2020-2021学年高中英语 Unit 4 Making the news Section Ⅳ W

-1-SectionⅣWriting针对训练范文赏读写作指导-1-SectionⅣWriting-2-SectionⅣWriting针对训练范文赏读写作指导写作指导概要写作概要写作要求考生基于一篇350词以内的短文写出一篇60词左右的内容概要,以此来考查学生准确获取关键词,并对文章大意进行归纳概括,进而用简洁的语言转述文章重要信息的能力。考生要在正确理解短文的基础上,用简明、精练的语句高度浓缩文章的主要内容和观点,是对阅读理解能力和书面表达能力的综合考查。短文选材以说明文和议论文为主,文章结构比较清晰,通常包含3~5个要点。考生要客观准确归纳要点,不照搬原文句子,要点之间要恰当衔接,全文内容要连贯,过渡要自然。写作时应遵循以下步骤:-3-SectionⅣWriting针对训练范文赏读写作指导写作指导一、细读短文,明确篇章结构,确定要点数量。首先,仔细阅读短文。阅读的目的是确定文章的体裁和主题,明确篇章结构。根据意义划分段落,然后对段落划分层次,确定要点的数量。二、处理文章,抓住主题句,删除细节信息。明确全文结构之后,就要对文章内容进行处理。处理的目的是删除次要内容,保留主要内容。文中描述性的语言、细节和列举的示例都属于要删除的内容。剩余的主要部分要仔细研读,与主题相关的关键词句要重点标注出来,这些词句就是最后归纳转述的要点。-4-SectionⅣWriting针对训练范文赏读写作指导写作指导三、逐段进行归纳,提取关键信息,准确转述要点。删除了短文中的细节、例证等细枝末节后,每段的主要内容已经明确,然后要用自己的语言准确地表述各段的要点。为避免和原文的句子重复,可使用同义转述的形式,也可以用句子重构的方式来完成要点归纳。归纳时要分清主次,各要点的词数应根据文中对应的内容来定。同时,要选用适当的关联词来进行衔接,保证上下文连贯。四、检查要点,修改错误,确定终稿。初稿完成后,要检查要点是否齐全,各要点是否表述准确,检查是否有语法错误、拼写错误和标点符号错误等,还要检查词数是否符合要求。-5-SectionⅣWriting针对训练范文赏读写作指导针对训练针对训练阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Sciencecan’texplainthepowerofpets,butmanystudieshaveshownthatthecompanyofpetscanhelplowerbloodpressure(血压)andraisechancesofrecoveringfromaheartattack,reducelonelinessandspreadall-roundgoodcheer.-6-SectionⅣWriting针对训练范文赏读写作指导针对训练Anyownerwilltellyouhowmuchjoyapetbrings.Forsome,ananimalprovidesmorecomfortthanahusband/wife.A2012studymeasuredstress(紧张)levelsandbloodpressureinpeople—halfofthempetowners—whiletheyperformed5minutesofmentalarithmetic(心算)orheldahandinicewater.Subjectscompletedthetasksalone,withahusband/wife,aclosefriendorwithapet.Peoplewithpetsdiditbest.Thosetestedwiththeiranimalfriendshadsmallerchangeinbloodpressureandreturnedmostquicklytobaselineheartrates.Withpetsintheroom,peoplealsomadefewermathmistakesthanwhendoinginfrontofothercompanions.Itseemspeoplefeelmorerelaxedaroundpets,saysAllen,whothinksitmaybebecausepetsdon’tjudge.-7-SectionⅣWriting针对训练范文赏读写作指导针对训练Astudyreportedlastfallsuggeststhathavingapetdognotonlyraisesyourspiritsbutmayalsohaveaneffectonyoureatinghabits.Researchersatahospitalspentayearstudying36fatpeopleandtheirequallyfatdogsthatwereputondiet-and-exerciseprograms;aseparategroupof56peoplewithoutpetswereputonadietprogram.Onaverage,peoplelostabout11pounds,or5%oftheirbodyweight.Theirdogsdidevenbetter,losinganaverageof12pounds,morethan15%oftheirbodyweight.Dogownersdidn’tloseanymoreweightthanthosewithoutdogsbut,sayresearchers,gotmoreexerciseoverall—mostlywiththeirdogs—andfounditworthdoing.-8-SectionⅣWriting针对训练范文赏读写作指导范文赏读Petscanhelpuskeephealthy.(要点1)Astudyshowspeoplefeelmorerelaxedwithpetsaroundthanwithothercompanions.(要点2)Anotherstudysuggestspetscanaffectpeople’seatinghabits.(要点3)Researchersstudiedtwogroupsoffatpeopleandfoundtheylostalmostthesameweight.Butpeoplewhokeeppetsgetmoreexercisewiththeirpets.(要点4)