（徐州专版）2020中考英语复习方案 第一篇 教材考点梳理 话题写作（09）快乐成长课件

话题写作（九）快乐成长【话题点睛】该话题主要包括成长过程、成长烦恼及成长感悟等。涉及的要点:(1)成长体验及感悟;(2)成长烦恼与困惑;(3)关于更好地成长的方法与建议。【参考谚语】1.Timeflies.时光易逝。2.AllroadsleadtoRome.条条大路通罗马。3.Nothingisdifficulttothemanwhowilltry.世上无难事,只要肯登攀。4.Godhelpsthosewhohelpthemselves.天助自助者。常用表达【亮点句型】成长经历1.I'msorrytohearthatyoudidn'tpasstheexambecauseofyourillness.2.Aslongasyouworkhard,youcanbeasuccess.3.Webelieveyou'llbecomethetopstudentlaterifyoudoyourbesttostudymath.4.Weneedtomakesomegoodfriendssothatwecanlearnfromeachother.成长感悟1.Asthesayinggoes,failureisthemotherofsuccess.2.Studyplaysakeyroleintheirlife.3.Moststudentsbelieveit'snecessarytostudyhard.4.Readingcanmakeourlifecolorful.5.Therearemanywaystorealizeourdreams.成长建议1.Youcanlearnalotfromtheshow.2.Youshouldtreatitinaproperway.3.Youshouldstudyhardatknowledge,payattentiontosocialnewsanddevelopinterestandhobbies.4.Youshouldoftencommunicatewithyourfamily.Ⅰ.根据汉语意思完成句子。1.你一犯错,就必须马上改正它。Assoonasyou,youmustcorrectitatonce.2.每个青少年都应该为未来做个好的计划。Eachteenagermakeagoodplanforthefuture.3.我们将能够提升我们的能力来解决问题。Wewillbeabletoourabilityto.基础写作makeamistakeissupposedtoimprovesolveproblems4.一些学生花费很多时间看电视。Somestudentsmuchtime.5.对他们来说,读书很无聊。Itisforthembooks.spendwatchingTVboringtoreadⅡ.用括号内所给提示将下列句子译成英语。1.没有必要放弃你的爱好。(giveup)2.有一天,我们将会实现我们的梦想。(achieveone'sdream)3.我的父母和老师努力鼓励我。(trytodosth)4.听说你下学期要来中国学习,我很高兴。(begladtodo)Thereisnoneedtogiveupyourhobbies.Wewillachieveourdreamsoneday.Myparentsandmyteachertriedtoencourageme.I'mverygladtohearthatyouwillstudyinChinanextterm.5.你必须在你的业余时间做更多的运动。(inone'ssparetime)假如你是李华,你的好朋友Lisa不久前参加达人秀节目被淘汰了,她为这次失败所困扰,无心学习。请你给她写一封电子邮件,建议她正确看待达人秀节目,享受参与的过程而不必太在意结果;提醒她实现梦想的途径有很多,只有努力才能获得成功;鼓励她好好学习,也不要放弃个人爱好,开心地度过每一天。典例分析Youmustdomoresportsinyoursparetime.[要求](1)包含以上所有要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;(2)词数:60-80(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);(3)不得出现你的真实姓名、校名和地名。DearLisa,I'msorrytohearthatyouarefeelingdownbecauseofyourfailureinthistalentshow.Hopeyou'llbehappyeveryday!Yours,LiHua【思路点拨】1.要点提炼:主题是鼓励经历失败的朋友重拾信心,可从以下几个方面展开:(1)鼓励对方以正确的方式面对失败,享受过程,正视结果;(2)实现梦想的方式不是只有一种;(3)失败是成功之母,鼓励对方善于从失败中学习。2.确定时态:一般现在时3.确定人称:第二人称【写作架构】【佳作欣赏】DearLisa,I'msorrytohearthatyouarefeelingdownbecauseofyourfailureinthistalentshow.Herearesomeofmyopinions.Frommypointofview,youshouldtreatitinaproperway,andenjoytheprocessinsteadoftheresult.Besides,therearemanywaystorealizeourdreams.Asthesayinggoes,failureisthemotherofsuccess.Youcanlearnalotfromtheshow.Aslongasyouworkhard,youcanmakeyourdreamscometrue.Lastbutnotleast,asastudent,youshouldstudyhardfirst.Meanwhile,thereisnoneedtogiveupyourhobbies.Justrelaxandhavefun!Hopeyou'llbehappyeveryday!Yours,LiHua【名师点评】1.开头第一句“I'msorrytohearthat…”表达了对朋友的同情,然后开始给对方提建议。2.从句式上看,文章运用了灵活多样的句式。如:therebe句型,aslongas引导的条件状语从句等。过渡词语(如besides,lastbutnotleast,meanwhile)的运用,使文章衔接自然。3.文中运用了谚语“Failureisthemotherofsuccess.”,为文章增色不少。实战演练A[2019·遂宁]在成长过程中,青少年面临越来越多的烦恼,主要体现在精神压力太大。请以此为话题写一篇80词左右的短文。[要点提示](1)导致青少年精神压力大的主要原因:①学业②与他人相处(2)减少压力的措施:①积极参加课外活动②多与他人交流沟通(3)简要谈谈你对压力利弊的看法。(至少一点)[注意](1)文章开头已给出,不计入总词数;(2)文章必须包含所给要点提示,要求语句通顺,行文连贯;(3)不可逐词翻译,应有独自的见解并适当发挥;(4)文章中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。Weteenagershavemoreandmorepressurewhilegrowingup.Herearetwomainreasons.Oneistheproblemsinschoolwork.Theotheristheproblemsingettingonwithotherpeople.However,toomuchpressureisnotgoodforteenagers'development.Sohowtodealwiththesepressure?Takingpartintheafterschoolactivitiesisaveryusefulway.Besidesthisone,morecommunicationoftenworks.Allinall,weshouldtryourbesttodealwiththestressandkeephealthyinbodyandmind.B[2019·徐州质检]假设你是Tim,在美国游学期间与住家孩子Simon、邻居孩子Daniel成为好友,并结伴表演京剧《大闹天宫》。几天前,因Simon嘲笑Daniel,两人发生争吵。现在Simon想修复友谊,但不知如何处理,所以特地发来邮件寻求你的帮助。请根据以下要点,给Simon回一封电子邮件。现状分析嘲笑他人是错误的;很高兴Simon想改变现状;提供建议1.应该尽快道歉;2.随邮件发送一个视频节目,建议和Daniel一起看;节目简介1.节目名称为友谊(Friendship);2.以孙悟空(MonkeyKing)为原型,让自己想起在美国时三人一起的愉悦时光;节目最后,孙悟空做总结。阐述希望1.……2.……[注意事项](1)邮件须包括所给内容要点,要求语句通顺,意思连贯;(2)孙悟空讲的话用2-3句展开合理想象,作适当发挥;(3)词数90词左右,邮件开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。DearSimon,Thankyouforyourletter.IhopeIcanhelpyou.Itiswrongtolaughatothers.I'mgladyou'reconsideringchanging.YoushouldsaysorrytoDanielassoonaspossible.I'msendingyouavideocalledFriendshipwiththeemail.You'dbetterwatchitwithDaniel.ItwasbasedonMonkeyKing.ItremindedmeofourhappytimeinAmerica.Attheendoftheprogram,MonkeyKingsaidfriendshipplayedanimportantroleinourlife.Remember,afriendinneedisafriendindeed.IthinktheprogramIhopeyoucanbefriendsforever.ishelpful.