2021学年新教材高中英语Unit2Onwardsandupwards表达作文巧升格学案外研版选择性

-1-Unit2Onwardsandupwards经历感受类写作该类写作描述个人经历，常以短文或日记等文体呈现；以一般过去式为主，按照事件发展的顺序来记叙。可以用一些与时间相关的副词如then，later，next串联句子。至于感受部分，同学们平时可以多积累相关的单词或短语。[基本框架]1．开头(beginning)——引出主题2．主体(body)——介绍事件3．结尾(ending)——发表感受[常用词块]1．anunforgettableexperience一次难忘的经历2．tomyjoy/delight令我高兴的是3．seesb.off为某人送行4．afive­daytour为期五天的旅行5．livea．..life过着……样的生活6．winthefirstprize获得一等奖7．thinkhighlyof高度赞扬8．setagoodexampleforsb.给某人树立好的榜样[常用语句]★精彩开头1．LastweekIwenttomountEmeiinSichuanprovincewithmyfamily.上周我和家人去了四川省的峨眉山。2．IwillneverforgettheexperiencewhenIwenttoBeijinglastyear.我永远不会忘记去年去北京的经历。3．LastnightIwasbusypreparingformytestwhenIheardaloudnoise.昨天晚上我正忙于准备考试，突然我听到一个很大的声音。★正文佳句1．OnthehotafternoonoflastSaturday，LiYuwentdowntownandwaitedfromonestoretoanother.上周六的一个炎热的下午，李玉去了市中心，从一家商店到另一家商店。2．Ilookedinthedirectionofthecallandsawaboyfallingintotheriver.-2-我朝呼叫的方向看，看见一个男孩掉进河里。3．Throwingthefishingpole，Idashedoverlikeanarrow，jumpedintotheriverandswamveryquicklytowardstheboy.我扔下钓竿，像箭一样冲了过去，跳进河里，飞快地向男孩游去。★余味结尾1．However，maybeallofmyeffortsarenotmadeinvain.然而，也许我所有的努力都没有白费。2．HowIwishIcouldgobacktoenjoymiddleschoollifeoncemore!我多么希望我能再次回到中学生活中去！3．Buttheywillremainahappymemoryallmylife.但它们会成为我一生的快乐回忆。你的美国笔友Bob对钓鱼很有兴趣。请你根据以下要点，写出你和你的爸爸暑假期间某天去钓鱼的经历，通过电子邮件发给Bob，让他分享。要点包括：1．所带器具和食物等；2．钓鱼过程；3．一天的收获和感受。注意：1．词数：80左右；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：沙蚕clamworms鱼钩fishhook【参考范文】DearBob，Howareyou！I'mgladtowritethelettertotellyousomethingaboutfishing.Onasunnymorninginsummer，myfatherandIdrovetotheseasidetofish.Wetooksomeclamworms，somebreadandwateraswell.Onarrivingattheseaside，Ifelt-3-comfortable.Bathedintheseawind，Ifeltrelaxed.Thenwetookourfishingpolesout，putclamwormsinthefishhooksandthrewthemintothesea.Thenwewaitedpatiently.Afterawhile，fathergotafish.However，Ilacksuchknowledgeoffishing.Somyfatherconstantlygavemesomeadvice，whichbenefitedmealot.ThenIfishedalot.Atfiveo'clock，wereturnedhome，feelingveryhappy.Yours，LiHua