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SectionⅤWriting—影视评论[写作技法指导]影视评论简称影评,要包括影片的背景、故事梗概、精彩之处,以及对影片的评论。写影评时要注意紧扣“电影”与“评论”两点,评论可以从多方面进行,但一篇评论中心观点只能有一个。在写作手法上要注意两点:一是点面结合;二是观点与材料的统一。点面结合就是要对你所评论的电影先做一个总体介绍,如导演、主要演员、主要情节等,这是“面”的介绍。然后结合某一情节,或某一段对话、某一个场面、某一细节、某一事物作具体分析,这是“点”的评论。观点和材料的统一就是要树立明确的观点,然后引用电影中的具体情节加以分析。我们中学阶段的影评写作大多是指导性写作(guidedwriting),即根据所给内容材料进行写作。通常要包括四步:1.给出影片的基本信息;2.对情节进行简要概括;3.给出对影片的观点,包括好的方面和不好的方面;4.给出自己的结论和评价。1.对影片的概述①Thefilm...directedby...isastoryabout...②Thefilm...issetin...③Thefilmisalove(romantic/moving)story.2.对影片的评价④Thisisaverytouchingfilm,amustsee.⑤Myfavouritepartofthefilmis...⑥Judgingfromthewildclappingandcheersthatfilledthecinema,everybodyagreedthatitwasindeedthebestfilmoftheyear.积“黄金”词句,写高分文章⑦However,manypeoplehavecomplainedthatthefilmistoo...⑧I'mdisappointedwiththefilmbecause...⑨Manyviewershaveexpressedgreatdissatisfactionwiththemovie.⑩Evenwiththesesmallproblems,thefilmisstillagreatone,andIreallyenjoyit!⑪Personally,Ithinktheadvantagescarrymoreweightthanthedisadvantages.[三步写作规范]根据下面提示写一篇影评。片名(name)《外星人》(E.T.—theExtraTerrestrial)导演(director)史蒂文·斯皮尔伯格(StevenSpielberg)(美国)主演(starring)HenryThomas(Elliott,aboy)剧情梗概(mainidea)外星人(E.T.)被同伴误留在地球上,Elliott把它秘密留在家里躲避他的妈妈和政府的搜查。E.T.和Elliott成为好朋友,分享痛苦与欢乐,最后Elliott和他的兄弟姐妹冒险送E.T.返回它的星球。评价(comment)美丽而感人;友谊和爱是人生最重要的。注意:1.影评须包括以上表格要点,不要逐条翻译;2.词数100左右,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。第一步:搜索词汇1.经典之作______2.错误地__________3.冒险_________________4.感人的________classicmistakenlygoonanadventuretouching第二步:由词造句1.它讲述的是一个故事:一个外星人E.T.被它的同伴误留在地球上,想返回自己的星球。①Itisaboutastory.AnalienE.T.ontheEarthbyitscompanions.Itwantstogobacktoitsownplanet.ismistakenlyleft②ItisaboutastorythatanalienE.T.,____________________ontheEarthbyitscompanions,wantstogobacktoitsownplanet.③ItisaboutastorythatanalienE.T.,______________ontheEarthbyitscompanions,wantstogobacktoitsownplanet.whoismistakenlyleftmistakenlyleft2.一个叫Elliott,由HenryThomas扮演的男孩,找到它并把它藏在家里,保护E.T.躲避他的妈妈和政府的搜查。①Aboy.HefindsitandhidesitinhisownroomtoprotectE.T.frombeingsearchedbyhismotherandthegovernment.calledElliottisactedbyHenryThomas②Aboy,,findsitandhidesitinhisownroomtoprotectE.T.frombeingsearchedbyhismotherandthegovernment.③Aboy,findsitandhidesitinhisownroomtoprotectE.T.frombeingsearchedbyhismotherandthegovernment.whoiscalledElliottandactedbyHenryThomascalledElliottandactedbyHenryThomas3.他们成为好朋友,很亲密并彼此分享悲伤和快乐。①Theybecamegoodfriends.They___________eachother.②Theybecamegoodfriendsandaretheysharesadnessandjoywitheachother.③Theybecamegoodfriends,theysharesadnessandjoywitheachother.arecloseandsharesadnessandjoywithsoclosethatwhoaresoclosethat第三步:连句成篇E.T.—theExtraTerrestrialisStevenSpielberg'sclassicforbothchildrenandadults.ItisaboutastorythatanalienE.T.,mistakenlyleftontheEarthbyitscompanions,wantstogobacktoitsownplanet.AboycalledElliottandactedbyHenryThomas,findsitandhidesitinhisownroomtoprotectE.T.frombeingsearchedbyhismotherandthegovernment.Theybecamegoodfriends,whoaresoclosethattheysharesadnessandjoywitheachother.Atlast,Elliottandhissiblingsgoonanadventure,managingtohelpE.T.findawaybacktoitshomeplanet.Thefilmisbeautifulandtouching.Itshowsusthatfriendshipandlovearethemostimportantthingsinlife.
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