2019-2020学年高中英语 Unit 4 Body language Section Ⅳ Wri

-1-SectionⅣWriting概要写作写作指导概要写作是近年的新题型。此题要求考生根据一篇350词以内的短文写出一篇60词左右的内容概要,以此来考查学生准确获取关键词,对文章大意进行归纳概括,并用简洁的语言转述文章重要信息的能力。考生要在正确理解短文的基础上,用简明、精练的语句高度浓缩文章的主要内容和观点,是对阅读理解能力和书面表达能力的综合考查。短文选材以说明文和议论文为主,文章结构比较明晰,通常包含4个左右的要点。考生要客观准确归纳要点,不照搬原文句子,要点之间要恰当衔接,全文内容要连贯,过渡要自然。针对训练阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Eatinghealthilyandexercisingtogetyourbodyfitcanfeellikealotofwork.Infact,sometimesitcanfeellikesomuchworkthatyoumightnotevenwanttotry!Havenofear,though—therearesomefunwaystogetyourbodyhealthy.Youmightthinkthatgoingtoagymandworkingoutonexerciseequipmentistheonlyorthebestwaytogetfit,butthat’sjustnotso.Thereareloadsofthingsyoucandooutsideofthegymtokeepyourselfhealthy!Thinkahikemightbeabitchallengingforyou?Takeawalkonthebeachorinapark.You’llgetextrapointsifyoutakeyourwholewalkonthesand;itprovidessomeresistanceandwillgiveyouabetterworkout.Dancingisoneoftheverybestformsofexercise.Itmakesalotofdifferentmusclesstayactive,andthereareendlessvarietiesofdancestokeepyouentertained.Somepeopleavoiddancingbecausetheymaynothaveapartnertogotoadanceclasswith.Therearemanytypesofdancesyoucandosolo!Maybeyoushouldgooutonalimbandtryhip-hopdancingortapdancing—youcandobothofthoseonyourown.Don’tfeelliketakingadanceclass?Youdon’tneedto!Putonsomemusicandhaveadancepartybyyourselfinyourroom,withyourfriendsinthehallsatschool,orevenwithyourfamilyinthelivingroom!Therearelotsofgreatreasonstogetexerciseandkeepyourbodyandbrainhealthy.Keepinmindthatincreasingyourregularmovementdoesn’tmeanthatyouhavetogotoextremesbyrunningtothegymsevendaysaweek—therearefunandeasywaystointroducemoreexerciseintoyourlife.写作思路一、细读短文,明确篇章结构,确定要点数量。首先,仔细阅读短文。阅读的目的是确定文章的体裁和主题,明确篇章结构。根据意义划分段落,然后对段落划分层次,确定要点数量。本文是一篇说明文,共有四个自然段。主要说明了保持健康,加强体育锻炼的方法。二、处理文章,抓住主题句,删除细节信息。明确全文结构之后,就要对文章内容进行处理。处理的目的是删除次要内容,保留主要内容。文中描述性的语言、细节和列举的示例都属于要删除的内容。剩余的主要部分要仔细研读,与主题相关的关键词句要重点标注出来,这些词句就是最后归纳转述的要点。文章第一段概括说,保持健康有很多好方法。主旨句是最后一句:...therearesomefunwaystogetyourbodyhealthy。第二段第四句是本段的主题句:Takeawalkonthebeachorinapark.在沙滩上或者公园里散步。第三段第一句是本段的主旨句:Dancingisoneoftheverybestformsofexercise.跳舞是锻炼身体的最佳方法之一。第四段第二句是本段的主旨句:Keepinmindthatincreasingyourregularmovementdoesn’tmeanthatyouhavetogotoextremesbyrunningtothegymsevendaysaweek.如果想保持健康,并非一定要去健身房。三、逐段进行归纳,提取关键信息,准确转述要点。删除了短文中的细节、例证等细枝末节后,每段的主要内容已经明确,然后要用自己的语言准确地表述各段的要点。为避免和原文的句子重复,可使用同义转述的形式,也可以用句子重构的方式来完成要点归纳。归纳时要分清主次,各要点的词数应根据文中对应的内容来定。归纳后每段的要点为:第一段:Therearesomefunwaystokeepfit.第二段:It’sagoodwayforyoutotakeawalkonthebeachorinthepark.第三段:Dancingisagreatwaytoexerciseyourmuscles.第四段:Ifyouwanttokeepfit,youdon’thavetogotothegymregularly.最后,加上适当的过渡句和衔接词,以保证上下文的连贯。四、检查要点,修改错误,确定终稿。初稿完成后,要检查要点是否齐全,各要点是否表述准确,检查是否有语法错误、拼写错误和标点符号错误等,还要检查词数是否符合要求。范文赏读Besideseatinghealthilyandexercising,therearesomefunwaystokeepfit.(要点1)It’sagoodwayforyoutotakeawalkonthebeachorinthepark.(要点2)Inaddition,whetheryouhaveapartnerornot,orwhetheryoutakeadanceclassornot,dancingisagreatwaytoexerciseyourmuscles.(要点3)Therefore,ifyouwanttokeepfit,youdon’thavetogotothegymregularly.(要点4)