,iftimeandmoneyaremakingitimpossible,thencheckouttheonlinecollegefairs.Tip1:Toworkouttheoutlineofthepassageisavitalstepbeforesummarywriting.Outlinemakeadecisionaboutthecollegeyou’dliketoapplyButkeepinmindthatyouaremakingadecisionaboutthenextfouryearsofyourlife…Butkeepinmindthatyouaremakingadecisionaboutthenextfouryearsofyourlife…It’sareallygoodideatovisitcollegesbeforeyouapply.Butkeepinmindthatyouaremakingadecisionaboutthenextfouryearsofyourlife.There’snoexcusenottovisittheschoolsinyourlocalarea.Ifcampusvisitsaren’t…,attheveryleastyoushouldfindsometimebetweenapplyingandgettingyouracceptanceletters.Now,iftimeandmoneyaremakingitimpossible,thencheckouttheonlinecollegefairs.Isitagoodsummary?Readingforpoints①It’sareallygoodideatovisitcollegesbeforeyouapplybecausetheirwebsitescanallstarttolookandsoundthesame.②Nothingwillgiveyouthesenseofwhatitwillactuallybeliketoliveonacollegecampus(校园)likevisitingandseeingforyourselfthedorms,classroomsandathleticequipmentand,ofcourse,thestudents.③seemsalittlecrazyoncesenioryearhitstofindthetimetovisitcollegecampuses,anditcanalsobepriceyiftheschoolsyouareapplyingtohappentobemorethanacarrideaway.④Butkeepinmindthatyouaremakingadecisionaboutthenextfouryearsofyourlife,anddoalltheresearchyoucantomakesureyouaremakingtherightone.Para.1Tip2:Payattentiontothetransitionalwords(过渡词)andimportantsentencepatternswhichindicatelogicalrelationandthewriter’sopinion.①It’sareallygoodideatovisitcollegesbeforeyouapplybecausetheirwebsitescanallstarttolookandsoundthesame.②Nothingwillgiveyouthesenseofwhatitwillactuallybeliketoliveonacollegecampus(校园)likevisitingandseeingforyourselfthedorms,classroomsandathleticequipmentand,ofcourse,thestudents.③Itseemsalittlecrazyoncesenioryearhitstofindthetimetovisitcollegecampuses,anditcanalsobepriceyiftheschoolsyouareapplyingtohappentobemorethanacarrideaway.④Butkeepinmindthatyouaremakingadecisionaboutthenextfouryearsofyourlife,anddoalltheresearchyoucantomakesureyouaremakingtherightone.Para.1Shouldweincludetheunderlinedpartsinoursummary?①It’sareallygoodideatovisitcollegesbeforeyouapplybecausetheirwebsitescanallstarttolookandsoundthesame……………④Butkeepinmindthatyouaremakingadecisionaboutthenextfouryearsofyourlife,anddoalltheresearchyoucantomakesureyouaremakingtherightone.Para.1Tip3:Leaveouttheminordetails（次要细节）whichhelpsmakeclearthemajorpoints.C.Visitingcollegesbeforehandisveryimportanttohelpyoumakearightdecisionaboutthecollege.Thebestversion?A.Thecollegewebsiteslookingsimilar,visitingandexploringthecampusinpersonbecomenecessary.C.Visitingcollegesbeforehandisveryimportanttohelpyoumakearightdecisionaboutthecollege.B.It’sareallygoodideatovisitcollegesbeforeapplyingtomakesureyouaremakingarightdecision.Para.2①There'snoexcusenottovisittheschoolsinyourlocalarea.②Infact,alotofcollegeapplicationsevenaskifyouhavevisitedcampus,andobviously,ifyouliveacrossthecountrythatwon'tbeasmuchofapossibility,butifyoulivenearby,gocheckitout!askifyouhavevisitedcampusWhyshouldwevisittheschoolsinyourlocalarea?Shouldweincludethispointinoursummary?aminordetailPara.2①There’snoexcusenottovisittheschoolsinyourlocalarea.TrytoexpressthissentenceinyourownwordsTip4:Changingthepartofspeech(词性)andreplacingtheoriginalwordswithsynonymous(同义)substitutions(替代品)areusefulwaystosumup.Youhavetopayavisittothecollegeswhentheyarenearwhereyoulive.①Ifcampusvisitsaren‘tgoingtohappenbeforeyouapply,attheveryleastyoushouldfindsometimebetweenapplyingandgettingyouracceptanceletterstovisittheschoolsyou’dliketoattend.②Itcansaveyoualotofheartacheifyouruleoutnowthethingsthatyoudon'tlikeaboutcertaincampuses,thingsthatyouwouldn'tknowunlessyouactuallyvisit.Para.3Why?saveyoualotofheartacheShouldweincludetheunderlinedpartsinoursummary?explanationaminordetail①Ifcampusvisitsaren’tgoingtohappenbeforeyouapply,attheveryleastyoushouldfindsometimebetweenapplyingandgettingy