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【话题解读】在日常生活中,大家经常谈论到有关健康的话题,在中考作文中也不时出现此类话题。针对此话题的文章通常具有说明和议论的性质,有时涉及观点的表达,有时是事理分析。介绍健康生活的内容通常包括:什么是健康的生活方式,如何获得健康和保持健康(一般可从饮食、运动、睡眠、情绪等方面来介绍)。【实例讲解】十,一百,一千,一万……即使有再多的零,没有了一,一切都归为零。在我们的生活中,如果没有了健康,财富、地位……一切也都失去了意义。请以“WaystoKeepHealthy”为题,参照图表的信息,完成文章。注意:1.书写清晰、字迹工整;行文流畅、语句通顺;2.词数:80词左右;3.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称等信息。GetenoughsleepEathealthyfoodWaystoKeepHealthyDoexercise…WaystoKeepHealthy__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【分析】该书面表达任务是命题写作。根据所给题目可知要介绍保持健康的一些方法,再根据图表提示可知要从以下几个方面入手:睡眠、运动和饮食。要注意的是图表中省略号代表的内容是要考生补充发挥的部分,一定要在介绍完前三项之后,再罗列出至少一条与前三项不同的方法。文章是说明文,应以一般现在时态为主。写作时要介绍清楚每种方法,并注意各方法间的衔接,可以使用firstly,secondly,lastly等连接词。【标准范文】WaystoKeepHealthyWeallknowitisveryimportanttokeephealthy.Herearesomewaystokeephealthy.Firstly,wemusteathealthyfood.Breakfastisnecessary.Itgivesusenergy.Andremembertoeatmorefruitandvegetables.Secondly,it'snecessaryforustodoexercise.Ithelpstokeepusactiveandstrong.Thirdly,neverstayuplate.Ifwecan'tgetenoughsleep,thewholebodywillworkslowly.Lastly,learningtoreducestressisalsoimportantforourhealth.【高分突破】WaystoKeepHealthyHealthiswealth.Hereissomeadviceonhowtokeephealthy.Firstly,weshouldeathealthyfood.It'snecessarytoeatenoughfreshvegetablesandfruitinsteadofjunkfood.Havingbreakfastisveryimportantbecauseitcanprovideuswithenergy.Secondly,doingexerciseregularlyisagoodwaytomakeushealthy.Remembernottositfortoolong.Thirdly,afteraday'sworkorstudy,enoughsleepisnecessary.Andweshouldn'tstayuplate.Besides,keepingthebalancebetweenstudyandplaycanalsohelpusstayhealthy.Followtheadvice,andwewillbehealthy.【高分揭秘】1.文章段落层次清晰,时态使用正确,连接词的使用使文章富有条理性和逻辑性。2.作者在开篇用了Healthiswealth,该比喻简明、形象地表明了健康的重要性。3.作者以Followtheadvice,andwewillbehealthy结尾,与首段内容呼应,使文章在结构和内容上更加完整。4.作者使用了一些地道的表达,如insteadof,provide...with...,keepingthebalancebetween...等,这为文章增色不少。【素材积累】1.词汇疾病:toothache,flu,fever,highbloodpressure,heartdisease,overweight,haveacold不健康的生活方式:eatjunkfood,stayup,takelittleexercise,couchpotato健康的生活方式:haveabalanceddiet,takeregularexercise,gotobedearly,havemealsontime2.句子Asamatteroffact,itishealththatcounts.Wecanbenefitalotfromeatingallkindsofhealthyfood.Asisknowntousall,healthisofgreatimportancetous.Washinghandsoftencanbeagoodwaytoprotectusfromthediseases.Playingcomputergamesnotonlytakesmuchtimebutalsodoesharmtohealth.Smokingisdangerousbecauseitleadstomanydiseaseslikecancerandheartdisease.
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