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1校园与交往【真题再现】(2015年,全国卷I)假定你是李华,你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿,要点如下:1.栏目介绍。2.稿件内容;3.稿件长度:约400词汇4.交稿日期:6月28日前天注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯的;3.开头语已为你写好。DearPeter,I'dliketoaskyoutowriteanarticleforourschool’sEnglishnewspaper.【参考范文】DearPeter,I'dliketoaskyoutowriteanarticleforourschool’sEnglishnewspaper.The“ForeignCultures”sectioninournewspaperisverypopularamongusstudents.Itcarriesarticleswrittenbyforeignfriendsabouttheculturesoftheirhomecountries.WouldyoupleasewritesomethingaboutthecultureinyourpartoftheUnitedStates?AndwewouldespeciallywelcomearticlesabouthowAmericansspend2theirholidaysandfestivals,andthelifeofAmericanhighschoolstudents.Youcanwriteanythingrelevantsolongasit’sinterestingandinformative.400wordswouldbefine.CouldwehaveyourarticlebeforeJune28?I’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yours,LiHua【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于英文书信,根据提示信息要求给美国朋友彼得写信约稿,内容是美国节日风俗和中学生生活。写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确三个要点:首先,简单介绍校英文报栏目的情况。2、建议Peter介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活。3、稿件的要求及时间。写作时根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点。【范文点评】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如Itcarriesarticleswrittenbyforeignfriendsabouttheculturesoftheirhomecountries.运用了过去分词作后置定语,AndwewouldespeciallywelcomearticlesabouthowAmericansspendtheirholidaysandfestivals,andthelifeofAmericanhighschoolstudents.运用了宾语从句。此外,文章还使用了大量习语和短语,如bepopularamong,solongas,lookforwardto,hearfrom等。【经典演练1】近来你校举行的业务考试中,几位英语老师的英语作文虽然紧扣主题、无语法错误,但因书写不尽如人意仅仅得了不及格的分数(10-12分)。此事在教师中引起极大的反响,请你结合这个现象谈谈英语书写的重要性。内容包括:1.介绍背景;2.书写的重要性;33.书写对于学生的意义。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。[高分范文]Recently,ourschoolheldacontestsoastoexamineteachers'Englishlevel.Surprisingly,althoughtheircompositionswerestrictlytothepointandnogrammarmistakescanbefound,severalteachersgotunsatisfyinggrades(10--12)onaccountoftheirterriblehandwriting.Whatisreflectedfromthephenomenonistheimportanceofhandwriting.I'sabasicabilitytoaperson,especiallytousstudents.Ontheonehand,beautifulhandwritingiseasytoidentifyandcreatesagoodimpressiononthosewhomarkpapers.Ontheotherhand,westudentscantakeadvantageofgoodhandwritingtogethighmarksintheCollegeEntranceExamination.Inconclusion,handwritingisofsomuchsignificancethateveryoneshouldattachgreatimportancetoit.[句子改写]用it作形式主语改写范文中划线的句子Itissurprisingthatalthoughtheircompositionswerestrictlytothepointandnogrammarmistakescanbefound,severalteachersgotunsatisfyinggrades(10--12)onaccountoftheirterriblehandwriting.[佳句临摹]佳句1:Ontheonehand,beautifulhandwritingiseasytoidentify..临摹1:这个句子很难理解,因为有很多生词。Thesentenceishardtounderstandbecausetherearemanynewwords.佳句2:Inconclusion,handwritingisof50muchsignificancethateveryoneshould4attachgreatimportancetoit.临摹2:那个笑话太有趣了,听了真叫人忍俊不禁。Thejokeissointerestingthatyoucan’thelplaughingafterlisteningtoit.【经典演练2】你班要举办以“After-classActivities”为主题的演讲活动,请你结合自己的认识呼吁同学们参与课外活动并为该活动写一篇英文稿件。注意:1.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计人总词数;2.词数100左右。Goodafternoon,everyone,Thanks![高分范文]Goodafternoon,everyone,It'smygreathonourtohavethischancetomakeaspeechhere.Nowadays,after-classactivitiesareplayingmoreandmoreimportantrolesinourschoollife.Forme,Ihavetakenpartinvariouskindsofactivitiessuchassports,art,andreading,whichbenefitmealot.Theseactivitiesalsofreemefromtheheavyworkofstudy.Toencouragemorestudentstojoinintheafter-classactivities,Ithinkourschoolshouldorganizemoreactivitieswhichcaninterestandsuitstudents.What'smore,theschoolshouldleavestudentsmoretimeforactivitiesbygivingthemlesshomework.5Comeon,mydearfriends.Let'stakepartinafter-classactivities.I'msuretheycanmakeyourschoollifemorecolourful.Thanks![句子改写]用variety短语改写范文中划线的句子Forme,Ihavetakenpartinalargevarietyofactivitiessuchassports,art,andreading.[佳句临摹]佳句1:Nowadays,afterclassactivitiesareplayingmoreandmoreimportantrolesinourschoollife.临摹1:网络在我们的日常生活中发挥着越来越重要的作用。TheInternetisplayingmoreandmoreimportantrolesinourdailylife.佳句2:Theseactivitiesalsofreemefromtheheavyworkofstudy.临摹2:先进的教学方法把学生从繁重的作业负担中解脱出来了。Advancedteachingmethodshavefreedstudentsfromtheheavyburdenofhomework.【经典演练3】自国家倡导构建和谐社会以来,和谐之风吹遍神州大地。校园也沐浴在和谐之风中,但校园寝室里时有不和谐现象。请你以一名高中生的身份,根据以下要点写一篇英语短文:1.寝室里时有不和谐现象;2.创建和谐寝室生活的重要性;3.如何创造和谐寝室生活。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。6参考词汇:和谐的harmonious寝室dormitory[高分范文]Inmyschoolsometimesharmonyisdisturbedinstudents'dormitories.Asisknowntoall,aharmoniousdormitorylifeisimportanttousstudents.Ontheonehand,wecanhaveagoodrestandputourheartintostudy.Ontheotherhand,wewillhaveagoodmoodandenjoybeingtogether.Luckily,thereareseveralwaystocreateaharmoniousdormitorylife.Firstly,weshouldtrytogetridofourbadhabits,ifthereareany.Secondly,whenanannoyingsituationappears,we'lljusthavetolearntoputupwithandunderstandeachother.Inmyopinion,weshouldtryourbesttobuildaharmoniousdormitorylifeforourstudyandlife.[句子改写]用effort短语改写范文中加彩的句子Inmyopinion,weshouldmakeeveryefforttobuildaharmoniousdormitorylifeforourstudyandlife.[佳句临摹]佳句1:Ontheonehand,wecanhaveagoodrestandputourheartintostudy.临摹1:他全身心投人到事业当中,忽略了家庭。Heputsallhisheartintohiscareerandignoreshisfamily.佳句2:Firstly,weshouldtrytogetridofourbadhabits,ifthereareany.临摹2:如何清除这些东西是个大问题。Howtogetridofthesethingsisabigproblem.【写作宝典】7谚语是洋溢着文化气息的哲理性语言,是智慧的结晶。在应用文写作中,如果考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