通用版2021届高考英语应用文写作必备素材与核心句式专题10写人与叙事

1写人与叙事【真题再现】（2020年，全国卷I）你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括:1.人物简介；2.尊敬和爱戴的原因。注意:1.词数100左右；2.短文题目和首句已为你写好。ThepersonIrespectWehavealotofrespectablepeoplearoundus._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】ThepersonIrespectWehavealotofrespectablepeoplearoundus.Theymaybeourteachers,parentsoroneofourelders.Asforme,myfatheristhepersonIrespectmost.Myfatherisateacherwholoveshisworkandhisstudentsverymuch.Heworksveryhardeverydaybuthewillalsosparesometimetoaccompanymeandsharemanyfunnythingswithmeabouthiswork.WhenIcomeacrosstheproblemsoflearninginmystudy,myfatherwilllistentomepatientlyandencouragemetoovercomethedifficultiesbravely.Heachievedalotinhiswork,respectedbyhisstudents.So,inmymindmyfatheristheperson2IrespectmostandIlovehimdeeply.【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求学生以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛。第一步：审题体裁：应用文。时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。结构：总分法。要求：1.人物简介：2.尊敬和爱戴的原因。第二步：列提纲（重点短语）Asforme；sparesometime；listentomepatiently;第三步：连词成句1.Asforme,myfatheristhepersonIrespectmostly.2.Heworksveryhardeverydaybuthewillalsosparesometimetoaccompanymeandsharemanyfunnythingswithmeabouthiswork.3.Myfatherwilllistentomepatientlyandencouragemetoovercomethedifficultiesbravely.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇1.表示文章结构顺序：介绍人物；阐述原因2.表示并列补充关系：Asfor;and;but;So3第五步：润色修改【范文点评】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯。复合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多的高端句式，如定语从句：Myfatherisateacherwholoveshisworkandhisstudentsverymuch；非谓语动词：Heachievedalotinhiswork,respectedbyhisstudents；时间状语从句：WhenIcomeacrosstheproblemoflearninginmystudy,myfatherwilllistentomepatientlyandencouragemetoovercomethedifficultiesbravely…等。文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然。为文章增色添彩。【经典演练1】请以Thepersonwhoimpressesmemost为话题，描写一个给你印象最深刻的人。要求：1.描述-件这个人做过的令你印象最深刻的事情；2.谈谈你对这个人所做的这件事的感想。注意：1.开头已给出,不计入总词数；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.词数100左右。Thepersonwhoimpressesmemost_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________[高分范文]Thepersonwhoimpressesmemostismyfather,whoaffectsmenotwithhiswordsbutwithhiscommonactions.Asayoungboy,Iwasimpatientatalmosteverything.Itwasmyfatherwhooftentookmeoutforfishing,teachingmepatientlyhowtoholdthefishingpole,after4whichmypatiencegrewlittlebylittleasexpected.Thensuchactivitiesascamping,climbingandhikingwerealsoofgreathelptobuildmeup.What'smore,Ihavelearnttheimportanceofpayingattentiontowhatwearedoing,whichisthebasisofwhatweseekforsuccess.Myfatherisasilentherosettinganexampletomethroughhisactionssilentlybutmeaningfully,forwhichIadmirehimmost.[句子改写]用why引导表语从句改写范文中加彩的句子....meaningfullyandthatiswhyIadmirehimmost.[佳句临摹]佳句1：Thensuchactivitiesascamping,climbingandhikingwerealsoofgreathelptobuildmeup.临摹1：她经常上网阅读英语文章，她英语学得好得益于此。ShetendstosurftheInternetforEnglishreading,whichisofgreathelptoherexcellentEnglishstudy.佳句2：What'smore,Ihavelearnttheimportanceofpayingattentiontowhatwearedoing,whichisthebasisofwhatweseekforsuccess.临摹2：而且，由于网络是虚拟世界,人们更可能会受骗,这对那些不够谨慎的人来说是另一种损失。What’smore,becausetheInternetisavirtualworld,it’smorelikelyforpeopletogetcheated,whichisanotherdamagetothosewhoarenotcautiousenough.【经典演练2】从小到大，你读过的书一定不少。给你留下印象最深刻的是哪本书?请以“Thebookthatmostimpressesme”为题,写一篇英语短文。要求：1.简要介绍这本书中的主人公；52.说明这本书使你印象深刻的原因；3.号召大家多读好书。注意：词数100左右。参考词汇：(女)主人公hero(ine)情节plot[高分范文]ThebookthatmostimpressesmeThebooksIhavereadaretoomanytocount,themostimpressiveofwhichisnodoubtJaneEyre,abookwritteninsimpleEnglish.TheheroineJaneEyreisapoorbutaspiring,smallinbodybuthugeinsoul,unknownbutself-respectinggirl.Afterhavingalongjourneyofthespirit,JaneEyre,amarvelousfigurewithhergoodnessforeveryone,herpursuitofjusticeandself-respect,herstrivingforlife,hertoughnessandherconfidence,hasleftussomuchtorecallandtothink.Goodbooksareindeedofbenefittoourgrowth.Therefore,whatweareurgedtodoismakeourgreatestattempttomakefriendswithgoodbookstomakeuswiseandprogressive.[句子改写]用it作形式主语改写范文中划线的句子Therefore,itisurgedthatweshouldmakeourgreatestattempttomakefriendswithgoodbookstomakeuswiseandprogressive.【写作宝典】一、有关“转”的常用词语：用来表示不同或相反的意见afterall毕竟6however然而,无论如何anyway无论如何despite/inspiteof尽管,虽然but但是yet然而,但是while然而whereas然而instead反而，却regardlessof不管,不顾nevertheless尽管如此,不过，然而though/although尽管eventhough/evenif即使in/bycontrast对比之下onthecontrary与此相反otherwise否则fortunately/luckily幸运地unfortunately不幸地asamatteroffact事实上infact/indeed实际上unlike不像，......不同二、有关“合”的常用词语：用于小结上文或结束本段落的内容7accordingly因此，所以asaresult结果insum总之，总而言之ashasbeennoted如前所述insummary简要地说asIhavesaid如我所述onthewhole总体来说atlast/eventually/finally最后briefly简要地tosumup总结,概括tosummarize简言之toconclude总而言之inbrief简言之inconclusion总之,最后inshort简而言之inaword总之atlength最后,终于allinall总之nodoubt/undoubtedly毫无疑问certainly当然,无疑surely无疑8obviously显然hence因此consequently因此asaconsequence因此therefore因此thus因此【素材集锦】[常用词语]diligent勤勉的，刻苦的bebornin...出生在.....humorous有幽默感的be/comefromawealthyfamily来自于一个富裕家庭smartbright/clev