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1社会与关爱【真题再现】(2019年,北京卷)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们班上周组织了一次以“劳动最光荣”为主题的社会实践活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,写一篇英文周记,记述整个过程。注意:词数不少于60。提示词:西瓜watermelon_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】LastweekItookpartinafarmworkprogrammeinthesuburbs.2Attheclassmeeting,ourteachertoldusabouttheprogrammewiththetheme“Workingismostbeautiful”.Andhestressedtheimportanceofworkingwithourownhands.WhenIgothome,Ipackedupmyluggageforthetrip.Onthefarm,wehelpedpickwatermelons.Whileworking,Irealisedhowharditwastoworkinthefieldsunderahotsun.WhenIcamebackhome,Isharedmyexperienceswithmyparents.Andtheywereveryproudofme.【解析】本文属于图画作文,要求根据图画内容写一篇英文周记。假如你是红星中学高三学生李华,你们班上周组织了一次以“劳动最光荣”为主题的社会实践活动。要求根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,写一篇英文周记,记述整个过程。分析四幅图可知,图画作文内容要点比较清晰,其中包括:老师宣布活动内容和意义,我为活动准备,在农场的劳动过程,介绍活动感受。这样有利于学生写作时发挥与扩展。全文可分成三部分,开头段概括活动,中间段描述图画,结尾段总结收获和意义。文章用第一人称来写,使用一般过去时。【范文点评】本文内容完整,语言表述通顺。使用了连接词、衔接词,使文章自然、流畅。文章使用了宾语从句howharditwastoworkinthefieldsunderahotsun.,还使用了Attheclassmeeting,WhenIgothome,Onthefarm,Whileworking,WhenIcamebackhome等过渡词,使文章上下文衔接流畅。【经典演练1】近年来,由于人口迁移多代家庭减少、城市发展以及父母喜欢自由等原因,老人独自居住的比例已趋近总体的一-半,这也带来了一些社会问题:老人生活孤独、缺乏照顾、起居因难等。请根据以上提示以“Careabouttheold”为题,写一篇英语短文。3注意:1.词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。[高分范文]CareabouttheoldThenumberoftheelderlylivingalonehasincreasedincrediblyfastinrecentyears,withthepercentagenear50percentofall.Reasonsincludepopulationmigration,decreaseofmulti-generationalfamilies,thedevelopmentofcitesandparents'preferenceforfreedom.Asaresult,somesocialproblemshavearisensuchasloneliness,lackofcareandthedifficultiesofliving.Soitisourresponsibilitytocareabouttheoldintermsoftheirphysicalhealthandfeelings.Weshouldgohomeandvisitthemasoftenaspossiblebesidesphoning.Inaddition,dotrytokeepthemcompanywheneverpossible.Allinall,it'shightimethatwetooktheresponsibilitytoshowourconcernfortheelderlyandmaketheirlifeenjoyable.[句子改写]用独立主格结构改写范文中划线的句子Thenumberoftheelderlylivingalonehasincreasedincrediblyfastinrecentyears,thepercentagebeingnear50percentofall.[佳句临摹]佳句1:Soitisourresponsibilitytocareabouttheoldintermsoftheirphysicalhealthandfeelings.临摹1:我们有责任尽快采取措施保护环境免受污染。Itisourresponsibilitytotakemeasuresassoonaspossibletoprotecttheenvironmentfrompollution.佳句2:Al1inall,it'shightimethatwetooktheresponsibilitytoshowourconcern4fortheelderlyandmaketheirlifeenjoyable.临摹2:现在正是我们让他们知道他们收集的数据也会帮助经济的时候。Itishightimethatwetoldthemthatthedatatheygatheredwillhelptheeconomyaswell.【经典演练2】假如你是李华,你班同学王伟昨天下午在放学回家的路上看到一位老妇人摔倒在地,他立刻去帮忙,同时打电话给120,使老妇人得到了及时救治。请你就此事号召全班同学向他学习。要点如下:1.简述王伟的事迹;2.发表感想;3.提出倡议。注意:1.可根据提示适当展开,以使行文连贯;2.词数100左右。参考词汇:高尚的道德virtue和谐的harmonious[高分范文]Dearclassmates,IammorethanpleasedtosharewithyouWangWei'sstory.OnhiswayhomeyesterdayWangWeinoticedanoldladyfalltothegroundandhelpedherwithouthesitation.Hedialed120andtheoldladygottimelytreatmentinhospital.IwasdeeplyimpressedbywhatWangWeihaddone.Thereisnodoubtthatsuchadeedshouldbeencouraged.Firstly,ithasbeenoneoftheChinesetraditionalvirtuestohelpthoseintrouble.Secondly,peoplenowadaysseemtobegettingmoreandmoreunwillingtohelpothers,especiallytheaged.Therefore,WangWei'sbehaviorisofgreatsignificanceinawakeningpeople’sawarenessofhelping5others.Inshort,IstronglyadvocatethatallofusshouldlearnfromWangWeiandalwaysbereadytohelpothers.That'sall.Thankyou.[句子改写]用what引导主语从句改写范文中划线的句子WhatWangWeihaddoneimpressedmedeeply.[佳句临摹]佳句1:Thereisnodoubtthatsuchadeedshouldbeencouraged.临摹1:作为一一个意志坚定的人,毫无疑问他会成功的。Asadeterminedperson,thereisnodoubtthathewillsucceed.佳句2:WangWei'sbehaviorisofgreatsignificanceinawakeningpeople’sawarenessofhelpingothers.临摹2:这次植树活动对唤醒我们的环保意识很重要。Thiscampaignofplantingtreesisofgreatsignificanceinawakeningtheawarenessofenvironmentprotection.【写作宝典】英语用来承接上文的表述afterthat/afterwards以后fromnowon从现在起Bythattime到那时afterafewdays几天以后6afterawhile过了一会儿soon不久then然后later后来meanwhile与此同时atthesametime同时similarly同样inthesameway同样地forexample/instance例如forthispurpose为了这个目的also/too/aswell又,也still仍然besides此外what'smore更为重要的是inaddition(to)....外(还)second(ly)第二third(1y)第三inotherwords换句话说bytheway顺便提一下moreover/furthermore而且,此外particularly/inparticular特别7nodoubt无疑地suchas例如obviously明显地ofcourse当然certainly无疑,当然atanyrate无论如何,不管怎样thefollowing下述,下列,如下【素材集锦】[常用词语]appropriatefor/to适当的,合适的atallevents不管怎样,无论如何aroundtheclock夜以继日atthecostof.....为代价accusesb.ofsth.控告某人(做)某事atthemercyof任由....摆布appealto有吸引力,呼吁awareof意识到ataloss不知所措acceptsb.as接受某人.....adaptoneselfto使自已适应.....bringabout引起,导致8approveof赞成bringsth.intoeffect使生效,实行assuresb.ofsth.使某人确信某事beabundantin富于attachimportanceto认.为...重要性bebeneficialto有利于,有益于beboundto一定会bebetteroff有较多钱,比较宽裕becapableofdoing能够bedeterminedtodosth.决心做某事beconcernedwith关切,关注chargesb.withsth.控告某人(做)某事betiredof对.....感到厌倦comeintocontactwith接触undertheweather身体不舒服comparedto/with比较beyondquestion毫无疑问tothecontrary相反地breakdown出故障checkin登记,报到breakthrough突破9counton依靠,指望infavorof支持,赞同haveaccessto使用[常用句子]1.Forthetworeasonsmentionedabove,itisn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