（包头专版）2020中考英语复习方案 第三篇 话题写作妙解 话题写作01 活动安排课件

话题写作（一）活动安排【典型例题】[2018·包头]假设你是李华,请给你们的美籍教师Bob写一封电子邮件,向他简要介绍你校即将举办的英语文化节(EnglishCultureFestival),邀请他参加本次活动,并请他在节目最后做一个关于如何学好英语的讲座。邮件还应包括以下内容:1.活动时间:本周五下午14:30-17:30;2.活动地点:报告厅(LectureHall);3.活动内容:学生演唱英文歌曲……典例分析【思路点拨】一、审——圈要点、定时态、定人称假设你是李华,请给你们的美籍教师Bob写一封电子邮件,向他简要介绍你校即将举办的英语文化节(EnglishCultureFestival),邀请他参加本次活动,并请他在节目最后做一个关于如何学好英语的讲座。邮件还应包括以下内容:(1)活动时间:本周五下午14:30—17:30;(2)活动地点:报告厅(LectureHall);(3)活动内容:学生演唱英文歌曲……二、列——列短语,尽可能为习惯用语·haveanEnglishCultureFestivalinourschool·comeandjoinus·beginintheLectureHallat14:30thisFriday·finishat17:30·singEnglishsongs·aftertheperformance·giveatalkonhowtolearnEnglishwell三、加——加主语,修饰词;定人称(第一人称和第二人称)、定时态(一般将来时),形成句子(因为汉语习惯,学生容易丢掉主语)·WewillhaveanEnglishCultureFestivalinourschool.·Wouldyouliketocomeandjoinus?·ThisactivitywillbeginintheLectureHallat14:30thisFriday.·Itwillfinishat17:30.·SomestudentswillsingEnglishsongs.·Aftertheperformance,youcangiveatalkonhowtolearnEnglishwell.四、连——添加过渡句、连接词;上下文要连贯——保证基础平均分上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条标准,因此同学们应把写好的句子,根据故事情节,事情发生的先后次序(时间或空间),使用一些表示并列、递进等关系的过渡词进行加工整理,使文章连贯、自然、流畅。WewillhaveanEnglishCultureFestivalinourschool.Wouldyouliketocomeandjoinus?ThisactivitywillbeginintheLectureHallat14:30thisFridayandfinishat17:30.SomestudentswillsingEnglishsongs.What'smore,aftertheperformanceyoucangiveatalkonhowtolearnEnglishwell.[拓展]同学们应注意下面过渡词(语)的用法:表示并列关系:aswellas;neither…nor…表示递进关系:what'smore(另外,而且);besides(而且,此外);moreimportantly(更重要的是);inotherwords(换句话说)表示转折关系:but;however;although+句子表示对比关系:ontheonehand…ontheotherhand…表示时间关系:first…then…next…afterthat…atlast…表示因果关系:asaresult…(结果)表示目的:inorderto(为了)表示结果:so…that…;such…that…(如此……以至于……)表示列举:forexample;suchas+doing/n.表示陈述事实:infact;asfarasIknow表示个人看法:inmyopinion;Ithink…;Idisagree…表示总结:allinall(总之);inaword(一句话);inshort(简而言之)[及时体验]1.AsfarasIknow,thepollutionisgettingworseandworse.2.Thedictionaryisveryuseful.What'smore,thepriceislow.3.Westartedearly.Wewantedtoarrivebeforedark.=Westartedearlyinordertoarrivebeforedark.4.Mr.Blackismybestfriend,althoughheiskindofspecial.5.TheywenttoBeijingonholiday.Theydidn'tstudyinschool.=TheywenttoBeijingonholidayinsteadofstudyinginschool.五、美——表述地道,句式多变,结构灵活首先,避免Chinglish现象,尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交替使用,以避免重复和呆板。[及时体验]基础句WewillhaveanEnglishCultureFestivalinourschool.升格句AnEnglishCultureFestivalwillbeheldinourschool.基础句Wouldyouliketocomeandjoinus?升格句Allofusstudentsdohopethatyoucouldcomeandjoinus.基础句ThisactivitywillbeginintheLectureHallat14:30thisFridayandfinishat17:30.升格句ThisactivitywillbeginintheLectureHallat14:30thisFridayandlastabout3hours.主题句SomestudentswillsingEnglishsongs.发展句We'vepreparedmanyprogramsforit,forexample,Englishsongs.SomestudentswillperformplaysinEnglish.主题句What'smore,aftertheperformanceyoucangiveatalkonhowtolearnEnglishwell.发展句Asyouknow,manystudentsinourschoolhavedifficultyinlearningEnglishwell.Sowhentheperformancefinishes,itwouldbeveryniceifyoucouldgiveatalkandprovideuswithsomepracticaladvice.其次,美化文章,正确使用习惯搭配以及两三个好的句型,如:宾语从句、状语从句、动名词作主语或it作形式主语等。[及时体验]GroupA习惯用语1.基础句Ourparentsreallywishustoworkhard.升格句Ourparentsreallywishustoputourheartintostudy.2.基础句Teenagerslikecomputers.升格句Teenagersarefondofcomputers.3.基础句Weshouldn'teatjunkfood.升格句Weshouldstayawayfromjunkfood.4.基础句Communicationisimportantinourlife.升格句Communicationplaysasignificantroleinourlife.GroupB宾语从句1.IbelieveBaotouwillbemoreandmorebeautifulandourlifeisgettingbetterandbetter.2.基础句Idon'tliketogetupearly.升格句GettingupearlyisalsowhatIdon'tlike.GroupC状语从句1.Ifeveryonedoessomethingfortheenvironment,ourhometownwillbecomecleanandbeautiful.2.基础句Whenhespoke,hegotmoreexcited.升格句Themorehespoke,themoreexcitedhegot.3.基础句Iwasveryangrywithhim.升格句IwassoangrywithhimthatIdecidednottotalkwithhimfortherestofmylife.4.基础句Youoftentelllies.Peoplewillnevertrustyou.升格句Youwillneverbetrustedifyouoftentelllies.5.基础句Jackcamehomeat7amyesterday.升格句Jackdidn'tcomehomeuntil7amyesterday.GroupD动名词作主语或it作形式主语1.Readingbooksinthesunisbadforoureyes.=It'sbadforoureyestoreadbooksinthesun.2.Ridingisevensaferthandriving.3.基础句Weshouldlearnhowtocooperatewithothersnow.升格句Nowadays,it'simportanttolearnhowtocooperatewithothers.六、查——典型病例·名词的单复数问题及名词前缺冠词·主谓一致问题·时态和语态问题·Chinglish现象·行文的逻辑性问题·词类错用[及时体验]指出下列句子中的错误并改正。1.Welivemoreandmorecomfortable.改正:comfortably(副词修饰动词)2.Wecangetmanyinformationsbyreadingnewspaper.改正:muchinformation…readingnewspapers.3.TherehasmanyprogramsinTV.改正:TherearemanyprogramsonTV.(Therebe句型和介词短语)4.Ithinkridebikecankeepourhealth.改正:Ithinkridingabikecankeepushealthy.(动名词作主语)5.Weareeasytofindtheplace.改正:It'seasyforustofindtheplace.(句型:It's+adj.+forsb.todo…,It'sdifficult/easy/possible/necessarytodo,Ifind/think/makeit+adj.+todo…)6.Peopleinparkis…改正:Peopleintheparkare…7.Someonethink…/Studentsthinks…改正:Someonethinks…/Thestudentsthink…七、洁——书写定天下!DearBob,Howisitgoing?AnEnglishCultureFestivalwillbeheldinourschool.Allofusstudentsdohopethatyoucouldcomeandjoinus.TheactivitywillbeginintheLectureHallat14:30thisFridayandlastabout3hours.We'vepreparedmanyprogramsforit,forexample,Englishsongs.What'smore,somestudentswillperformplaysinEnglish.Asyouknow,manystudentsinourschoolhavedifficulty